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~Mortred~ chapter 9



~Mortred~

Introduction

Mortred, ever so relax and vigilant in the environment thought of nothing but killing the Sentinel. Several minutes, before the attack started, Kel’Thuzad organized a plan to wreak havoc in the lands of the wretched Sentinel.
“Azgalor, you will be at the middle lane assisting Krobelus. You balanar will be at the top lane assisting your wife, Akasha, and you Mortred will be at the lower lane with no assistance”, Kel’Thuzad said with no hesitation.
When the horn sounded ,they all moved quickly to their designated lane killing Sentinel creeps and defending their tower. Mortred questioned the Lich’s order in her mind but nothing seems to answer her questions. While killing Sentinel creeps,a Hero of good appeared and defended her units.
“Aradenal Felory!” Luna Moonfang shouted, and she cast a beam of moon that almost striked Mortred.
Mortred countered with a Stifling Dagger aiming it at Luna’s panther but Luna shielded the dagger with her vanguard.
“So, Mortred, seems like you don’t have any assistance”, Luna Moonfang said with pride.
“ I don’t need assistance to kill weak foes like you, you are a pathetic race aiming to pursue peace even though it is impossible, I see the grudge in every unit of the Sentinel but they control it not knowing that it will grow more as the time passes by, slowly”, Morted said in a sharp voice.
“You will pay for what you have said, dearly!, you will regret the day you set foot in these lands!”, Luna said angrily.
“I, only set foot in these lands because I was commanded to do so, if I wasn’t commanded, I wouldn’t have to set foot in these lands here unlike you”, Mortred said with high pride.
They only concentrated on the creeps and not each other, until Luna missed her only chance to kill Mortred, then Luna flabbergasted with what Mortred did to her glaives, tried to run but did not manage to, instead her head was cut off and her panther,dead.
“pathetic…”, Mortred said.
-----------------Fin of Introduction--------------------
Chapter 1: The War

The war was raging, the Scourge was leading by the number of creeps and heroes since Luna died.
“Mirana, we just lost a comrade”, Furion said with grief.
‘We have just lost Luna Moonfang”, Furion said.
“Luna,may moonlight shine upon you”, Mirana declared while looking at the the dark sky.
‘We shall send Tinker to the lower part of our base”, Mirana declared.
“I am here, so watzup?” Tinker asked immaturely.
“We need you to go to the lower lane and defeat Mortred”, Mirana said.
“I will do as you say Mirana”, Tinker said with joy.
Meanwhile…….
‘Die you tiny pawns!”, Azgalor shouted with joy as he killed each treant with his giant weapon.
Each treant that was stabbed by Azgalor died and as Azgalor tried to attack the last druid, a flying hammer hit his plate armor.
“That was close,” Azgalor declared.
“Who dares attack us?”, Krobelus asked with anger running through her veins.
“You shall taste God’s Strength!”, Sven shouted as he quickly appeared through the fog of war.
“You shall die you fiends!”, Sven said holding his sword with pride.
“Me, die?”, Azgalor asked with glee.
As Azgalor was laughing, he was stabbed by Sven.
“That’s for underestimating the power of God”, Sven said with quiet whispers that only Azgalor can hear.
Krobelus shouted and sent her bat swarms and attacked Sven with anger.
“You shall taste my wrath!”, Krobelus said with a very sharp voice.
As Krobelus casts her spell, she was shackled by Rhasta and Sven finished her off.
"No need to be aungry maun", Rhasta said happily.
Anub’Arak reported this to the Lich King and the Lich King was as mad as ever.
‘Those fools!, I shouldn’t have trusted them, they are foolish warriors!”, The Lich King shouted.
“Two allies dead,such foolish warriors”, Mortred said.
As mortred attacked a creep, she noticed a missile heading towards her, she tried to evade but she was hit, she managed to survive and out of the shadows, Tinker appeared laughing.
“hahahahaha, Mirana and Furion sent me to kill you?” Tinker asked himself happily.
Mortred stood up quickly and said to Tinker with a grin on her face, “Your graveyard will be in these lands, just like Luna”.
-------------------Fin of Chapter 1----------------------
Previously:

