Tale of two lands [Part one]

Tale of two lands [Part one]

Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 5:00 am

Note:
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http://www.thefreedictionary.com/scourge
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/sentinel
Sentinel means : One that keeps guard; a sentry.
[French sentinelle, from Italian sentinella, probably from Old Italian sentina, vigilance, from sentire, to watch,

from Latin sentre, to feel; see sent- in Indo-European roots.]
Scourge means : A source of widespread dreadful affliction and devastation such as that caused by pestilence or

war.
[Middle English, from Anglo-Norman escorge, from Old French escorgier, to whip, from Vulgar Latin *excorrigire :

Latin ex-, intensive pref.; see ex- + Latin corrigia, thong (probably of Celtic origin).]
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Devil : A demonic creature who using his head as good as he using his power.
Demon : A demonic creature that more strong, fast, brutal than Devil but can't think as good as Devil.
"[text]" : means speaking
'[text]' : means thinking
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Chapter one : Prelude
A eon time.
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a Long loong looong loooong looooong ... *wait for 1 minutes* ... time ago,
There is a time where there's only two big land.
where it's a time that elves, humans, dwarfs could have life happily side by side.
where it's a time that undead, demons, devils don't come near to the mortals area.
where it's a time that the world has a balance.


The first land. It is Land of prosperity. At this land, you can eat anykind of fruits, you can play with anykind of

animal, you can sleep in the open without afraid of being killed nor rob, joy everywhere. One that keeps guard; a

sentry.
While at the other land. It is called the land of the death, land of despair. Forest that has no leaves. A meadow

without grass. Poisonus river, fear everywhere. They name their land as Scourge.
The balance was create.
All living being that die will be reanimated into undeads or demons or even devils.
All darkness creature that destroyed will be a source of next new life.


Scourge has source of their power, all living things need source of power.
It is a throne, frozen one.
It is called the frozen throne.
It is a big ice which has a lot magical power.
It is an ice where the ancient of Death is sleep.
It is an ice that absorb all life. It is an ice that spread fear.

While the throne keep all darkness creature "alive" [not alive like human thought],
They have a ruler, a Ruler that has power beyond anything that others can imagine.
A ruler that can use the power of frozen throne to make destruction everywhere.
A ruler who clever enough to do what he want, to know what he want.
They called him The LICH KING (no one knows what his real name is).

While scourge keep spread it's darkness using Frozen Throne, The Sentinel keep their land in save by depending

their source of life.
It is a tree that life from long time ago.
It is a tree, that give all living being source of life.
It is a tree that spread the Aura of joy.
It is a tree that change death into life.
Because of that, the Elves call it, Tree Of Life.

While the tree grow and grow, there is a goddess that protect it.
A goddess that would give her own life, her own eternity, her own life, to make it alive.
To make it stand still.
She is Tree Of life's hand to make this land save.
She is Tree of life's breath that will spread life.
And when she borned. The ancestors name her, the goddess

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Chapter two :
B efore the clash
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Part One:
Scourge
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In the dark castle,
There's a room, big enough to be filled for a ballroom, but dark enough to think that it is a black hole.
In the center of the room, there a little light, glittering light.
The light is created by an ice that clash on and another.
And there's seen a hand near it.
*sound of a big door opened*
A cold tall figure with an ice aura come inside and bow once.
Cold Sound : "You summon me, Master?"
Lich King : "Yes, and what is that, the thing in front of door"
Cold Sound : "It's a ghoul, master. it's ..."
Lich king : "I KNOW IT"S A GHOUL, YOU FOOL. I MEAN WHAT THAT GHOUL DOING IN FRONT OF MY PLACE!"
*The wall is cracking, trembling sound everywhere*
Cold Sound : "It's my finest work, master. A Best Ghoul."
Lich King : "Best ghoul eh?" *mocking sound* "Let me see what it got. COME, LITTLE GHOUL, ATTACK ME"
*The ghoul moving forward with very fast movement*
Cold Sound : "NO, don't attack him!"
*the ghoul keep moving, like being hipnotized by lich king*
Cold Sound : "Please don't kill it, master"
*The ghoul jump*
*but right about a metre from lich king, the ghoul frozen*
Lich King : "No wonder you call it as your finest work. It has poisonus claw. It move very fast. It could absorb

