Action/Comedy- A Dota Story(Updated-Ch-10!!)

Posted: Fri Sep 19, 2008 3:10 pm

BRING.ME.MOAR!!!!!!!OR NOT I HAVE 2 KILL U WITH THE WORST WAY EVER!MAKING DARKTERROR SMILE!
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 10:24 am

Hey, if anyone liked the story, then please read the prequel to it posted here:
http://www.dotastrategy.com/forum/ftopic14808-0-asc-75.html&sid=1101bd80e72e882c3ba57a48229d0935

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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 2:21 pm

Ur prequel is better than ur normal story, me feels. Me likes prequel moawr!
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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 2:45 pm

time for a lame comment

Mortred aint sent hero!

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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 2:45 pm

nice job!
^^,
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thx my friend for this

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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 3:56 pm

jenan, u said nice job to azure warrior or the author. Coz his lane comment IS lame.
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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 5:03 pm

I gotta say dude i really like your stories. Keep them up.
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 11:23 am

@tfn Thanks man, im glad you liked them.
@azure

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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 8:51 am

@AmC plz,continue the story im dying 2 read more...
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Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 7:39 am

i think this thread has died..
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Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 8:12 pm

oops..guess ive been to lazy to update xD
ill try to post a new chapter soon

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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 5:05 pm

c'mon man. need to read the "battle"
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 5:29 pm

Chapter 7: Streetfight

As soon as Lina sees Terrorblade:

Lina: MAGINA YOU TRAITOR! I THOUGHT YOU WERE WITH US!
Magina: What are you talking about? I’m here.

As Lina is a being of higher intelligence, her noticing two identical demon hunters leads to a highly intelligent comment-

Lina: OMYGOD! ITS RAINING CLONES!
Magina: Relax Lina. That is my brother Terrorblade. We’re twins.
Lina: What, both of you?

Magina chose to ignore that question.

Anub’seran: Enough of this mindless banter. Aren’t you scared sentinels? I am the most deadly and feared Nerubian ever born into this land. I am the greatest warrior of the Scourge. I AM ANUB’SERAN, THE NERUBIAN LEAVER!!
Terrorblade: Weaver.
Anub’seran: Oh right, sorry for the typo.
Sven: I do not care who or what you are, spider-boy. To me, you are just a filthy pawn of Nerz’hul.
Terrorblade: How dare you…KILL THEM ANUB’SERAN! FOR THE LICH KING!

At this, Anub’seran turned himself invisible and charged at the Sentinels, while Terrorblade conjured an image and hid behind a bush.

Anub’seran: DIE!

And a ferocious battle began as Mortred threw a dagger at Anub’seran, Lina shot a wave of fire at him, Sven took out his halberd, and Yurnero started making cool looking Japanese hand signs.

Mortred: MAGINA, WHAT ARE YOU DOING STANDING THERE? COME AND HELP US!
Magina: Er…Im…um…scared of spiders…

Mortred then made a face and a rude hand gesture which looked somewhat like this-

Anub’seran was meanwhile dodging every attack the Sentinels threw at him, by going invisible at just the right time and whenever he was even close to getting slightly hurt, he pressed ‘T’ and threw himself five seconds into the past.

Sven: Wow, this guy cannot be killed. At this rate, there is only one thing to do.
Lina: What?
Sven: Watch…..
DOGS, GIVE ME STRENGTH!

For some unimaginable reason, nothing happened.

Sven: Oh, sorry.
GODS, GIVE ME STRENGTH!

Overflowing with power, Sven took out a magical hammer from nowhere and threw it at Anub’seran. However, he forgot which hand his hammer was in, and threw his halberd instead. The halberd collided with Anub’seran’s head, and cleaved it cleanly in two.

Mortred: Good job Sven. Now we kill the other one.

Magina: No point. I was fighting Terrorblade when you four were busy with the Nerubian. The coward just left an image of himself.
Mortred: Hmm..he could still be here. I suggest we look around for a while and see if we can find him.

Terrorblade: Damn, they are looking for me. I better come up with something quickly..

And in the ten seconds he had left before the sentinels found him, Terrorblade came up with a brilliant plan-

Terrorblade(suddenly jumping out): LOOK EVERYONE! A FLYING GIRAFFE!
The Sentinels(and an insomniac raccoon standing nearby): OOOH! WOW!

[Terrorblade runs away].

After a while:

The Sentinels(and the insomniac raccoon standing nearby): Oh no! He tricked us!

Last edited by AmC-DotaAddict on Fri Oct 10, 2008 5:58 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 5:33 pm

How good is that?
Very nice!
Keep up the good work.
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 12:11 am

pfft... what a fight. hmm, just don't let scourge lose. ^^
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