“Mirana, we just lost a comrade”, Furion said with grief.
‘We have just lost Luna Moonfang”, Furion said.
“Luna,may moonlight shine upon you”, Mirana declared while looking at the the dark sky.
‘We shall send Tinker to the lower part of our base”, Mirana declared.
“I am here, so watzup?” Tinker asked immaturely.
“We need you to go to the lower lane and defeat Mortred”, Mirana said.
‘Those fools!, I shouldn’t have trusted them, they are foolish warriors!”, The Lich King shouted.
Mortred stood up quickly and said to Tinker with a grin on her face, “Your graveyard will be in these lands, just like Luna”.

Chapter 2: Defiance

“I’d like to see you try!”, Tinker said.
“Being cocky will be your downfall, goblin”, Mortred said as she faded and blended with the environment.
“wha-, what?, where are you, you coward?”, Tinker asked nervously.
“ohhh, me a coward? Who is shaking in his legs while I disappeared?” Mortred asked arrogantly.
Mortred went to Tinker quickly wtihout him noticing then she unsheathed her thorned weapon to wound Tinker.
‘Ahhhhhh!!!!!”, Tinker shouted while his face was heavily bleeding.
“You feel the pain?’, Mortred asked Tinker with glee.
“Ahhhh!!!!”, Tinker shouted as Mortred sliced his left arm.
‘ I told you not to be cocky but you persisted”, Mortred said.
Tinker clicked a button from his machinery and he pressed the heat-seaking missile but nothing worked.
‘That won’t work on me anymore”, Mortred declared.
‘I shall deal the Coup de Grace right here”, Mortred said while she went to a perfect stance and she quickly dealt with Tinker. The only part that Tinker had left was his head because Mortred fed his body to the wolves of the trees.
“I still do not get it, why did Kel’Thuzad send me alone?’, Mortred wondering while she attacked the creeps.
Then a plan bursted out of Mortred’s head. Her plan was to spy on Kel’thuzad’s affairs but how could she do that?
“I plan my death”, Mortred said to herself.
By pretending that she wasn’t alive anymore,.She waited for another hero to come and face her, and right she was, it was a very powerful enemy hero, Lina Inverse.She quickly went to her and planned her fake death, Lina in the other hand, casted all her combos at her and all the creeps attacked Mortred, she ran to the forests and pierced herself, spilling blood all over, in the place where she walked. She took off all her clothes to prove that she died.
Lina saw Mortred’s clothes filled with blood and went to Furion to report.

In the Sentinels base....

“She’s dead”, Lina said.
“How can you make sure of that?”, Furion asked her.
‘Her clothes are left in the forest, filled with blood”, Lina said.
“She is dead”, Furion said.

In the Lich King’s Throne…..

“Master, Mortred has died”, Anub’Arak said.
“What? our best warrior is dead!?!’, the Lich King asked with shock.
‘Yes master she-“ Anub’ Arak’s sentence was interfered.
“Take her place”, the Lich King said.
“But-“, Anub’arak’s sentence was interrupted again.
“NOW!”, the Lich King’s frost voice made Anub’Arak obey his command right away without any questions.
In the forests….
Mortred washed her clothes and rested until her clothes were dry. She was in the safest place a hero could go and that place she discovered when she was with her sister, Shendelzare Silkwood.
Flashback:
‘Mortred, this is the safest place our father taught us but he told me first, no other hero can go here but only us two”, Shendelzare said with a childish voice.
Of course, they were just kids at that time.
“Thank you for showing me our secret place Shendelzare’, Mortred said.
Reality:
‘the Defiance has begun’, Mortred said.
“What did you just say?”, a voice awoke.
---------------------Fin of Chapter 2--------------

Chapter 3: Rebellion


“What did you just say?” Shendelzare’s voice awoken.
“Shendelzare”, Mortred said angrily.
Mortred unsheathed her weapon and hit Shendelzare in the chest.
Ugh-uhhhh…..
Mortred, surprised with what she had done, quickly got an ankh of reincarnation that only she can obtain and gave it to Shendelzare and ran away before she reincarnated.
A lot of things went to Mortred’s head, first was that why did Kel’Thuzad send her alone and the second, why did Shendelzare go to the secret hiding place?