anykind of materia that it hit. It has a large resistance to magic. Indeed a finest work."
Cold Sound : "Thank you, master. but..."
*suddenly the ice crumbling, the ghoul is fall to the ground*
Lich King : "Go back to your creator, little ghoul"
*The ghoul run to it's creator, hiding like a child*
Lich King : "Interesting, it also has brain"
Cold Sound : "Indeed, master. And if You like, I'll give it to You."
Lich King : "No, you need it more than I do for I have a task for you to be done"
*the owner of the cold sound bowed*
Lich King : "Take 5 Necrolite and 30 ghoul and then Go to the forest that has no return"
"You'll know what to do, when you're in it"
*the owner of the cold sound bowed*
*Lich king point to the ghoul*
Lich King : "and take that ghoul also, Kel'Thuzard."



Quest #One : The Lich and Forest that has no return!

Acolite : "This is forest of no return, mighty lich"
Kel'Thuzard : "Very well, you may leave"
Kel'Thuzard : 'So, this is the forest of no return. In my eyes, it's just like another forest. Why the lich king

want me to come here? Why do I need such a big force just to get inside to this forest'

And then the force marching inside the forest.
At they path,
15 minutes past.
They meet no living creature.
30 minutes past.
They meet no sign of living creature.
45 minutes past.
They only meet silent of the forest.

and at last, at 59 minutes after they start their walk,
Kel'Thuzard feels something.
Something that see them but has interesting in seeing them.
Feeling like meeting a long lost friend...

Kel'Thuzard stop the march and ask one ghoul to investigate that creature. But, as the ghoul come near, the

creature run away. And when Kel'Thuzard order the ghoul to come back, the creature comes near again, until it has

the same distance like when he first feels the creature.
So the Lich think that this creature only want to "play", and it only alone, he can kill it anytime if it comes

near. So Kel'Thuzard command his army to move to the deeper of the forest.

As they walk into the deeper of the forest,
Kel'Thuzard feels more and more creature that has feeling like that.
Kel'Thuzard also feels that the more night come, the more agresive those creatures feeling.
Kel'Thuzard counting... 1 2 3... 7 it's six, even they have a power of abomination, they can't defeat his army.

...
And so...
Right The sun is fully set, the march stopped by a devil and two demons.
The devil has two big horn and a pair of wing, a normal devil wing. It's fingers are ended with like a human that

never cut his nail. It's figure as small as human and he is standing like humans, pretty small for a devil.
The demon is like the oposite. They has one horn only, has no wing, but it's fingers is full with claws. Big one.

They body almost as big abomination, but they use their hands for standing.
And while the Lich examine the devil and demons, all creature that he has passed are standing around the march.
Seeing that he is surrounded, the lich order the ghouls and necromancer make a formation. And without hesitation

Kel'Thuzard said, "What do you want?". Without warning, without said anything, with the Devil's smile, all nine

demons attack the march together. The march counter attack. So the war is clashed. At beginning, Kel'Thuzard only

watching, he is saving his power for devil, cause he knew nothing about the devil, but as the war getting warmer,

there are a lot of ghouls that already dead, but no sign of the demons for stopping, no sign the demons is tired,

no sign of the demons get real damage.
So, Kel'Thuzard starting to froze those demons. But each time Kel'Thuzard froze one demon, the demon back off, and

when he want to froze another one, the one that back off are attacking again, and so the battle continue like that.

