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Brothers: Chapter 10 - Legend ( End of Act 1)
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I will try one more chapter tomorrow but no guarantees. My exam begins next week. I will immediately get back to writing the story after the exam. I hope that you guys can continue to watch this spot and enjoy reading when I release the next chapters next week.
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:S our baby... Still, bout the story....A FREAKING AWSM ONE. Atlast a competetor. It was gettign rather dull b4 i broke for the exams, you know. I will be posting my story tomorrow.
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Yea..I hold my work very dear to me..it is very precious to me. Anyways..chapter 5 is up..happy reading.
Chapter 5 - The Dawn of War
"NOOOO!!"Stronghoof roared as he saw his chieftain collapse onto the deck. Kicking his current opponent on the face, he swiftly used the blunt edge of his axe to shove the stunned naga warrior off the ship onto the jagged rocks below.
Rushing at the naga that had struck Bradwarden, he raised his battleaxe high in the air and brought it down onto the back of the naga that was busy barking orders at the other naga. This was surely their leader. The gargantuan naga warrior was twice Stronghoof's size and as huge as Bradwarden. Dozens of battle scars could be seen on his hide, proving that this naga had lived through many battles before.
CRACK
The edge of Stronghoof's axe had chipped off. The naga merely grunted and turned around to face his adversary. Stronghoof was dwarfed by the giant. Swinging its mighty trident of huge proportions, it started an offensive on Stronghoof.
Swinging hard left and right to block the naga's blows, Stronghoof began to tire. This can't be...I won't die like this...not by a foul beast like this...
Without any warning whatsoever, the naga warrior stabbed at Stronghoof's unguarded midsection. It punctured his stomach and his vital fluids started spilling out from the gaping hole.
"AARGH!!!! " he staggered, the world swaying, threatening to black out any second. Death was imminent, it was a question of 'when', not 'if'. Summoning up his remaining energy, he picked up his battle axe.
The naga grinned at him. This young centaur would not be a total waste of time after all. Slardar really loved a worthy opponent. Those weak night elves that he fought so frequently were so boring.
Roaring, Stronghoof charged. "TODAY, YOU DIE LIZARD!!! LONG LIVE BRADWARDEN! LONG LIVE CENTAURS!!!" Gaining speed, he galloped at the naga with his axe raised. He would die with pride knowing he tried his best and died protecting his brothers.
Swinging his axe, he aimed at the neck of the naga, hoping to decapitate it. Sneering, it blocked the blow with its trident. That second, it realised it had underestimated the centaur. The trident snapped and Stronghoof bashed his face.
Stronghoof continued swinging and hacking at the naga. Black blood was pouring out of the wounds Stronghoof had inflicted on it.
Suddenly, Stronghoof felt a strong arm grab hold of him. Closing his eyes, he knew it would be over soon, he smiled knowing he had done what he could. Slardar mantained his vice-like grip on the oddly calm centaur. With the might of a god, he swung Stronghoof at a jagged cliff. The resounding crack brought a smile of satisfaction to Slardar's face.
Bradwarden saw the entire battle unfold in front of him but he couldn't do anything to help his brother but was totally immobilized by the shock of the bash.
A tear trickled down his cheek. "You will not die in vain, Stronghoof."
When Bradwarden rose, a red fog clouded his vision. The pain of losing his comrade was too much to bear. There was only vengeance.
Slowly, he walked to the naga, holding his axe firmly.
Turning, Slardar wiped spittle from the corner of his maw and picked up what was left of his trident.
They stood immobile for a few seconds, squaring each other up, each daring the other to make the first move.
Slardar made a sudden strike, jabbing hard at Bradwarden, hoping to impale him. Bradwarden kicked the trident aside and pounced on the surprised naga. Swinging hard, he hacked at the deck around the naga.
"Foolish centaur, your strength is impressive but your skill at your weapon is laughable." the naga growled.
"It is you who is the fool," smiled Bradwarden.
Pouring all his energy into a singe blow, Bradwarden used his ultimate technique that never left opponents alive when he was done. With the force of a meteor, his axe came down. The axe cut right through the startled naga, from the shoulder to its tail. The force of the blow was so strong it splintered the deck below and caused tremors to rock the ship.
The part of the deck that Bradwarden had hacked away earlier shattered. The body of the naga dropped onto its comrades below that were in the midst of battle.
Bradwarden jumped down into the hole and crushed the body of the naga leader. The force of his fall blasted a few naga warriors away, stunning them. Bradwarden charged at the remaining naga, swinging at them and cleaving many of them instantly.
After he was done with them, Bradwarden leaped back up onto the deck. Glancing around, his eyes finally found his target. The giant sea monster was destroying the remainder of the fleet.
Bradwarden smiled. He had a sea monster to slay. Bradwarden charged.
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Northrend
Abbadon stood with his closest friend and fellow general, Kel Thuzad the lich. Both of them stood atop a mound of earth watching their army of 3000 march slowly to their destination. There were ghouls, abominations, meat wagons and skeleton warriors. It would be a glorious battle.
They had a fort to destroy and it would fall to the might of Northrend. After this, no one would dare oppose the Scourge, no one.
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Magina trudged through the snow with Kardel as they slowly made their way to Mount Hyjal.
So far, their trip had been pretty uneventful apart from the occational group of kobolds that they came across. Kobolds. Small barbaric creatures that often hunted in small packs, they were no better than the undead. Though, they were easy prey to Kardel's rifle and Magina's moonblades.