As she tried to look for answers, she saw Kel’Thuzad talking to the Doombringer.
‘Now that Mortred is gone, I shall be the best warrior in the Scourge”, Kel’Thuzad said with joy.
“That bastard was trying to kill me because he wanted to become the best warrior in the Scourge?” Mortred asked herself angrily.

As Kel’Thuzad attacked the Sentinel creeps, he was hit by a dagger, he tried to run but Mortred blocked his way.
“What trickery is this?” Kel’Thuzad asked Mortred.
“I thought you had died” why are you still alive?
‘Surprised?” Mortred said.
“Why are you attacking your allies, you’re a traitor!” Kel’Thuzad shouted.
“Me, a traitor?” Mortred asked.
“Why did you want to kill me?!?” Mortred asked Kel’Thuzad as she kicked Kel’Thuzad in the chest.
‘Did you want to be the best warrior of the Scourge?” Mortred asked.
“Ye-yes.” Kel’Thuzad answered with hesitation.
Mortred, angered by such insolence finished Kel’Thuzad off but did not manage to.
Kel’Thuzad casted his Frost Armor and casted a Frost Nova on Mortred.
Mortred dodged every attack landed by Kel’Thuzad but was hit by another Frost nova.
“Didn’t I tell you not to be a traitor Mortred?’ Kel’Thuzad asked her.
As Kel’Thuzad tried to finish her off, a magic missile appeared and stunned him.
Mortred did not waste time and cut the head of Kel’Thuzad.

“This is my gift to you Kel’Thuzad” Mortred said.
“Who is there?” Mortred shouted.
“I “, Shendelzare said.
“It is you again”, Mortred declared with disappointment.
“Are not you happy that you have met your sister, Mortred’ Shendelzare asked her with confusion.
‘I’m with the Scourge, you’re with the Sentinel”, Mortred said.
“After what I have saw and done, I think you are not a champion of the Scourge anymore, Anub’Arak will report this to the Lich King and he will send all his champions to slay you” Shendelzare said as she disappeared.

And Shendelzare was right, the Lich King did send all his champions to look for Mortred and slay her.
But Mortred, ever so wise stayed at the secret hiding place, never to found by the Scourge champions and Lich King again.

Or so as Mortred thought......

---------------------Fin of Chapter 3-------------------

Chapter 4: The Search

“My champions, we must find Mortred and bring her back here and imprison her” The Lich King said.
“Move now!’, The Lich King said while pointing a finger at the place where Mortred is hiding.

The champions swiftly went there in search of Mortred.

Mortred, felt the trembling of the Earth, she quickly wore her clothes and escaped her hiding place.

“Damn!, how did they know that I was hiding there?” Mortred said with surprise.

“The Lich King, he knows where everybody is, I’m guessing he can contr-“ Mortred’s verdict was interrupted because of the tightening of her heart.

She felt pain everywhere and she heard voices in her head.

‘Come….here….come….here’ whispers then shouts went inside her head.

‘I know it’s gonna hurt but endure it mortred”, Shendelzare said while casting her magic missile at Mortred.

Mortred was then unconcsious, Bradwarden carried Mortred and Raigor casted his fissure to prevent any more foes to pass.

Visage and Viper were able to pass but was stopped by Jakiro twinhead and Lina inverse.

Mortred Dreaming:

“Mortred, let’s go play”
“Okay Sister”
“Time to eat kids’
‘yay!”

Lich King comes

‘Shendelzare!”
‘No!!!”

*Mortred wakes up gasping for breath*

“What happened sister?” Shendelzare asked her sister with compassion

Mortred moved quickly and tried to unsheath her weapon but she was stopped by Furion.

‘Relax Mortred, you are safe” Furion declared

“I am not!’ Mortred said.

Once Mortred said those words, the champions heard Scourge voices, as they looked outside the tavern, Scourge untis were destroying the towers.

‘let’s move quickly my comrades!”, Furion said with high pride.
“We are poised to strike” Mirana declared.

