Time,Time, Time. -Falling Apart. Conclusion is up!!!
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Should I keep Going?
No ending time set.
No 25% [ 11 ]
Yes 75% [ 33 ]
good thing i know my warcraft history so nothing is lost to me
anyways, cant wait for the next chapter and good one for the 6th
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@Vita.Nova: yea. I know Neltharion is the leader of the black dragonflight, hence, the "enemy of all other dragonflights" part. It says, because Infinity dragons are dark-ish gray, almost black. In WoW the in-game characters talk about the infinity flight, and how Nelly might be the head. Then again, he might actually be the head. Not Nozdormu. I might be wrong. But in my story Nozdormu is. Just pointing that out. T.T Also, I can't update for a day or two. Going to a friends house.
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ARGHHH. TOOK SOO LONG TO GET THIS MULLED OVER. I've been doing lotsa stuff, and I havent been able to Updat since....since...ummm.
A long time. Lets leave it at that.
CHAPTER 7
They gathered their armies. They were full of adreanaline at the thought of stomping out the esscence of the Scourge. The chances of victory were slim, they all knew this. But the had no choice. If The Council was lost, their chances would be even Slimmer. They had to move, now.
Kunkka gathered his fleet of Pirates. The men were a truthful bunch, and they only took up the moniker of "Pirates" to scare off the Scourge. And their leader, Kunkka. Daelin Proudmoore. Was a sight to behold. His blade, the Tidebringer, radiated with pulses of water, just orbiting the blade at all times. His strikes have been known to fell entire troops of Ghouls in one shot. His legendary vessel, the Ghost Ship. Carried his entire fleet as the heading ship. What he had, wasn't much of a fleet, more of an unusually large crew. It held 4 ships. With 100 men each. The Ghost Ship itself was filled with Alcohol, specifically Rum. And when Daelin's allies were tempted with Rum, their speed exponentially increased.
The Drow Ranger. Her arrows are feared across the ranks of the Scourge. It seems her aim increases rapidly over time. And she has the unusual ability to Silence mages and priests.Traxex didn't have a specific army. She had an elite team of Night elves, consisting of Herself, Luna Moonfang, Mirana Nightshade, Lanaya, and Shendlezare Silkwood. And under these 6, were the Followers of Elune, the Moon Goddess. The followers of Elune Ranged from Priests, to Paladins. From Rogues, to Warriors. Everone pitched in, in times of need.
Sven was a tall, muscular Night Elf. With a Greatsword that could fell 10 men with one strike. He has the capacity to summon the Storm Bolt, a hammer from God himself. And, if pushed to the limit. He can call down God's strength, Practicly doubling his already massive strength. Sven was probably the only one in the 3 that had an army. Mainly because he was in charge of the majority of the warriors of the Sentinel. His first Lieutenant was Magina, the Anti-Mage. His quick Moonblades sliced with grace, and ease through the unholy forces of the Scourge. He could move faster than light itself, and could withstand the most powerful of spells. Sven's army consisted of no less than 2000 men. Surely he would be a staple in the Sentinel's upcoming battle.
They were ready. They had to be.
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stickied this really good fanfic
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great descriptions! a bit of an over usage of periods a bit but it was still good nonetheless
Kunkka ftw! 
next chapter is gonna be wicked EPIC ^^
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Arghh.
CHAPTER 8
The sun rose slowly. Like a Lion huddled over it's prey. The band of hunters inched slowly towards the cave. And they stopped somewhat 5 meters from it, leaving only Davion walking forward.
"Great Dragon" Davion Proclaimed.
The Dragon awoke from it's slumber.
"I come to you in search of a way to become a member of the Infinity dragonflight."
"Hahaha. Foolish human. Dragons are dragons. You can't-"
He was cut off mid sentence.
Davion fell prostate to the ground, seemingly writhing in pain, as his armor ripped from plate to plate. His helmet burst off, and revealed a scales, just starting to grow rapidly on his skin. His eyes looked like they would fit on demon's face, and they were a paper-like yellow. He grew a large crest on his head, and Wings sprouted on his back. A tail grew from the base of his spine, and he roared, with the force of an army pulsating throughout the cave, waking every dragon inside.
"You were saying?" Davion asked.
"Nothing. What would you ask of me, fellow dragon."
"How would I become a member of the Infiniity dragonflight?"