"How much further?" Magina panted..his breath fogging.
"We are close, aye, I saw one of em Sentinel outposts a mile away." Kardel's teeth chattered from the cold.
"Well, do you think they will greet us warmly?" asked Magina, his brow furrowed.
"Perhaps, perhaps not, I heard that the Sentinel's defences are very tight and the blasted canons will fire at any bloody thin they see so its best we proceed with caution," grumbled Kardel.
"Well then, lets go and face whatever they have to throw at us," Magina smiled.
"Indeed."
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Cool dude, try to ignore ur exams, LoL.....
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Kodiwolf's roar!!
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Yeah, do give it up for us... LOL! Naw man, we playin... Chill, take your time, knowing that we wait eagerly for you to return...
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@Sigokill: Gimme a mystic staff to finish my exams with and I will continue with the story.
@SplatBoy: Don't worry, the exam starts on monday and ends on thursday. Only a few days...
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Hehe, I can give perseverance only.
*Uhh, can't wait til thursday, too curious*
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n1 story. Tell me wether u like my story also.
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imba story perfect length
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off topic: yay my 50th post :P
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Congratulations ^^. Try not to double post next time though..the edit button is there for a reason
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Chapter 6 - Strategy
They said that the few hours before the real battle begins is the hardest obstacle for even the mightiest of warriors.
They were right.
Sven, the sentinel champion that had been sent to aid in the defense of Natharion was asleep.
He was having a nightmare. This nightmare had occured repeatedly ever since he and his battalion reached the fort...
Men were falling from the eastern and western flank, the line of defense that they had put up was finally crumbling as they continuously fought off the onslaught of the scourge.
Dead in the middle of the mass of raging ghouls was a warrior.
A warrior like no other, with silver shoulder length hair and an ice cold stare, he seemed oblivios to the battle that was taking place around him.
His wandering eyes found what he was looking for, a red skinned swordsman who was cleaving opponents apart like butter.
With a deadly calmness, he rode his horse up to the warrior and unsheathed his sword. A sword like no other, it glinted maliciously and had a frosty blue glow that emmnated from the sword itself. The red orc did not even know his end was near.
"No!"
Sven awoke with a start.
Beads of sweat were trickling down his face and his neck. "It's just a dream, it is just a nightmare," he assured himself quietly.
Suddenly, there was a sharp rap on the door.
The rouge knight donned his battle armor called out "Enter."
At the sight of the soldier standing in front of him, Sven slumped back onto his bed.
The red skinned swordsman looked a Sven " Sir, are you alright? I am Yurnero, colonel of the fort."
Regaining his composure, Sven stared at the swordsman and replied "Colonel Yurnero, you now must report to me and me only. The scourge will be on us by today, we have to work out a proper strategy to defend this fort for as long as we can."
"Yes sir, follow me to the planning room. We have set up the scenario."
"I'll be there in a second..give me ten minutes."
Sitting back down on the bed, he pulled out a huge and heavy halberd. It was well polished and had deadly spikes running up along the edges. He admired it and recalled the battles he had been in.
Standing up, he strode out of his quarters and headed to the planning room down the hallway.
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A rock the size of an ox came rolling through the air at Magina.
Hurling himself sideways, he dodged the huge projectile that slammed into the ground, leveling a few trees.
"The sentinels really pack some big firepower aye," Kardel yelled, firing repeatedly at another rock that was heading at Magina.
At the seventh shot, the rock shattered, showering Magina with gravel.
"Are ye allryte?" Kardel laughed.
"I'm okay..you couldn't have destroyed it earlier?" he was a bit shaken.
Kardel smiled.
A whistling sound alerted them of another rock heading their way. While Kardel jumped out of the way and rolled on the dirt, Magina jumped on the rock.
More rocks were flung at him. Using his sharp reflexes and energy sight, he could anticipate the rock before it even came. Slowly, hopping on the rocks, he advanced to the outpost. There was a small barracks and it was guarded by a big tower-like tree that was hurling the rocks with great speed and force.
Jumping from boulder to boulder, he jumped at the tree and started hacking at one of its woody arms. It was the only way to disable it.
The creature stopped throwing the boulders and started swiping around, attempting to get a hold on Magina and hurl him to his doom.
Swiftly slashing and hacking, Magina did not notice the arrow that was flying swiftly at his head.
BANG
The arrow snapped in half and fell harmlessly aside. Magina turned back for a second.
Kardel smiled from below and yelled "I got your back."
Finally, he cut through. The tree groaned in pain as its branchlike arm fell off. Magina knew it would not do any permenant damage to the tree as being a plant, it could regenerate.
Jumping down, Magina was surprised when he faced not less than twenty arrows pointed at his face.
Kardel had been caught too and was struggling "Get yer filthy hands off me."
"Who are you and what to you want," came a sweet yet firm voice from Magina's right.
He glanced to his right and was stunned to see an elegant and beautiful night elf priestess. Moonlight seemed to radiate from her face as she stared at him.
"You do not seem like the undead, in fact, you remind me a lot of those demon hunters. And your friend over there, he's a hill dwarf, a talented one at that," She nodded at Kardel's rifle.
"I am Magina and my friend here is Kardel. We come to join the sentinel. "
The priestess smiled, she liked the look of him.
"Oh and your tree is hurt," Magina pointed at the giant tree.
"It's okay..It will grow back," the priestess said.
"I knew that."
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Last edited by Amplirage on Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:32 pm; edited 1 time in total
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PLz continue man!
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magina winked? hes got the blindfold...
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