The Sentinel champions quickly slayed the ghouls and the necromnacers.

“I know…..a….secret’, Mortred said to Shendelzare.

------------------Fin of Chapter 4---------------------------



Chapter 5: The Secret

“I know…..a….secret..”, Mortred said.
“What is it my dear sister?”, Shendelzare asked her but Mortred closed her eyes and started to sleep.
“Her body’s worn out, you must attend the war outside, I will take care of Mortred for you”, Purist Thunderwrath said.
“You must take care of her all else…..”, Shendelzare growled.
‘You don’t need to worry”, Purist said.

Shendelzare went to the battle and helped her comrades.

Meanwhile….

“Rhasta,Rylai, we need to heal Mortred, Shendelzare said she had a secret that has yet to uncover”, Purist said.

“How can we help?” Rylai asked.
“You need to give some of your magic to me to transmit a light vortex,when the light vortex appears, we will enter it” Purist said.

“Ho’ bout our maugick maun?” Rhasta asked Purist with confusion.
“Your magic will be back when we enter the Light Vortex, so no need to worry my dear friend’, Purist said with exceedingly high charm.

“Okay no more delays, let’s start”, Rylai said.

Rylai casted her spell of offering, thus creating a cosmic array of runes formed together by the very essence of her mana and gave it to Purist, thus making him very powerful.

On the other hand….

Rhasta meditated and murmurred some orcish enthrall thus creating a ward that gave the essence of intelligence to Purist, thus making him very powerful.

“In the holy God’s name……” Purist said.
“May this being be repented of what she has done” Purist said.

Then, some Greek hieroglyphics appeared beside the fountain and a vortex containing three rings glowed like the sun. Rhasta,Rylai, and Purist went inside of it unaware of what will happen.

Meanwhile………

“Come to me……..come to me……COME TO ME!” The Lich King’s voice echoed inside Mortred’s head.
Mortred was gasping for breath saying no to every call, and finally she gave in and turned evil again.

“Isn’t that Mortred?” Raigor asked his comrades.
Shendelzare quicky went to her and was about to hug her until…..

“Stop, Shendelzare, STOP!”, Furion’s voice echoed but Shendelzare did not manage to see it.

As Shendelzare hugged her, Mortred quickly unsheathed her thorned weapon and stabbed Shendelzare in the heart making her impossible to heal or reincarnate.

“That’s for you my dear sister”, Mortred’s voiced hissed as she removed her weapon from the chest of her dear sister.

“She has become evil once more! Attack her!” Raigor exclaimed.
“No! look at her eyes, it’s blue, she’s been controlled by the Lich King, don’t stop her, she’s the only key”, Furion said.

Mortred ran quickly to Rikimaru and killed him then Lina then the Goblin Techies.

‘Quickly! Raigor stun her” Mirana exclaimed.

Raigor, with perfect sight, hit Mortred with a direct hit, thus stunning her.

Mortred then was confined in a cell watched by Tiny.

“You must not let her go or she might kill everyone of us’ Furion said.

“hwaaa,hwaaaa hwaaaaa” Tiny said.
Translation: I won’t let you down master Furion.

Meanwhile….

“Are the enemies gonna be powerful?’ Rylai asked Purist.

‘The darker her past the stronger our enemies, if the Lich king were to control her, we would have to battle him” Purist said.

‘Wha’ will happen to the Lich King if we defeat im’ maun?” Rhasta asked.

“If we battle the Lich King in her past, the Lich King won’t die but the possession of Mortred will be gone” Purist said.

“We she be a Sentinel hero then?” Rylai asked.

‘That’s all up to her”, Purist said.

In the Sentinel’s base:

“Tiny, I will kill you if you don’t let me go’, Mortred hissed.
Tiny, of course, did not listen to what Mortred wa saying until……

“haaaaaa”, a frost voice freezed Tiny and made the wood fragile and when attacked, will break.
Of course, Mortred attacked the freezed wood cell and continued her way to the Frozen Throne.
“I shall destroy the Sentinel” Mortred said while walking slowly waiting for her new prey to come.

