Dota School Rumble 2?

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 9:56 pm

GJ guys, looks like it'll better than the first.
Man, I can't stop reading....
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stinky!!

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 4:36 am

Gondar was not the brightest of students, moreover, he was too damn lazy to attend classes. All that’s in his mind is to make a fortune and tracking girls. Of course, dressing up and going to school just to get a few bucks is something he could start with. Always staying in his favorite spot at the school grounds lying under the shade of a huge tree, Gondar awaits his next target, more likely his next interest.

Suddenly, the huge tree spoke, “WTF is that smell? Are you f%^&ing joking me? FTW do you think you’re doing bringing your stinky ass here?”

Gondar just almost peeed on his pants. “Wow there, you scared me, I never thought you’d be here, Roofy” Gondar said

“Well, why wouldn’t I be here? There’s so much to see, so much to live by, I could just sit here and watch them all day.” “But then again, some stinky person here just ruined my day.” Roofy said

“Whoa, well aren’t you a pervert, haha, too bad, you’re a plant.” “FYI, I’m not the one who’s stinking so badly” Gondar said as he slowly turned his head to smell his armpit.
“Nope, not me at all.” Gondar said.

Suddenly, someone spoke, with an eerie voice.
“How dare you disturb me in my sleep, I came here first and I don’t need someone or some tree to tell me that I need a shower, I’m already dead you fools.”

“What the hell?” “This day is getting more bizarre than I would’ve wanted.” Gondar said

Then arose from the ground, a corpse, a living dead. Worms can be seen in the holes of his body, flies immediately swarmed him as he came to light. “I am Dirge, the Undying” Dirge said

“What a horrific sight you are, complete with perfume and accessories.” “Oooh, I gotta get out of here, and BTW, why are you even in the school ground’s ground?” “Why are you here, better get transferred to the cemetery?” Gondar said

“Well if not some shitty being, mistook my body as fertilizer, I wouldn’t even be here.” Dirge said

“Oh my, you terribly stink, I should’ve scouted the area first before I laid my roots here, SAYONARA STINKY“ Roofy said, as he uprooted and left, looking for another good place to rest.

“Yeah, you win, I wouldn’t even think of fighting you, Smell is something I can’t dodge or hide from, what’s worst is you’ll be scaring the ladies away with your disgusting looks and you’re god forsaken smell.” Gondar said, as he ran to the direction Roofy went.

“I can’t blame you beings” Dirge said, when he was about to bury himself again to the ground, something came up.

“Oh my goodness, for heaven’s sake” “I can’t breathe, this is too much” BLOOOOG!!!
(Pudge came by, just to drop off a stink bomb, before he goes back to the kitchen)

does my story stink or what?



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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 4:57 am

@ trenchtown lol very much so

Lol Tiny story is same as last time. Very funny. Ima continue the Terrorblade SAGA!
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The next day at school there was one thing on everyones mind.

Terrorblade.

All who had witnessed his strength in the fight against the seemingly invincible giant, trembled at the thought of his power. The ones who saw him survive the leap from the 3rd story window, were amazed at his agility. Even those who had never heard of him before or witnessed his amazing feats, had surely heard of him by now. He was the talk of the school. The guys didn't want to be anywhere near him, and the girls wanted to be anywhere he was. It didn't matter that he was evil. Even Rylai Crestfall, a maiden of the purest of heart had shown interest in him. This, of course made Terrorblades brother Magina jealous. Magina had liked her for years. He always tried to impress her. After his many attempts of flattering her unsuccessfully, his brother came along and stole her heart in one fell swoop. He seemed to be the luckier of the two. This made Magina question being good. Was it all worth it? To live in shame and loneliness was surely not worth being good. He tried so hard to fit in, to get girls, to be a tough guy. Yet it all failed horrible because he wasn't willing to sacrifice another, or let someone be hurt. He asked himself this question all the time. Yet somehow, in the end, he knew his kind heart and good intentions would pay off. Maybe not now but someday. His brother may have all the popularity and power now, but Magina knew someday he would be stronger, and a powerful leader.