"I'm afraid I do not understand your question. Aren't you of the Green dragonfight?"
"I can change between Red, Green, and Blue. All through contact with the heart of a dragon of those Flights."
"I think I can help you with this matter." Nozdormu said.
"Also." Davion demanded to know. "Why are you, Nozdormu, leader of the Bronze Dragonflight. Looking like, and leading, the Infinity Dragonflight."
"My friend, I was like you a long time ago. Human, yet with dragon's blood. Up until very recently, I was only able to access the Bronze dragonflight. But when I slayed a member of the Infinite dragonflight that was attacking a nearby Village, I stepped on his heart, and crushed it. My proud bronze skin, Rusted away. Into this. And I haven't found a way to reverse it, unlike you."
"Ahh." Davion sighed. "That explains a lot."
"Here we are." Nozdormu said. "The chamber of Tarrasque."
"What is in here?" Davion asked.
"The body of the Most powerful Dragon the world has ever known. And you, Davion. Will take his heart. He was a member of the Infinity dragonflight."
"Hmm. So this is it."
Davion touched his body, and in an instant. It crumbled away into Dust. Leaving only a Bright, Pink, Levitating orb: The heart of Tarrasque.
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SICKKK!!!
Davion is one of my favorite heroes lol so its sweet how he gets a HoT! woooooooooooooo epic
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Fehh. Im terribly sorry for anyone that was waiting for chapter 9. I had no internet connection for a while. Yes, it was very tortuous. Anywayz.. Ive been waiting to put this up.
CHAPTER 9
The Winds blew eerily over the trees as the Forces of The Sentinel stood, overlooking the river. Purist, commanding the Array of soldiers, Sven, and his army, and Traxex, with her Followers. Daelin was to provide backup if things went Awry. They were nervous, but then again, who wouldn't be? The Scourge had heard of the upcoming attack, and they had prepared their forces equally. Abbadon, heading the fleet, Riding on the back of his Drake, Viper. With his Lieutenant, Terrorblade, Magina's brother. Terrorblade could be said to be superior to Magina in terms of speed, but Magina could alter energy far better than Terrorblade could ever dream to. Axe, the Mogul Khan, was there. Spinning wildly, holding 2 large shields, known as Vanguards in each of his arms. Slardar, with his fleet of undead Naga, would serve as their backup in case things went out of hand. It seems that the Scourge had copied the Sentinel's plan. And last but not least, stood Kel'Thuzad, The lich. He was the Lich King's advisor, and would give his life, or Undeath to serve him. The Leaders were ready, looking over the river to see who would make the first move. Purist stared into Abbadon's eyes, looking for a sign. Of Confidence, or of Trickery But what Purist saw was not Hatred, or Trickery. What he saw, was fear. In Abbadon's cold, lifeless eyes. He saw this as an chance, and he yelled to his soldiers.
"We Strike!!!" Cried Purist.
"Rahhh!!!" The Army Called Proudly.
"For the Lich King!" Yelled Abbadon.
The Armies clashed exactly in the river. Ghouls and Treants clawing at each other. Necromancer reviving the fallen soldiers, and Druids summoning more Treants. And in this sense, the Armies seemed to be evenly matched. A snag had occured, however, and the backups belonging to both the Scourge and the Sentinel had clashed in the river. Far from the battle.
"Die! You filthy human!" Slardar yelled.
"Ready and waiting, you foul beast!" Kunkka replied.
Daelin's crew was repeatedly fending off the surges of undead Naga coming up from the depths. With every strike, The Admiral's Sword slashed through a number of the Naga, seeming to flow with the tides, as he would call up random Torrents of water, sending the Undead Skybound.
The clash had been going rapidly, back and forth. With neither side being able to gain a sizable footing. Abbadon faced of with purist, exchanging blows from his sword, Frostmourne, and Purist's blessed hammer. Each strike from the hammer burned like the sun to Abbadon's undead flesh, and Each Slash of Frostmourne chilled Purist to his Heart.
Sven steadily fought with Axe, and each of Sven's Blows was responded to with a swift Counter Helix from Axe. This battle too, was a stalemate. Sven knew, however. That Axe was famous across the land for his famous finisher: The Culling Blade. So Sven had to finish this quickly. He activated the Insignia on his Mask, The Mask Of Madness. And he flew into a maddened rage, attacking so quickly, that Axe ws repeatedly caught off-guard. Sven leapt into the air, and with a fierce Cry, called down the God's Strength. He came down onto the ground, and in one swift strike. Axe had been cleaved in two.