--------------------------------Fin of Chapter 5------------------------------------


Chapter 6: The Awakening


“Kill,kill,kill”, Mortred saying those words as if she is a blood –thirsty monster.

At the Sentinel base…..

“What happened to Tiny, why is he frozen?” Furion asked Mirana anxiously.
“Furion,the Lich King has took over mortred’s body”, Mirana said griefly.
“How did he become ice, Mortred has no power of ice”, Furion asked.
“The Lich King left his throne and feasted on the mind of Mortred, making her savage and monster-like’, Mirana said.

‘I wish Purist.Rhasta,and Rylai come back soon and finish the mission before something bad happens”, Furion said.

At Mortred’s mind:

“Holy Light!”, Purist exclaimed.
“Frost Nova!” Rylai exclaimed.
‘Ashphyrium” Rhasta exclaimed.

“What are these ghouls, they are very powerful!’ Rhasta asked.
‘These are the ghouls probably in Mortred’s mind, she wants her ghouls to be more powerful to defeat the Sentinel easily”, Rylai answered.

“look the second vortex has opened, only 2 more and we can finally free Mortred”, Rylai shouted.

Purist finishing off the last ghoul came to the Light Vortex and said , “Holy light, guide our way”.
The second vortex opened and there they were facing Luna and Tinker.

‘I’ll handle Luna”, Purist said.
‘So we will haundle Tinkurr’ Rhasta declared.

Luna casts her Lucent beam but was uselss because of Purist’s repel, Purist tried to attack back but the night panther of Luna was too fast for Purist.
Luna casts her lucent beam again and succesfully hit Purist.
“Rylai, I need help’ Purist declared.
Rylai was running when, a heat-seaking missile hit her back, she was paralyzed and she couldn’t cast her spells.
“Damn you Tinker!”, Purist exclaimed. Tinker was laughing and laughing.

‘I will caust muh’ shackles on you yah gobli’” Rhasta said.

Rhasta was able to overpower Tinker and managed to defeat him, but Rhasta was very worn out and fell unconscious.
The battle was very intense, two mighty followers of the Sentinel fighting each other.
Luna casts her Lucent beam again and hits Purist. Purist was going to fall but a voice echoed in the dark oblivion.
‘Purist, Purist”, a voice echoed and bellowed.
“The way to defeat Luna is to hit her glaives and escape her spells”, a voice said.
As Luna threw her glaive, Purist hit it rendering it useless.
Purist escaped her spells and cast repel to stop from excess damage.
Luna was defeated and Purist came quickly to Rhasta and healed him.

“I’mma alright maun” Rhasta said.
Purist tried to heal Rylai but she was already dead.
“Wha’ happened to Rylai?” Rhasta asked.
“She’s dead, that missile was more powerful than I thought” Purist said.

As Rhasta and Purist entered the third vortex. They saw each other, as a matter of fact their own shadow depicting them.

The shadows attacked and almost killed Rhasta.

“Help……”, Rhasta said depicting his last word.


