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tiberiumlord

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When fates collide

Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2008 5:00 am

This is my second post in this forum. I hope I can do well.
Here we go...

It was a dark night in the forest.
Shendalazre was tracking the phantom.
Two nights ago, there was a report of a sort of phantom terrorizing this very area.
Shendalazre was tracking the assassin.
Once she had heard this news, she knew who would be the one to cause this trouble.
Shendalazre was tracking the traitor.
It was most likely her, her sister... a great rage blossomed in Shendalazre's chest. She let out a howl of rage. Animals everywhere in the forest scattered in terror.
Shendalazre was tracking her sister!

It was hot and sandy. Kardel Sharpeye the dwarven sniper did not like it, but he had no time to worry about that right now. Right now, he was on the run. Earlier that day, he happened to step into this desert and disturb it's inhabitant. That is, a giant hairy scorpion creature. He did not know what it could do to him, but he knew that one prick of its stinger (It was dripping thick, green venom) and he'd go as limp as a fish out of water. As Kardel ran as fast as his tiny feet could carry him, a large tidal wave of sand followed. "That darned creature goes faster by underground travel," he said. However, it was too late to notice and dodge a line of large spikes that erupted under him. Kardel flew high into the air. Before he fell to the ground, he thought "Good bye, cruel world."
When he woke up, it was not the cruel world he thought he'd be seeing. He was under a large rocky overhang, and nearby was a Bristleback sniffing out food with its large snout. Once it saw him, it ran over to check on his wounds. "Ouch! Will you take it easy, please," he nearly screamed. The wounds were grievous, there were three gaping holes in his chest and right leg. But it was not necessarily how the wounds looked that alarmed him, but how they were covered with a yellow substance which was hard and flaky. The Bristleback snorted and pointed towards its nose, then Kardel's wounds. "Don't tell me you've used your SNOT to seal my wounds!" The Bristleback could only manage a sheepish snort. It walked further under the overhang for a quick nap.
Kardel hobbled his way out into the hot desert sun. It was a decision he'd regret. The same scorpion abruptly burst from the sand in front of him! Quickly drawing out his gun, the sniper loaded it and shot three rounds at the creature. Two of them landed in its chest, and the other missed, but that wasn't enough to stop it. The scorpion lunged at him, and Kardel was forced to beat it off with the butt of his gun. However, it still managed to pin him to the ground with its front legs. Raising the deadly stinger, the scorpion took aim, and let fly. The good thing about being a sniper is that you have quick reflexes. Kardel quickly twitched his head to one side and then to the other, but when the scorpion aimed the sting at his neck, he was forced to stop the stinger with his hand. Great pain immediately broke upon the sniper when the tip went straight through his hand and started to inject the deadly venom into his body. Weakened, the dwarven sniper was forced to let go and could only watch as the stinger came down one more time...

I wish I could continue, but my parents want me to get off. I'll continue if the results of the poll are uber positive. Cool

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Jaster Mereel

First Blood Posts: 3 Joined: 23 Jan 2008 817 gold

Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:32 am

finish this!

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Mortal Tree

Monster Kill Posts: 315 Joined: 31 Oct 2007 8256 gold

Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:38 am

Dude you have to finish this you hardly mentioned vengy and PA!
Im hooked!
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Mage

Dominating Posts: 100 Joined: 14 Jan 2008 2553 gold

Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:42 am

hehe, not bad... how bout the ending now...
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