Ghouls go down one by one. The necromacers who starting to loose their magical power are consumed by the lich for

his magical power is more valuable then their lives. And the battle stopped, when the only standing at the march is

Kel'Thuzard is his Ghoul only. It is like those creatures know that the left at those march have something that

could harm them more than the ghouls and the necromancers could do. It's like, the don't want to let anyone on

their team die.

Then the Devil says, "Go now, or you are our food also"
Kel'Thuzard : "And why do you think that I can't kill you? While your demons are afraid of me"
Devil : "They are not afraid. They move back because I order them"
Kel'Thuzard : "And why do you let me go, if you think you can beat me?"
Devil : "First, because you give us food for three days. Second, Even I can beat you, you are too skinny to eat,

just like the one who comes here before you."
Kel'Thuzard : "The one who come here before me?"
Devil : "Yes, he is just like you, but he's bigger, much more powerfull, and has more grace than you."
Kel'Thuzard : "The Lich King himself has come here?"
Devil : "Yes, that what he called himself, he said, his minion will come here to bring me food, and if his minion

don't want to leave this forest, I may eat him. So this is your last chance, go from here or I'm gonna eat you."
Kel'Thuzard : "Okay I'll leave. But before, I leave I want to ask something, Why you lived in this forest? Why

don't you just join us? you don't have to worry about food."
Devil : "We like to hunt our food rather than to have it in easy way. Fear is source of power."
Kel'Thuzard : "Hunting, eh? Well, what if you join us for next 'big hunting?'"
Devil : "Big hunting?"
Kel'Thuzard : "Yes, we gonna raid the sentinel, that's a big hunting right?"
Devil : "Sounds interesting, I'll be your ally at that time, but now, I'm starting to hungry"
Kel'Thuzard : "Well then, It's nice to hear that, I'll be going, Enjoy your feast"
Devil : "lich!"
Kel'Thuzard : "Yes?"
Devil : "Give that ghoul a name. He is one mighty ghoul. That why my friends don't attack him."
Kel'Thuzard : "I'll think about that"

After a long walk with his ghoul, Kel'Thuzard arives at the frozen throne.
Kel'Thuzard : "I'm back, master"
Lich King : "How is Balanar?"
Kel'Thuzard : "Sorry, master?"
Lich King : "The devil at the Forest that has no return"
Kel'Thuzard : "Ah, I failed to kill him, but he'll join us at the raid"
Lich King : "Good, just as I thought"
Kel'Thuzard : "You mean, you send me there not to kill him? but..."
Lich King : "AHAHAHA, you can't kill him, even I could defeat him because of the power of the frozen throne"
Kel'Thuzard : "That means he can kill me anytime he want that time"
Lich King : "That's right, but he don't, right? AHAHAHAHA. Ok then, that's for now, you're dismissed."
Kel'Thuzard : "Thank you, master"
*Kel'Thuzard and the ghoul moving to the door"
Lich King : "One more think, Kel, what's that ghoul name?"
Kel'Thuzard : "Pardon me, master?"
Lich King : "I see, from now on, his name is N'aix."
GRRRBBBHHHH *The ghoul howling*

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That for the part one. Back to work.

Writer note:
1. remember this part?

If he is that strong, why don't he just kick tree of life, so end of dota.

2. , does the undead really have feelings about friends?
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 5:25 am

......the aeon part look like err lotr anyhoo nice one but i thought naix come back life from a dead body which been hang to death coz stealing arthas ring....ay\nyway nice work i did enjoy it but........balanar eat human not ghouls(refer his story)
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:15 am

@lonewolf
Well, first thanks to the compliment.
ehmm...
Like LOTR? really? *it seems someone mistook the meaning, LOL*
But that's most of the faqs right?

Well about N'aix, means *creation* is somelike modified or something.
While Balanar, what do you do if you hungry and all you have to eat is ghoul?
it's just like the way "how canibal is exist".
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:29 am

Hmmm ghouls.......delicious hehhehehheh anyway nah is nothing thanx you for the story
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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 3:37 pm

Cool. Its okok. English bad though.
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