[Godzilla Challenge Entry] Stealth Potion

[Godzilla Challenge Entry] Stealth Potion

Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:17 am

Stealth Jersey Potion

Be careful, you who wear drink this one-use-gone jersey potion. Your body will turn like a red ant: unseen, damaging, yet hated and weak.

Price
450

Effects
Upon activation, the bearer becomes invisible, and deals 50/100 backstab damage. But, when invisible, the bearer takes 100%/80% more incoming damage.

Charge disappears when the duration is over (like scroll of town portal)
Backstab damage is normal (reduced by armor, vanguard, stout shield and the like..)
Only deals backstab damage if attacks a target physically (not using spells)
More damage taken type is pure
Uses 1 charge
Maximum of 2 charges
Lasts 15 sec
Manacost: 125
Cooldown: 50

Mathcraft
With a charge: deals 50 backstab damage, takes 100% more damage.
Example: you’re struck by level4 Lucent Beam.
Damage dealt: 300 * 75% = 225
Damage taken: 225 * (100+100)% = 225 * 2 = 450

With 2 charges: deals 100 backstab damage, takes 80% more damage.
Example: you’re struck by level4 Lucent Beam.
Damage dealt: 225
Damage taken: 225 * (100+80)% = 225 * 180% = 405

Discussion
This item will be great for heroes which need positioning, like Raigor, Bradwarden, Slardar, etc. This can be a substitute for Kelen’s Dagger or Lothar’s Edge.

Oh and this is my entry to April Godzilla Challenge, plus my second item idea. Your comments are welcome.

Cheers

Changelog
08/04/09: Edited item name, changed item icon
13/04/09: Edited some stuff allowed by Ghost, edited story and format a bit
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Last edited by last_dota_freak! on Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:23 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:53 am

i almost said this item was very obsolete but then i realized that its like a mini Lothars! NICEEEE!!!

but the damage taken is too much imo, especially considering that it is dealt back as pure damage >.< ouchhhhhhhhhhhhh

but yeah, pretty nice and helpful ^^
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Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:14 am

@ dohyun
>,<
i can't change it before gc is over
but it also deals backstab damage eh?

btw is the story nice enough?
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Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:15 am

http://www.dotastrategy.com/forum/ftopic20194.html
Apparently, you didn't read the requirements... it needs to be a potion, lotion, pill, ... you get the point ><

[Edit]: Bad luck Lol. >< Looks like you'll be dq'd =(

Other than that, i've seen this invis with backstab idea many times before (too many topics too search through, so don't ask >_>) so i'm pretty neutral to the idea. Overall it seems like a cheap alternative to lothars to me (just like Dohyun said) but i view it as being more obsolete than useful

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Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 2:19 am

@ tfs
pfff..
okay then.
gonna change it before a mod figure it out :p
done

oh and i didn't know if there are too many backstab ideas lol
anyway i join the challenge just for fun, so no prob if i lose :p
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Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 5:28 pm

yeah, the story is nice. i like the parallel to the red ant
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Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 11:01 am

lol

btw is there any more parallel to a red ant?
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Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 8:03 pm

red ants:

annoying as hell, kills crops, ferocious in numbers, lives generally in hot places
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Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:58 am


what about: creepy, hated, unwanted, searched to be destroyed
lives near my house *crying*
lol

oh well..
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Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 5:12 pm

lol, yeah those too

im not a big fan of ants in general but black ants > red ants
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Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2009 4:09 am

lol who wants to be a fan of ant?
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 2:37 am

hahahahahah true that true that

besides, bettles > ants
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:00 pm

changes to fit the theme accepted, tweaking numbers is also acceptable (changing ideas is not)....


feel free to modify the XX's

Price : 450

Effects :
Upon activation, the bearer becomes invisible, and deals 50/100 backstab damage. But, when invisible, the bearer takes xx%/xx% more incoming damage.

Charge disappears when the duration is over
Backstab damage is xx
Only deals backstab damage if attacks a target physically (not using spells)
More damage taken type is xx.
Uses xx charge
Maximum of xx charges
Lasts xx sec
Manacost: xx
Cooldown: xx
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 12:06 pm

@ dohyun
lol that

@ ghost
tnx
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 11:47 pm

Lmfao, imagine if you bought it and wondered into a ward area. then you see a zeus tinker lina luna and lion all next to u. NUKE NUKE NUKE Even if you were like effing centaur with 6k hp youd still die lol
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