"Thank you for the amazing gift, Nozdormu. I will remember it until the day I die." Davion said, practically in Tears of Gratitude.
"Think nothing of it, Dragon knight. It is the least I could give to a fellow Human turned Dragon." Nozdormu replied.
And with this, Davion Crawled onto the ground. In his regular position. His Armor fell off as usual, his helmet came off to Reveal a Messy head of hair once again, and Wings came to exist. But this time, they were as black as night. With this, he flew off, with the hunters on his back. And they started to search for the Void.
They had found him, but not him alone. He was accompanied by a large amount of soldiers, and fighting with them, the forces of the Sentinel!
"We must help!" Yurnero Yelled.
They jumped of off Davion's scaly back, and burst into action. Yurnero began blinking across the field, hacking enemies in Two. Gondar was lurking, invisible, followed by Rikimaru. And they were quietly assassinating enemies in the Chaos. Dragon knight spent his time searching for the Void, flying overhead. Spouting Fire on to the unfortunate Ghouls occasionally. And again, he found him. He was stopped short, about 50 feet from the Void, and turned around. Just as everyone did. To look up at the Gigantic, Purple ball of fire, hurtling Towards them in the Distance. They all stopped to look at it, and all dropped their arms, all dropped their helms, to get a better view, and all stopped. To look. Suddenly, Davion Noticed the Void zoom past him, Pitch black as he flew. Distorting all near him, to the point of no longer looking like reality. He crashed into it, and it stopped. But only for a moment, as The Void was gone, and the Star started to fall again. By now, the battle had completely stopped. The cowardly began to run, and the brave stood. Motionless. For they new, what was coming had to be stopped. The star landed in the River, and began to steam as it cooled. And a large, creature stepped out. Hunched over, with large bangles on it's wrists. It floated, eerily over the ground. And as soon as it hovered over the river, it stretched it's arm out, and grabbed the nearest soldier with the force of it's gravity. And after the soldier was raised approximately 20 feet into the air, he exploded. Into 4 smaller versions of the mysterious Enigma. They slowly drifted to the ground, as everyone remained silent.
"Attack!" Yelled Purist.
And the Sentinels knew exactly what to do at this point. They charged not the Scourge, but the Enigma.
"Charge!" Roared Abbadon.
And the Scourge did the same.
The Enigma Practically smiled, and Raised it's arms ominously. Suddenly, a rift opened. And sucked everything nearby into a large ball. Everything close was rendered unable to move. And they were stuck, in this black hole.
Gondar, and Rikimaru, who fortunately unseen by the beast, hid. Afraid to move, and afraid to run.
"Rikimaru." Gondar said, with a slight tingle in his Voice. "Take these"
Gondar placed his twin blades, the Sange, and the Yasha, onto the ground.
"Why would I do that?" Rikimaru asked.
"My apprentice" Gondar said. "No one would use them besides you"
"What do you mean?" Rikimaru Asked.
"You are young, Satyr. But I believe in you, to be my Remnant in this world. You are the final result of my years of steadily mentoring you. Guide your fellow hunters in my absense."
"What are you talking about!" Rikimaru said, confused.
Gondar said nothing, as he leapt from the Bush. He Flung a shuriken Towards the beast, and the beast let go of the black hole. Letting everyone free. However, Gondar would soon see. The beast had focused all of it's anger, all of it's rage. On to the Unfortunate Bounty Hunter. It raised it's arms, and Gondar couldn't move. He took three steps, and was once again, rendered unable to move. This happened repeatedly, until Gondar simply fell. His soul, crushed.
The Soldiers of both, the Sentinel and the Scourge would not let this chance Go to waste. In the timeframe given, Terrorblade Sundered the creature, Sven tossed his Storm Bolt, Traxex Fired her Arrows, Mirana called down her stars, Luna called the Moon, Lanaya Refracted her power onto the beast. And Shendlezare fired the Magic Missle. Abbadon unleashed his Death Coil, Lich casted the Chain Frost. Magina sent the Mana Void. And Purist held the Finisher. The Guardian Angel.
The beast Grew still, unable to move. With a shocked look on his Demonic face.
