A Night With Deadly Humor - A Cinderella Story - Chapter 1

A Night With Deadly Humor - A Cinderella Story - Chapter 1

Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 3:33 pm

I know it's not neccesarily DotA themed, but I didn't see anything that said it couldn't be >;]


"NO I WAS HERE FIRST!" "NO ME! I SAW IT!" Traxex sighed. Medusa and Krobelus were at it again; her stupid step sisters were always bickering. All three of them. Come to that, she wondered where the hell Mercurial was. Hmph, maybe she got ran over by a meat wagon. Good riddance.

A knocking on the door signaled the return of their parent. Both the arguing step sisters shrieked at the top of their lungs "MMOMMMMM!" BOOM. The door was knocked down. A voice shout out "MAMA'S HOME!" An 872 pound ball of flesh walked through the door. "MAMA! WE MISSED YOU MAMA!" replied the two sisters in perfect unison. Traxes mentally laughed then counted.. one.. two.. THREE. At three the sisters resumed their argument. "WELL I SAW IT AND-" "NO DON'T LIE I SAW IT AND THAN YOU WERE LI-" "SILENCE!" Roared Pudge.

Pudge quieted down. "Well girls, Kel'thuzad is looking for a hand in marriage to his step son, N'aix. Now which one of you lovely ladies wants some of that handsome devil? "OOH OOH ME MEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEMEE!" the expected response came, once again simoltaneously. Krobelus turned around, looking shocked, and slapped Medusa across the face. "GAHAHAHAHHHHHH!" Pudge screamed, and then clamped his jaws around Krobelus. Everyone was quiet for a few moments, but the performance was so comic that Traxex, sitting in a corner polishing her bow, could not help but giggle.

Pudge's face dropped into whatever impassiveness its fleshy tissue could make. "What was that my dear?" Traxex had a guilty, scared look on her face. "N-nn-nnothing ss-ssttepmother." Pudge grinned, "Oh yeah it was something sugar bun, and you are going to PAY!" Pudge turned around to the counter, grabbed a meat hook, and threw it at Traxex. In one fluid motion, Traxex jumped over the hook and shot an arrow into pudge's skull, ending whatever life he had left.

A shadow bubbled behind her, confused, Traxex turned around. Mercurial was back. "TTTTTTTTTTRAAAAAXXXXXXXXEXXXXXXXXXXX... WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!" She beat her to the ground. "YOU.." She stepped on her back. "KILLLEDD..." She kicked her away. "STEP MOTHER!" She threw a dagger at Traxex's heart.


-To be continued shortly-
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 9:35 pm

lol funny so far

btw, is this for the contest? if so, post a link of it in a reply in the main thread
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 9:39 pm

I like it. It relates to the team of Cinderella but doesn't copy it word for word.
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 1:09 am

It fits pretty well with the theme except that you need to finish the entire story before submitting or if you can finish well before the judging is to begin..

P.S We NEED non-DOTA stories anyway
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 1:15 am

its good..
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 1:17 am

@varun...

It's just the names...

No matter...

Btw...I like this story...

Traxex=Cinderella I presume?
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 1:22 am

I was replying to his very first sentence in the chapter, that he was actually doing the thing we needed without realising it!
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 3:45 am

Hilarious! I like ^_^.
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 10:22 am

@dohyun
where will we vote..? here or in the tournament thread>?
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 11:17 pm

in this thread:
http://www.dotastrategy.com/forum/ftopic21560-0-asc-0.html
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 11:21 pm

made me laugh!

good job! i lol'ed about pudge... lol
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 1:56 am

Sigh.. unfinished like most of the entires!
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 7:40 am

-minichapter-1.1-


Traxex quickly rolled away as the dagger struck the ground. Mercurial stood, shocked. "How did you evade that?!" she roared at Traxex.

I have level three Marksmanship! I used the extra forty-five agility to gain enough speed to dodge that arrow! Traxex excitedly yelled at Mercurial.

"Whaaaa...?"

Traxex had just burbled a bunch of nonsense and had no idea what she said, but she made use of the Spectre's confusion to flee out the window.

LOL, I just had that idea and thought it sounded hilarious.
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 1:32 am

WTF?? Nonsense is good
Continue!
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 3:57 am

LOL

hope to see you continue and finish it even if the contest ends
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