He knew it.
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The lich stepped closer. He looked at Terrorblade long and hard.

"Yes, you have great potential. You will be a powerful warrior."

Terrorblade smiled coldly. He liked this lich already. He seemed evil, yet he assured Terrorblade of his success and power. He made him confident. He felt invincible. The lich smiled, realizing Terrorblades self-esteem falsely rising.

A cocky warrior will never back down, and will fight to the death for me The lich was very intelligent, he knew how to inspire bravery and a false feeling of power in his recruits. He could twist their mind, mold their spirit, and blacken their heart to pure hatred. He knew how to do his job.

Terrorblade broke the long silence that had made him slightly nervous." When will you start training me?"

"Right now." Without a second thought the lich blasted Terrorblade with a strong frost nova. The ice engulfed him for a moment, and left his skin freezing. He felt somewhat weakened. However he was not discouraged, he let the lich blast shards of ice at him as he made his way towards his opponent. As he got closer he felt death approaching. He wanted to yell to the lich to stop, he started to say the words, but nothing came from his mouth. He knew what he had to do. As a last attempt at an attack, he jumped at the lich, he started severing the liches soul. He then transferred the energy between them with the last of his energy, and suddenly felt strong again. He looked at his teacher, expecting a face of shock. Yet he saw only a grin. A twisted evil grin that melted his heart, and rendered him motionless.

"You fought very well, i thought you were unworthy for a moment, but you proved me wrong. Although you still have much to learn"

" Yes master" Terrorblade tried out the words. They fit perfectly. He knew he was going to get stronger. It drove him crazy at the thought of gaining more and more power. He would gain it all costs. No one was going to stop him.

Thats all for now. I'll write more after someone else posts a piece.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 7:40 am

Slardar: NO i quit im clean now .... I was hust saying he could make the team .... they could use him as the ball

lol
I liked tiny's story max. I am conc on my own stry for now, so i willadd to this later.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 8:26 pm

Ooh. Its not a school rumble till flame seeker has posted. Btw is my story good?
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 9:07 pm

lol don't worry, your story is great

just keep thinking and writing
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:59 pm

kk. What is the red flame next to this topic mean?
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:34 am

I just realised what this whole topic meant, lol.
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:37 pm

Lol Fan Fiction is dead. Where art thou Razorfane? Where art thou flameseeker? Where art thou burnside?
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Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 11:08 am

I will not let this die! I've been working on my Axe story for the past few days. And now that it is over, I shall continue from where I left off.

And let me clarify now that Kael goes to an exclusive magic school for upstanding young mages.
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Day 2

Kael had gone home the previous day early to prepare for this one. He was expecting to wake up to a nice sunny morning but alas, the same scene greeted him, the rain was still pouring as if there was no tomorrow but the winds however, were more calm.

Strange weather we're having, can't believe that this isn't considered a storm, thought Kael.

Kael put on his white flowing robe with embroidered patterns all over it. One might think that he got it from another world but truth be told, it was a memento of his father, Anasterian Sunstrider who died when Kael was just an infant.

He had no recollection of his father but his mother told him that his father would want him to have his robe. He remembered when his mother told him about his father, about how great a mage he was.

He was very talented and always seemed to know the perfect spell for every occasion. Most problems, he could end with one spell as to save on his Mana Energies despite that he had a seemingly endless well of Mana.

Though he was quite the mage in his prime, he died a tragic death and Kael was sure that he would never forget the story of how his father died...

"Our village is constantly pillaged by the orcs yet what can we do against their brute strength and tactical movements?" Asked the village elder.

"I shall stand up against them, alone if need be. Those orcs have taken away too much of our resources. It is time to make a stand. Now, who among you is with me?" Boldly asked Anasterian.

