Action/Comedy- A Dota Story(Updated-Ch-10!!)

Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 12:47 am

i love this story~
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 2:37 pm

@quale
Just wait...and read
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 1:25 am

MOAR MOAR I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPEN NEXT
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 1:33 am

NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:35 pm

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Im glad you liked it man, but I wont be able to update until the weekend, so I guess you'll have to wait

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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 9:52 am

lmao reading ur story loved the bit where u made fun of lina int but she aint no dumb blonde u know keep up the gw
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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 10:46 am

Chapter 8: Doobies

Sven: So, what do we do now?
Mortred: Well, we have lost our way.. our only hope now is if someone can give us directions at the sentinel prison. Its not too far from here.
Magina: We don’t have a choice. Lead the way.
Mortred: Okay.
Sven: Its going to be a long walk. But don’t worry, that is not how you all shall feel after you have listened to some of my hilarious jokes!
Magina: Go on.
Sven: Okay, tell me, what happened when the bear was shot?
Magina: I don’t know, what?
Sven: He couldn’t ‘bear’ the pain! Haha!

Magina tried to laugh, but ended up making a hacking sound which sounded more like a cough.

Sven: And here’s the next one..

An hour and a hundred more of Sven’s “hilarious” jokes later-

Mortred: Ah, here we are. The sentinel prison.

The sentinels notice a huge centaur guarding the prison doors.

Bradwarden(In a british accent): Welcum to the sentinel prison. My name is Bradwurden. I know you, you’re Magin-uh. What do u want from here?
Magin-uh(In the same accent): Oh nothing, really. I just came to chat over a cup of tea, you know.

Bradwarden and Magina suddenly start drinking tea, and chat about Queen Elizabeth and the Pope.

Mortred: WTF ARE YOU TWO DOING? WE WANT TO KNOW DIRECTIONS, NOT WHAT THE POPE ATE FOR DINNER! AND WHATS UP WITH THE BRITISH ACCENT?
Magina: Oh sorry, I was caught up in the moment.
Bradwarden: Yeah, me too.
Mortred: Wow, I sometimes feel like, im in this retarded story or something...( To Bradwarden)Ok, forget about that now. Can you please give us directions to the scourge base?
Bradwarden: The scourge base, you say? Come with me. I have a map of its location.

Bradwarden leads the sentinels inside and then looks confused.

Magina: What happened? Have you forgotten the way?
Bradwarden: Oh, don’t worry. I know this place like the palm of my hand.

[Bradwarden slams into a wall].

Bradwarden: I’m okay!

Magina suddenly noticed Syllabear locked up in a cell.

Magina: Huh? How did you get here?
Syllabear: I was sued by Icefrog for continuously causing bugs in Dota maps.. and since I didn’t have any money, he put me in jail.
Magina: Rofl poor nub.

Bradwarden then spots the map, and hands it over to the sentinels. With its help, he shows them how to get to the scourge base.

Lina, however, didn’t understand anything that Bradwarden said.

Lina: Thanks Bradwarden, I understand.
Mortred: Okay then, Thanks a lot for your help Brad. We’ll be on our way now.
Bradwarden: Bye! Bring back balloons for me!

Mortred raised an eyebrow.

Bradwarden: Oh sorry, I was caught up in the moment again.

The sentinels left and as they began their journey towards the scourge base, Magina felt lonely. He remembered the first time he met the love of his life…

*Flashback*

For Magina, it was truly love at first sight. A body so slender, a face so beautiful. Magina stared and stared at this human, who seemed to him the most sexy human on earth.
Ezalor: Who’re you staring at, punk?
Magina: Hey babe. I’m Magina, but you can call me Magina. Wanna go watch a movie?
Ezalor: But you’re a male and you’re 150 years younger than me.
Magina: Hey, lets not include the minute details, shall we? Now, do you want to watch a movie with me or not?
Ezalor: Okay, sure!

*End of flashback*

Magina sighed. He was missing Ezu so much. He would surely propose to him as soon as he got back.

Mortred: Hey, stop day-dreaming Magina! We’re almost there!

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Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:18 am

ROFLMFAO
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:37 am

lol nice 1
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:45 am



the story i mean..
^_^
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 6:32 am

I just read everything from ch. 1 to ch. 8 and I laughed my ass off! Continue this dude, I wanna know how it ends.
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 12:06 pm

Thanks for your comments! Im ending this story soon, probably by next week or so.
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 1:05 pm

THX 4 ENDIng it OR suggesting it atleast lest i die laughing
BUT EZU?
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 3:52 pm

GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTT STORY!!!!!
love it alot..
cant wait for the next chapter..
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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 11:43 pm

lol nice story haha!

i thought you were gonna finish this by the next week from October 19th! you know, it has been nearly 2 weeks since the last chapter.. wirte more!

WOOT WOOT! good job!
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