---------------------------Fin of Chapter 6-------------------------

Chapter 7: Vengeance


“Help……”, Rhasta said depicting his last word.
“Rhasta! No!”, Purist said while he hit his shadow.
‘I shall finish you all”, Purist said.
Purist used the full potential of Rylai and Rhasta’s mana essences and his hammer became bigger and glowed like the Sun and the stars.
“I didn’t want to use this until we reach the Lich King, but I have no choice”, Purist said.
As he hit his shadow with his Radiance Hammer, he felt as if his heart was tightening.
“ugggghhh, just as I expected”, Purist said.
When Purist hits his own shadow, he also hits himself dealing the same damage as his shadow experienced.
He was able to finish his shadow, but he was too weak to fight Rhasta, or so he had thought….
When shadow Rhasta was going to strike and finish Purist, an Ice Nova occurred and a shackle immobilized the shadow Rhasta.
‘We are here to help you Purist”, Rylai said.
“I though you were dead” Purist said in surprise.
“We are dead, Thunderwrath, but our spirits were given to you to help you in this battle” Rylai said.
‘I don’t get it”, Purist said.
“While we were dead, you’re pure hammer gave us time to help us aid you, after this, we are going to the after life”, Rylai said.
“Enough, wasting time let’s move Purist”, Rylai said.
Purist,Rhasta,and Rylai passed the third vortex and met the Lich King himself.
“So this is the unholy Lich King”, Purist said.
‘You shall die you fiend!”Purist exclaimed.
Rhasta and Rylai gave all their powers and dispersed as cosmic mana elevating and going to the sky.
“You can beat him Purist I know you can”, Rylai’s voiced bellowed.
“Yes you can do it maun, every one outside need your help”, Rhasta declared.
As Purist went to the Lich King, he was hit by a Frost Nova colder than the caster himself.
‘You will not stop me from what I will do!” the Lich King said.
‘You are just an image and not the real thing, don’t expect me to believe in you”, Purist said.
Little did Purist know that whom he battled with was the real Lich King.
“In the name of Light, give me the powers to help rid this creature once and for all!” Purist exclaimed.
His holy book shone and showed great hieroglyphics form the greart gods of Greece.
Purist murmurred some Greek incanatations but it was stopped by the Lich king.
‘Remember, you cannot defeat me, and if you do, I still will live and reincarnate myself from the Frozen throne’ the Lich King said.
Purist cast a repel against the almighty magic of the Lich King.
‘I hope my repel lasts long”, Purist said.
Purist murmurred his incanations and focused.
No matter how the Lich King tried to stop Purist with spells, nothing seemed to work.
“Any last words Lich King?” Purist asked.
“Ahhhhhhhh……” The Lich King said with anger.
“I shall save Mortred from this mind controlling demon”, Purist said as his eyes glowed brightly like the golden Divine Rapier.
“Azetha Balana!” The Lich King said.
The Lich King quickly disappeared as Purist was about to cast his spell.
‘I never thought the Lich King would be such a coward”, Purist said to himself.
As Purist said those words, he fainted.
“Purist!” voices echoed.
“Purist!” voices again, echoed.
Purist opened his eyes and he was back from the Sentinel base.
“What happened?’ Purist asked with confusion.
‘You are in the Sentinel base Purist” Furion said.
‘I’m back?” Purist asked again.
‘Where is Rylai and Rhasta?” Mirana asked Purist.
Purist said with grief and few tears, “They were killed in the quest, they gave me all their powers to defeat the Lich King and they went off, in the after life”.

“Is Mortred healed already?” Bradwarden asked.
“She is, I battled the Lich King that Mortred imagined with the help of Rhasta and Rylai”, Purist said.
“Let us use the mystical powers of the World Tree to heal her then”, Furion said.
As they tried to heal her, Raigor, gasping for breath appeared and said, “Furion,Mirana all the heroes are dead and uggghhh…” Raigor’s verdict was silenced.
‘Raigor!” Purist exclaimed.
As Mirana’s tiger spied through the woods, she saw large quantities of Scourge spawns and powerul champions.
“I must warn them quick”, Mirana said.
But as she ran, Pudge hooked her and ate her.
“Ahhhh!”, Mirana shouted with pain.
“hmmmm….Fresh Meat”, Pudge said while chowing down Elune’s most loyal follower.
-------------Fin of Chapter 7-------------


Chapter 8: The Rude Awakening part 1

‘Do you hear that Purist?” Furion asked.
‘Yes, I do, those are the Scourge champions and their large scouts” Purist said.

‘I shall gather all the Sentinel champions and you shall reincarnate Mortred”, Furion said.
“Yes Furion”, Purist said.
And without further hesitation, Purist started the incanation.

Meanwhile……

“My champions, awaken, our base is going to be destroyed’, Furion said.

All the Sentinel champions were guarding the remaining towers and the Sentinel scouts.

The Scourge were huerrying towards the Sentinel’s base to destroy it but instead they were struck by the Lighting Zeus cast.
Zeus was about to cast his lightning spells but Razor deflected it.

