The Brothers Trilogy - Act 2 - Chapter 12 - A Summoning

Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 1:14 pm

read the whole act one and totally kick ass

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please continue everything and add about something about the other heroes
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 3:24 pm

Will do, glad you enjoyed it, w00t for page 6 ^^
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 4:49 pm

Suggestion: Work in yurnero's death from Furion's perspective, viewing the battle through ult orb.
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 4:50 pm

nice story you have here! keep up the good work and i love ya story!

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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:17 pm

wow!
i just red the whole act, sooooooo awesome man!
cant wait to the next act, my fav part is magina's story i hope u continue it..

and also what happened to bradwarden?
lots of questions i cant wait for another act to solve them

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 3:23 am

revive
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 3:29 am

revive x2
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 4:26 am

incredibly nice man!!!!interesting story...
keep it on Amlirage
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:09 pm

hmm...why is it ended?i think its not ended like this.....
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:12 pm

Alright alright I've been really busy but I've cooked up the entire thing in my head already. Be prepared for another act in The Brother's Trilogy(nice name eh, gonna change it).
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:17 pm

lol nice cant wait for it!

btw, nice new sig/avatar changes
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:39 pm

Yeah well, I like your avatar too. And by the way, next chapter will most probably be out tomorrow if i have the time( =[ won't be at home from 6am-6pm).

Oh yeah, and 940108, please try not to doublepost. The edit button is there for a reason.
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 11:24 am

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Act 2 - The Elders


Chapter 11 - Soul Eclipse


"No"

"I WILL join them, brother," Terrorblade flexed his fingers threateningly. Small bolts of energy burst forth from them, crackling menacingly.

"They are a vile race, feeding off life and thriving on evil. Heck, they are not even from this world! How can you-" Magina was cut short as he jumped to the right, narrowly evading a bolt of crackling green energy.

Magina and Terrorblade were standing facing each other in a narrow rocky pass tha led out from the small village they lived in. Lightning played across the sky, flashing as the rain came down in unforgiving torrents.

Each flash of lightning illuminated the sickly green landscape around the two. Though a resistance had already been formed to stand up against the most monstrous threat Azeroth had ever seen, the Burning Legion continued on relentlessly, never stopping for more than a day, they had already wiped out all life in almost half of Azeroth.

The village that the twins lived in since they were young was among those that were to be destroyed next by the Legion..

In another two days the Legion would be at their throats.

Lots of people had already fled or joined the Resistance. Magina and his family were one of the last left in the empty village.

"Resistance is futile. You are only prolonging the inevitable. The Legion Will conquer the world. Why fight when we can join..and live!" Terrorblade spat, eyes gleaming manically. "Bah, you would never understand."


Magina hung his head and remembered how it was before. His brother had never had this insane urge for power and had always stood together, whether it be fighting bullies or chopping firewood.

Then, Magina realised. His brother he knew was long dead. All that was left was an insane shadow of his personality. He would have to kill him..

Looking up with tears in his eyes, Magina stared long and hard into the eyes of his brother. They were so filled with hate, evil, envy, a raw thirst for power.

"You have to end this madness Brother!" Magina pleaded.

"Madness!Madness!!!?" Terrorblade laughed, and laughed long and hard.

Suddenly, he hurled a fireball at his brother.

The fireball was too fast for Magina to evade. It made contact with him straight in the chest.

The impact of the blast sent Magina sprawling back.

"Nothing will stop me! Not even You!" roared Terrorblade. As he raised his hand and turned to leave, thick ropes of pure magic bound themselves around Magina's limbs, rendering him immobile.

The entire scene started to blur and warp. A kaledeiscope of dizzying colors and lights started swirling around at a maddening pace, accelerating.

Suddenly, it stopped swirling and formed a clear image once more.

Magina was once more facing his brother. Squaring off each other, they circled like lions ready to pounce if their opponent faltered even the slightest.

Both of them looked older now, Magina had grown more muscular and was strongly built. He had his blindfold on and was holding his signature curved moonblades. His hair was long and his eyes danced with energy and power.

Terrorblade's transformation had been far more drastic than Magina. Huge leathery wings now protruded from his shoulders and foot-long ebony horns jutted out from his forehead. His entire body was tatooed with sickly glowing green demonic words of power.

Terrorblade was truly a creature of the Legion now.

Oblivious to the raging fight around them, they continued circling.

Suddenly, they pounced at the same time.

As they were about to make contact, the scene went white.



Magine started. His vision refocused to see the entire Alliance Council looking oddly at him.

"Are you alright, Lord Magina?," Purist Thunderwrath looked at him, clearly concerned.

"Um yeah, I mean, Yes, I am fine Lord Thunderwrath. I have been dwelling in the memmories of the past a lot of late. Now, what were we talking about?" Magina asked, composing himself back into his usual self.

"If you say so, Lord Magina, if you say so.." Purist's voice trailed off, clearly unconvinced.

A few months had already passed since the battle at Natharion.

Magina's ascent into the higher echleons of the Alliance had been swift. His power, thirst for knowledge, talent and smoothness had elevated him to his current post. A master mage in the council. His good looks also didn't hurt.

Though his title was a Master Mage, Magina was not much of a mage after all. In fact his real title was the Anti-Mage. His magics revolved around battling other kinds of magic and destroying them. Mainly those that were practiced by ordinary mages and necromancers, countering and using them against the casters. This was what made Magina such a great asset to the Sentinel Alliance.

That of course, did not mean that Magina was any less accomplished in the other magic arts. In fact, he was amazingly adept at normal spellcasting and also knew a bit on necromancy.

Still, when times were dire, he still reverted back to his trusty moonblades which had never failed to cut a swath through the enemy lines and destroy all in its path.

The problem with Magina of late was his learnings were slowing down, there was little else to learn and he hated that very fact. His powers were maxed and he found even if he tried, he could no longer strengthen his powers.

This also had given an excuse to some of the other jealous council members to question his authority and suggest they got someone new to replace him.

Even now, he could see the looks of triumph on their wicked faces.

"Well, we asked you if you think the Scourge is really trying to bring back the Burning Legion and their ruthless leader, Sargeras." Purist paused to think."And how they would accomplish such a feat."

"The only way they can do it is to Summon one of the Higher Demons. Only a Higher Demon will be able to create a portal big enough for more of their kind to come through and pass the barrier between our worlds. It only takes one. Though, so far my scouts have reported that the Scourge's attempts have failed so far, they might-" Magina suddenly stopped.

His vision revealed an anomaly. The fabrics of spacetime and magic leylines were suddenly warping and bending out of shape.

The other magi in the council also felt it. They looked up and stared blankly at each other.

Furion stood up and addressed the council. "As some of you may have noticed, something ..powerful briefly affected the magic in our world." Furion gazed around at his fellow council members.

"The Scourge have suceeded. Dramis is here."
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:46 pm

first to comment after for the new part :P
its nice too keep it on
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 2:07 pm

Thank you. Yes, I will try to continue for as long as possible. I'm planning to close this story after another 20 chapters or so. After I finish act 3.
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