When fates collide

When fates collide

Posted on Thu Apr 03, 2008 5:00 am

This is my second post in this forum. I hope I can do well.
Here we go...

-Shadowdeath Forest-

It was a dark night in the forest.
Shendalazre was tracking the phantom.
Two nights ago, there was a report of a sort of phantom terrorizing this very area.
Shendalazre was tracking the assassin.
Once she had heard this news, she knew who would be the one to cause this trouble.
Shendalazre was tracking the traitor.
It was most likely her, her sister... a great rage blossomed in Shendalazre's chest. She let out a howl of rage. Animals everywhere in the forest scattered in terror.
Shendalazre was tracking her sister!

-Quicksand Desert

It was hot and sandy. Kardel Sharpeye the dwarven sniper did not like it, but he had no time to worry about that right now. Right now, he was on the run. Earlier that day, he happened to step into this desert and disturb it's inhabitant. That is, a giant hairy scorpion creature. He did not know what it could do to him, but he knew that one prick of its stinger (It was dripping thick, green venom) and he'd go as limp as a fish out of water. As Kardel ran as fast as his tiny feet could carry him, a large tidal wave of sand followed. "That darned creature goes faster by underground travel," he said. However, it was too late to notice and dodge a line of large spikes that erupted under him. Kardel flew high into the air. Before he fell to the ground, he thought "Good bye, cruel world."
When he woke up, it was not the cruel world he thought he'd be seeing. He was under a large rocky overhang, and nearby was a Bristleback sniffing out food with its large snout. Once it saw him, it ran over to check on his wounds. "Ouch! Will you take it easy, please," he nearly screamed. The wounds were grievous, there were three gaping holes in his chest and right leg. But it was not necessarily how the wounds looked that alarmed him, but how they were covered with a yellow substance which was hard and flaky. The Bristleback snorted and pointed towards its nose, then Kardel's wounds. "Don't tell me you've used your SNOT to seal my wounds!" The Bristleback could only manage a sheepish snort. It walked further under the overhang for a quick nap.
Kardel hobbled his way out into the hot desert sun. It was a decision he'd regret. The same scorpion abruptly burst from the sand in front of him! Quickly drawing out his gun, the sniper loaded it and shot three rounds at the creature. Two of them landed in its chest, and the other missed, but that wasn't enough to stop it. The scorpion lunged at him, and Kardel was forced to beat it off with the butt of his gun. However, it still managed to pin him to the ground with its front legs. Raising the deadly stinger, the scorpion took aim, and let fly. The good thing about being a sniper is that you have quick reflexes. Kardel quickly twitched his head to one side and then to the other, but when the scorpion aimed the sting at his neck, he was forced to stop the stinger with his hand. Great pain immediately broke upon the sniper when the tip went straight through his hand and started to inject the deadly venom into his body. Weakened, the dwarven sniper was forced to let go and could only watch as the stinger came down one more time...

I wish I could continue, but my parents want me to get off. I'll continue if the results of the poll are uber positive.

Alright, it's back, and badder than ever!

-Charlatan Bridge-

On the distant but infamous Charlatan Bridge, trouble was brewing. Boush the goblin tinker, Razzil darkbrew and his (drug-influenced) ogre Boom-Boom, and Magina found some of their things missing. In order they lost- A few 5-Jolt batteries, some bottles of Anthromega strain, and a blindfold. Boush had analyzed that the batteries and anthromega strain was stolen for a chemical weapon of some sort, and the blindfold of Magina's was to take them into a trap. Nevertheless, the trio had set out to the bridge, assuming that they'd find the thieves there, and they were correct.
"Hey, that's my blindfold," Magina shouted. His face showed none other than empty eye sockets from his traditional blinding ritual. "No way I'm gonna stop hunting demons without that!"
"well then *HACKHACKCOUGH!*, bring it on," a wizened old warlock said. "I'm personally brought this along for some... amusement. Hehehe *WHHHEEEEZE!*"
If Magina had eyes, Everyone on the Bridge could have seen the hate spurting out of them. The two other thieves had turned out to be: a fat, porky, pudgy butcher who aptly called himself... Pudge, and none other than MAGINA'S Demonically enhanced brother, Terrorblade.
"Brother, I remember how before I left, I threw moontacks into your lovely... crib. Now if you want your blindfold back, join us, the Scourge!"
"LIAR!"
Magina charged foward and blinked in front of his brother but his brother easily put him down with a few, decisive blows.
"Well then *HACK! HACK!* little night elf," the warlock said. "Looks like you broke the deal, and we'll be on our way now. Don't worry, (A strange light suddenly crept into his eyes.) you'll be able to handle the... PAIN!"
Right as he said that, a red orb flew at Magina, but he blinked away and charged at the warlock, and the orb hit Boush instead. Instant and intense pain filled Boush. He writhed on the ground and flew up and down like a puppet. At the same time, he was having the feeling of being cut by thousands of hot knives and having the "cuts" soaked and soaked with the extremely sour Nemol fruit. Not noticing Boush's plight, Razzil, riding on Boom Boom, charged foward to hold Pudge and Terrorblade off of Magina. The warlock suddenly chanted a few strange words and rose his hands. A large section of the bridge was smothered with spirits, and everyone on the bridge but Boush (who was still suffering) was slowed to a near freeze.
"Well well, *COUGHCOUGH!* looks like a little anger problem," the warlock said. "I guess it's time you learn to respect dear uncle Demnok Lannik. Oh the lesson on respect might kill my friends too *HACKHACK COUGH!* but I'll get all the reward... Fuhahaha!"
Lannik snapped his fingers, and the sky above the bridge turned blood-red. A hole as black as midnight grew in the middle of the sky, and out the sky popped a meteor, Plunging straight down at the section where everyone was frozen. Boush couldn't do anything but watch as the meteor landed a direct hit on the section where everyone was frozen. It broke off the section, sending all of them plunging into the Midlands below. The meteor somehow lodged itself into the section of broken bridge, leaving Boush and Lannik on the bridge. As the red orb around Boush faded, he dropped to the ground, too tired to move. The warlock looked down at him and chuckled.
"Meheheheheh... too broken to *WHEEZEHACKCOUGH!* move? I'll leave you here then. Lesale's going to be happy with my discovery... once again the name's Demnok Lannik. I hope you had a good time."
He turned around and started to walk away, but he didn't notice that out of a strange pack that Boush was wearing, an aiming glass was facing him, and he was in the middle of the Cross-hairs.
"I hope you end off early ugly Orc-spawn," he said.
Pushing another button on the straps, Boush activated an arm-like contraption, filled with missiles, and already, one of them was in a collision course with Demnok Lannik.

Sorry to leave you hanging there, but I've got a writer's block. I'll be back!
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Posted on Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:32 am

finish this!
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Posted on Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:38 am

Dude you have to finish this you hardly mentioned vengy and PA!
Im hooked!
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Posted on Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:42 am

hehe, not bad... how bout the ending now...
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Posted on Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:32 pm

RAWR. i was mad when it ended.. :P finish plz!
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Posted on Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:18 pm

nice one

continue whenever you can, as long as you dont piss off your parents

angry parents = computer ban
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Posted on Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:22 pm

pls continue
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Posted on Sat Aug 02, 2008 10:09 pm

Looks like after days of dust-gathering, this sucker is gonna continuing now!
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Posted on Sat Aug 02, 2008 10:51 pm

Not bad . .

but use spacing for clearer reading . .
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