‘Aye, so we battle then yah lightnin’ freak”, Zeus declared.
Leshrac was pushing fearfully and proudly when.
“illuminate!”, Ezalor was there killing all his creeps in one spell and hurting Leshrac with severe damage.
“You dare torment me?!?” Leshrac asked.
‘Well, this had better be worth it”, Ezalor said.

Slardar was in the middle lane killing almost everyone he sees but his allies until, in a blink of an eye all his creeps died, he saw three figures of a naga siren.
“You shall die”, Slardar said.

Zeus’s battle:

Zeus and Raor didn’t even speak, they fired everything they got. Zeus fired his bolt hammer and razor summoned lightning to attack Zeus.

‘I am the God of Thunder no one opposes me!” Zeus exclaimed as he turned into an avatar using his favorite item, the Black King Bar.

Razor had nothing to do, he cannot cast is spell at Zeus because Zeus had magic immunity.

“now ya’ have notin’ ta do, you Lightning phoney”, Zeus declared.

And Zeus was right, he had nothing to do so he just attacked Zeus knowing that he,Razor, would die in the hands of The Lord of Olympia.

Ezalor’s battle:

“I will show you my torment”, Leshrac declared bringing pain to his verdict.

As Leshrac was going to attack, Ezalor cast his Mana Leak at Leshrac.

“This is not worth my time”, Ezalor said.

As Leshrac’s mana depleted, Ezalor turned himself to his spirit form and cast his ever so powerful Illuminate and crushed the opposition also killing creeps along with the hero.

Slithice’s battle:

“You are just a puny girl”, Slardar said as he casts his Slithereen Crush at Slithice.
“I will destroy traitor Naga’s like you!” Slithice exclaimed.

Slithice casts her net at Slardar and turned herself into 3.

The three Slithice’s were attacking Slardar with everything they’ve got.
Slardar casts his sprint and tries to escape but the mighty Naga Siren sang her beautiful song that only she is impervious to.

When Slardar was awake, a sharp spear entered his heart, making his heart stop pumping Slithereen blood.

‘Where’s Mirana?” Furion asked.

Slithice came back with Mirana’s helmet.
“Who did this to Mirana?” Furion asked furiously.
“From the smell of it, I think the “Pudge’ took care of her”, Slithice said.
‘Protect the towers from further damage and I will take care of Pudge myself”, Furion said.

As Furion carried on to the area of Pudge, he noticed something smelly, it was that wretched Pudge all alone talking to a tree.

There you are you untaught creature.

Furion went to Pudge’s area and summoned his treants at him.
Pudge was able to kill them but more and more treants came.
“Me no like this”, Pudge said.
Furion did not listen to his pleas and continued on spawning treants. He was so furious that he let some green lightning called the Nature’s Wrath, consumed Pudge in his unstable status.

“This is your payback for what you did to Mirana’, Furion said.

Meanwhile……

‘We need to destroy the towers quick attack and- ughhhhh…”, Ezalor’s voice bellowed.