It stood there, and a gust of wind blew over the River. And the beast, turned a shade of Crimson. It Bellowed with the force of eternity. With a Rage so intense,
the pride of Man in it's entirety was stripped from it. The simple response to this, was:
"We failed"
The beast began to spin, creating rifts in the space surrounding it. Black holes, popping out at random, calamity befalling every thing in Azeroth. But then, something strange happened. The Beast stopped, and it was surrounded in a large, Blue ball. A large, transparent blue ball. And inside of the large ball, was the Void. Using every last bit of it's power, to send the beast into a separate dimension. The Void Pushed the ball with great might, and the Earth shook beneath him as he pushed. The ball went flying into the distance, the Star Trapped within it. Presumably to float forever, trapped in time. Through the vast emptiness of space.
The Void simply stood there, and Faded into Dust.
Waha.! Thats the Climax! But, ye. One more chapter. Itll be a conclusion of sorts. Told ya it would end at chapter 10.
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I am speechless, EPIC ousumness
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG SO EPICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC!!!!!!!!!!! Sentinel + Scourge again Engima! I am speechless, EPIC ousumness
wow...... epic cant even describe that chapter! that chapter was like... like... CHUCK NORRIS!
hahaha, yeah... that was an amazing chapter! intensely good writing! cant wait for the conclusion, tho i am a bit sad that the story will end
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I might make another Fic. After a short story or two. I have an Idea for another.
Conclusion will come tomorrow. Its 12:05 as i type this. Im TIRED. The conclusion will come tomorrow. It will explain stuffs.
Conclusion is here. I really wanted to write this down.
For best effect, read this while listening to the song "Float On", by Modest Mouse.
CHAPTER 10:CONCLUSION
The winds had died down, and the people all across Azeroth had been living free of Trouble, Free of pain. The Scourge had stopped their conquest. The Sentinel no longer had to send Troops to Defend the Waypoints. They felt a mutual bond toward Life. Be it of Life, or be it simply of Undeath. They no longer saw a reason to fight each other. They simply wanted to enjoy life.
The Council of Elders had Been Returned to the Sentinel. It had turned out that they were not harmed, and they spent their time there discussing a plan to End the Enigma.
Yurnero had Retreated to the Night elf Population, to train in the way of the Blade with Sven. Sven taught Yurnero how to Strike Harder, and Yurnero Taught Sven how to Strike Faster.
Davion finally met with Leoric after many years, and found that his personality hadn't changed after he died. He still moved the same, and he still was the same.
Jah'Rakal remained with Vol'jin, and Maintained a healthy Schedule with his Physical Therapy, and Medicines.
Rikimaru had Taken the Moniker of the Bounty Hunter, using Gondars Dual Blades slung on his back at all times.
Magina Reconciled with his brother, and they Train Together, helping the other in the section which they lack in.
Furion retired, and allowed Purist to take over as Leader of the Sentinel.
Drow and the Warriors of Elune remained as a Vigilante force in Azeroth. Hunting minor Criminals in exchange for spreading the word of their Faith.
Anub'Seran Explained to Rikimaru why the Void did what it did. He told him that the Void had felt it's presence on the world. He wanted to feel less lonely.
He didn't want to go down as the Being that Caused the end of the world. He didn't want Ner'Zhul to hate Him. He didn't want Anub'Arak to hate him. He didn't want to be hated for the rest of his miserable un-existence. He decided that killing 2 birds with one stone would be the best bet. And he Decided to Destroy both him, and Enigma.
Rikimaru Decided to aid him in this Request, and the 2 traveled Azeroth. Fetching bounties, and Spreading Rumors. Because if it wasn't for the Void, Time, Time, Time, would be Falling Apart.
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BEYOND EPIC ENDING!
seroiusly lol, this was one hell of a fan fic! one of my all time favorites no doubt! and the END SENTENCE! its like BOOM everything finally makes sense and comes together while also being awesomely SICKKKKK!!!!
thank you for such a delightful story haha!
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woah!!!!! Last sentence!!!! Holy shit!!!! Super epic ending!!!!! I will hire you as a writer if I need one, this is just too good man!!!!!! Looking forward for your short stories.
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whew!, terrible...... EPIC...... i was hooked with the prologue..... then i continued... the last sentence.... EPIC!!!
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