There was a deafening silence; apparently, no one was willing, they were too afraid.

"Then I shall face them alone" said Anasterian with a hint of sadness at the response of the villagers.

It was during the next morning when the orcs would strike, and he was ready for them.

First, he put up a barrier that would hinder the orcs' movement on their village. However, they would not be stopped by this as they slashed the barrier impeding their progress with their battle axes until Anasterian was forced to break it to save his mana energies.

So now, he stood at one of the guard towers overlooking the plains where the orcs were moving across. He thought for a short while, then started speaking some incomprehensible words from the ever familiar language of magic, then he summoned forth a great fire, incinerating all the orcs foolish enough to make contact with it.

From the tower, he was an impregnable wall of defense. He defeated orc after orc with his devastating spells. Though he did not expect the events that were about to unfold.

Krum Stormbrad, the leader of the orcs at the time, climbed up the tower walls from behind. Anasterian did not notice the great battle axe that fell upon him which wounded him gravely and would ultimately lead to his untimely death. However, this would inspire the villagers to fight for their village as Anasterian did.

It was at that time after his mother told him of his father's story that Kael would set his dream, his ultimate goal of being the greatest Magus in the History of Azeroth. And he would offer all of it to his deceased father, whom he knew was watching him from the heavens above.

Watch me father, I will avenge you one day and eventually become the greatest the world has ever known, thought Kael as he set his goal.

His train of thought was interrupted by a bolt of lightning and then he was back in his place, alone once again for he had moved out of his home a long time ago. On occasion, he would think of his family, especially his mother who took care of him and his siblings alone.

"I will become the greatest, and this is the first step towards it!" Exclaimed Kael as he closed the door and went onwards to school.

*I will put part 2 of Day 2 maybe a little later. I'm still conceptualizing.
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uhmm..

Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 11:42 am

i'll think of something..

although i don't have the time..

just made my first chapter about 30 mins, but now i'm reeling into something different..


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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 4:37 am

dum de dum. Where are el stories
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Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:48 am

Zomg Fan fic is dead.Where art thou Razorfane? Where art thou flameseeker? Where art thou burnside?
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Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 9:02 am

Day 2, part 2

Kael looked skywards and saw that this rain would not end soon it would seem. He went back in his house and stood at an open space he used for practicing rituals and basic magics.

He decided to practice the new magic he learned the other day. He pulled out a scroll from his bag, set it afloat in front of him, and started moving his hand as if making a seal then he pressed his hand onto the scroll.

There was a circle of azure light that surrounded Kael which got brighter and brighter every passing moment. And when azure became white, the circle, along with Kael disappeared.

Kael found himself on the floor in the classroom. He looked around and saw his classmates staring at him as if he had committed some sort of atrocious act.

There was an awkward silence while Kael walked towards his chair and sat down.

Good, I was able to make the scroll of Town Portal work well though I need to work on my landing Kael thought.

The bell rang and everyone sat down, ignoring what had just transpired...

At the end of that class, professor Nortrom approached Kael...

"Kael, come with me for a while, I want to show you something." Prof. Nortrom said

Kael just followed him and they eventually ended up in the school auditorium.

"Kael, I know you used a Scroll of Town Portal a while back in class," Prof Nortrom started, "It's not like it's bad or anything but Kael, I would like to teach you what to watch out for when using one to avoid any accidents. What you were able to do was pretty good already save for your landing. But I want to teach you so that you would not end up like Pugna because of that incident."

"What incident sir?" Kael asked.

"It was a few years back, Pugna decided to practice using Scrolls of Town Portal. All he wanted to do was to go from the school back to his home but it ended in disaster; He was never seen or heard from again and I want to avoid anything like that again."

"So, what is the appropriate way to use scrolls?"

"Ah, that is what I wanted to show you..."
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Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 6:49 pm

Whew! This forum is not dead yet lol. Keep the stories coming you guys
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