--------------------Fin of Chapter 8 part 1--------------------


Chapter 9: Rude Awakening 2

As Ezalor’s voice bellowed, he quickly summoned his light to the fog of war. Then, as he casts his blinding light, he saw Pudge and the other champions.
“How could it be, they are suppose to be dead”, Ezalor said while his blood was dripping.
Ezalor couldn’t do anything, so instead, he just layed down and waited for the time to come.
But Ezalor thought of one thing. He sent off telepathic waves through his holy staff and told his comrades about their reincarnation before his time would come.
“Oh no! Oh no!”, the Goblin Techies shouted.
“What? They reincarnated?” Furion said with surprise.
“I must tell Purist to hurry up the healing!”, Furion said as he casts his Teleportation spell.
‘Purist you must-“, Furion’s command was stopped.
“Mortred? Is that you?” Furion asked with surprise.
“Yes it’s me Furion”, Morted said.
‘It took some time for her to be good, it was very hard convincing her”, Purist said.
“I understand Purist, because when you defeated the Lich King, her memories were erased”, Furion said.
‘You are right my old friend”, Purist said.
“Anyways, Mortred, Will you help us fight the Scourge?” Furion said.
“No I will not!” Mortred exclaimed with anger.
“Why won’t you Mortred?” Purist asked.
“ I will be loyal to the Scourge only”, Mortred said and suddenly fainted.
‘We will be waiting, Mortred”, Furion said.
Meanwhile…..
“Be careful and plant mines everywhere you pranksters”, Kardel said.
“Ayay captain!” the Goblin Techies shouted with joy.
“That abomination is coming, hide!” Kardel shouted.
They hid behind the trees and the Statis Trap of the Goblin Techies astonishingly worked!
As Pudge was stunned, Kardel and the techies stopped hiding and attacked the abomination.
“Tis’ for you ya wretched creatchu’”, Dwarven declared.
As they both attacked, an unexpected guest came.
“You, are such weak foes”, Abaddon said while he stabbed them.
“Easy……’ Abaddon declared.
The Scourge was dominating. The Seninel had nothing to do.
But something appeared, an indistinguishable twosome.
“It’s Mortred and Rikimaru!” Furion exclaimed.
They all rejoiced and started to battle with all their might and courage.
“Pudge will eat y-“, Pudge’s sentence was interrupted.
“This is what you call a butchered butcher!”, Rikimaru exclaimed.
Abaddon casting his shield, was almost invincible.
“No one can hurt me, no one!” Abaddon declared.
“I will defeat you!”, Purist exclaimed.
Purist was unaffected by the dark energies of Abaddon due to his Holy Repel.
“WHAT?!?”, Abaddon exclaimed.
“I, the Abbadon,defeated?”, Abaddon asked himself.
“Remember this,good will always triumph”, Purist said.

The great war was almost ending and Mortred was with the Sentinel. The Sentinel were destroying the towers of the Scourge and almost reached the Frozen Throne.
Then, suddenly, timed stopped………

------------------Fin of Chapter 9-----------------

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[GOD]Zilla

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cool .. i like the ending ..
plz continue it ..

@off topic
since when did Balanar and Akasha married each other ??!! OMG !
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someone should say 'DIE FOOLS' or there were...xD keep it up
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Hotwasabi123

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skyking10101010 wrote:
someone should say 'DIE FOOLS' or there were...xD keep it up
oh....there are gonna be heroes doing that ^^

i have one question...... who answered the no in my poll xD

oh and Balanar married Akasha because the author said so ^^

maybe i'll put some details...
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Love it!

Do continue it!

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kinda okie...

try to increase the 'suspense-ness'.... ^_^

continue!!!!
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Continue!!!
And I'm still so deeply in love with Saber!

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PRO-feederZ wrote:
kinda okie...

try to increase the 'suspense-ness'.... ^_^

continue!!!!
i will add some when the story is like in the mid part ^^

or maybe the next chapter: chapter 3
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nice .. keep it up .. Smile
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lawrenceleong888 wrote:
Continue!!!
And I'm still so deeply in love with Saber!


really?? cuz i'm very inlove with her too ^^

need more comments ^^ really need more xD
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Keep it comin' Wink

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hmm, it seems kind of disjointed, and lacks suspense.

Your style of writing doesn't provide enough descriptions or character development, a lot of what happens seems to be force fed to the reader, the only rationalizations behind actions are "it happens, because the story says it happens" kind of thing.

You have almost only action sequences, you go from one fight to the next. This is what gives the story it's one-dimensional feel, we don't get to see your idea of the characters, just the short battle descriptions.

Good idea tho, keep writing and your skills will improve Smile
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serpentson wrote:
hmm, it seems kind of disjointed, and lacks suspense.

Your style of writing doesn't provide enough descriptions or character development, a lot of what happens seems to be force fed to the reader, the only rationalizations behind actions are "it happens, because the story says it happens" kind of thing.

You have almost only action sequences, you go from one fight to the next. This is what gives the story it's one-dimensional feel, we don't get to see your idea of the characters, just the short battle descriptions.

Good idea tho, keep writing and your skills will improve Smile
i will try to add some details in it.....^^

this is my first story though^^ i expected it to.......^^
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the more you write, and get feedback, the better you get. keep it up.
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Woot, 3 Chapters in 2 days. Keep Comin baby.

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