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varunshenoyg

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Posted on Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:34 am

@cheesefungu: Did you know I purposely toned down the language as most readers had earlier complained regarding the level of english used? So I am afraid I cant do anything there..

As far as the mood of the language goes, well I use exclamations a lot everywhere and ya I understand why you feel this is "too happy", I will look into it next time.. Thanks for the comments!

@TB: Thanks man
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dohyun99

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Posted on Tue Feb 10, 2009 9:43 pm

write more!!!!
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varunshenoyg

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Posted on Wed Feb 11, 2009 1:42 am

Hey we got the national level technical fest "Engineer" coming up in our college from 12th and I got 3 big events to handle, so kinda busy..

Will update when I can, but looks like fan-fic needs more than one mod to rp up things Sad

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dohyun99

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Posted on Wed Feb 11, 2009 2:18 am

ahh i c. well good luck to everything!

and yeah, fan fic needs a boost! rise all ye fan fic lovers and support it! Smile

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cheeseefungu

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Posted on Sat Feb 14, 2009 7:10 am

@ Author

Oh okay, yeah i just forgot this was a mostly asian populated thread. (I visit WAY too many grammar nazi forums..) Now that's out of the way, everything seems fine except for the exclamation points. Happy writings Very Happy

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chienphan25

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Posted on Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:38 am

I don't really get your stories and chapters but I see effort! Keep it up!
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varunshenoyg

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Posted on Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:39 am

@above: what do you not get? P.S Did I mention my last update was 2 months ago?? Laughing

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Posted on Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:56 am

For when you continue this story, keep in mind you are writing about people who talk in high grammar. Stay true to your characters, not readers. That's all for now.
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varunshenoyg

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Posted on Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:42 pm

Oh you are still here in DS, flameseeker?? Long time no see..
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