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nhew_cute14


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Battle of vengeful spirit and phantom assasin

Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 8:07 am

When phantom assasin betrayed vengeful spirit, vengeful spirit became very angry that she wanted to kill phantom assasin. vengeful spirit set a match with phantom assasin at the forest. the battle start then they start hitting each other. then vengeful spirit fell in the "bangin" then she swapped phantom assasin then before phantom assasin fell, she used shadow strike on vengeful. they both died. phantom assasin died because she fall and vengeful died because of the poison.



sorry i dont know the english of "bangin" heheheh Very Happy
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yukino_silvermaine


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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 8:13 am

Bangin = cliff
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jake-the-mus


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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 8:17 am

That's a great story and wouldn't you think that VS should be on the scourge because she sorta trying to get revenge on her previous master....By trying to kill her and the're on the same team??? Seem kinda weird to you???

And also I think that Leshrac should be on the sentinel....
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 8:31 am

it's a short story but it's really nice....
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nhew_cute14


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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:16 pm

heheheh thx.... yeah its kinda weird
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_noob28_


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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 11:11 am

are you a girl nhew_cute14???


anyway it's really a nice story....i love it XD
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Fido


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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 11:19 am

gud story but cud sum1 help u wit ur english caus its not easily undastood.
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nhew_cute14


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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 11:38 pm

im a boy...
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dOtA-AlLsTAr


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Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2007 9:40 pm

lol funny... poison ftw!
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Linial_Tailor


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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 3:34 pm

Good one but short
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 3:46 pm

Nice on this one, even short, but gives the points. ^^,
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devilfeathers


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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 5:14 am

Nice story...
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flameseeker


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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 4:31 pm

Nice but short(you must have memorized these words by now). Still i wam willing to give a 10/10 ignoring the grammar.
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Eustace2


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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 8:04 pm

Yeah.The grammar and the size. xD.If ya write longer stories it would be bettuh

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