My Fanfic( I need a title!)

My Fanfic( I need a title!)

Posted on Thu Dec 04, 2008 1:04 am

Well, my first time doing a fanfic, so do go easy on me.=D.Enjoy.
Chapter 1: The Evil Within
10,000 years ago, Good and Evil coexisted on this Earth together peacefully. They made use of a treaty also known as the Balance. Terms stated was that neither sides would make attempts to destroy one another, in exchange for a peaceful and safer future for their younger generation, until...
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Somewhere else...

"I have good news, milord! Our necromancers have developed a super advanced soldier that will aid us in our attempt on world domination!"

"No, no my dear Rotund'jere, we the Scourge do not use the term 'world domination', we call it the purification of this land. Now what was this thing about a super advanced soldier that you had mentioned earlier?"

"Oh yes. Pardon this old and forgetful one, milord. As I was saying, this soldier was forged from the magics of our 'scientists'. Combining the mystical power of our dark magic and lifeless corpses collected from our meat wagons, our 'scientists' form the creature they call, 'Pudge the Butcher'.Rotund'jere paused before continuing.
"Albeit being big and clumsy, our soldier has developed the ability to swing an big and rusty hook that was attached onto him as a form of self-defence. Though he has limited brainpower, his strength and accuracy is unmatched by many of our champions."

"Impressed. Well done, mage. Now, now, when can I go take a look at my perfect little creation?"

"Soon, my lord ... As soon as our necromancers put in the finishing touches. After that, purification can commence..."

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Posted on Thu Dec 04, 2008 1:46 am

Oh good,
looking foward to chapter two

might want to change scientists to something more fitting, eg somthing more dark and evil, this is the scourge we are talking about!
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Posted on Thu Dec 04, 2008 1:47 am

Alright,sure! I'll do something about it!
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Posted on Thu Dec 04, 2008 2:54 am

I'm back with chapter 2! Enjoy!
Chapter 2: Pudge The Butcher
" Argghh, roflmaozxzx, let me go!" A voice boomed from the darkness of the laboratories.

As the creature emerged from the darkness, it frantically picked up the patches of maggot-infested flesh that fell off it's huge torso. Standing at almost 6 feet high, the monster easily knocked everyone that was in the lab off their feet-with his looks.the creature seemed to be sewn together with stiches, with some occasional stapled parts, unlike what Rotund'jere described as 'a combination of the dark magics and lifeless corpses'. Acolytes that were assistants to their power-crazed necromancer masters scrambled out of the room in fear as Pudge caught hold of one and began feasting on the man.

Returning to the lab, the necromancers caught a glimpse of their feeding creation and immediately surrounded him in an attempt to hold him down with magic.But however hard the necromancers tried, they still failed hold down Pudge. In fact, Pudge seemed immune to their magic.

" Argghh!!! Pudge want go!! Let Pudge go!!!" The creature screamed as it ttried to break through the metal cuffs that held him back.

The metal cuffs could not hold any longer as Pudge tore them out of their wall, knocking everything out of its way, before lumbering out of the lab. Albeit his huge size, Pudge still managed to meld in with the shadows of the corridors.Stumbling blindly, Pudge finally stopped as he entered a very large room. A room in which the Lich King resided...
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Posted on Thu Dec 04, 2008 3:07 am

Good job! I love stories dat include pudge he's mentioned dumb in stories but also terrifying and strong
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Posted on Thu Dec 04, 2008 8:58 am

nice story! write more!
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Posted on Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:40 am

Sorry guys, been busy for the past few days. Will post Chapter 3 tomoro!
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