A Cinderylai Story - Issue 1

A Cinderylai Story - Issue 1

Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 12:47 pm

*Twit,Twit,Twit*Come here doggy!*Arf!!*Let's go to grandma and ask her to tell us a story!Would you like that little doggy!?*dog is wagging tail*Come!
Little Timmy:Grandma!Grandma!Where are you Grandma!?
Grandma:Im here my child!Here at the kitchen!
Little Timmy:Grandma can you tell us a story!?
Grandma:But im busy cooking your lunch!Maybe later.
Little Timmy:But i want to hear a story now!you can cook our luch after you tell me the story!Is that Ok!?
Grandma:Oh!alright!I can't say no to my loving Grandson!Let's go to the study room shall we!

Grandma took little Timmy to the study room and picked up a book that she always read to her daughter,Timmy's mother....

Grandma:Today my grandson i will tell you the story of one girls dream to marry a prince!Her name is Cinderylai......

The story begins in a place where all people on story books lives no matter what kind of story it is, is in a little village full of disgusting beer drinking man and women.Our leading lady of the story lives in a big house with 2 ugly step sisters Arhastasia and Drazilla and 3 little pigs........3 LITTLE PIG?????anyway let's begin her story......

Drazilla:Cinderylai!!Cinderylai!!where are you B**ch!!
Cinderylai:Yes!Drazilla what is it?*Pant*Pant*
Drazilla:Why are you panting!and why are you all sweaty?
Cinderylai:I'm sorry Drazilla!i just came from shopping!You now there was a big sale on Wall-Mart so i have to go and buy this awesome CD of my favorite band "The BoneyCrew", i really love their Metal songs especially the "Tickle My Funny-Bone" and "Eat my liver and Chew my bone"!
Drazilla:Alright!alright!enough of this!I called you because i was hungry!go fix me something to eat!
Cinderylai:Ofcourse Drazilla!Would you want some Mocha Latte to go along with?
Drazilla:Just get me some food!

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Back to Grandma and Little Timmy....

Grandma:Cinderylai, as you may now know,Loves heavy metal and is a big fan of it!So big fan that she even has a tattoo of her favorite vocalist, Clinkz Daughtry in her Buttocks!!
Little Timmy:Grandma is Cinderylai Beautiful?
Grandma:But ofcourse my son!she is the most beautiful girl in the village and probably in the whole land!That is why her evil step sisters of her treats her as a slave because they envy them for her beauty!
Grandma:Let's get back to the story.....

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As Cinderylai was about to get the food, when She heard a great big yell outside......

YYAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

Arhastasia:Cinderylai!!Can you like!Get you filthy horny Mutt off my leg!He's Like, Humping me!!
Bradly the Dog:*Ruff*Ruff*
Cinderylai:Bradly stop that!That's not very nice!*Get's a grip of Bradly and tries to pull him away*Bradly!Come on get off Arhastasia!*Still trying to get Bradly off Arhastasia*Ok enough of this Bradly!You forced me to do this But if you don't stop the humping i will throw your chew toy Pucky at the Dump site!!!

Bradly suddenly stopped the humping and followed Cinderylai's orders to go inside the house....

Arhastasia:You should Like!Train your filthy Mutt proper manners!Did you saw how he liked, Doing to me!!That is so uncool!and not pretty!
Cinderylai:sorry Ugly step sister Arhastasia!
Arhastasia:Oh no you didn't!did you just like, call me!?Ugly!?
Cinderylai:Oh!no!no! i was talking to myself and your not ugly at all!With you long brown and smelly,Pointy Teeth and your white Velvet Mustache!None will ever dare to think your Ugly*Except Me Ofcourse.Can't she see she has a serious cavity problem and she really has bad attitudes*Your beautiful!!!
Arhastasia:Your Like, true to the very detail!Oh!I like, almost forgot!I need you to buy me the most beautiful dress in the mall!The prince charming is Like, Going to make a ball and were invited!
Cinderylai:Am i invited too!??
Arhastasia:Ofcourse not!One look of the prince at you and he'll be disgusted!Besides you don't have like, any clothes other than what your wearing right now!BTW!that Heavy Metal uniform is pretty but still not fitting to be used in the ball!So go talk to the hand!*Shoves Arhastasia's filthy hands on the face of Cinderylai*Now go and do my bidding!Go get me that dress!before the sale comes to a close!
Cinderylai:Ofcourse Arhastasia!
Drazilla:Cinderylai!Where's my food!?i can't watch Desperate House Wives without my food!
Cinderylai:Right away Drazilla!
Arhastasia:Hey how about my dress!
Cinderylai:But!Drazilla!and the dress!Oooh!what's should i do!?It's hard being a slave of two evil-ugly-stinky step sisters!and it's almost time to watch American Idol!

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Back to Grandma and Little Timmy.......

Grandma:Let's pause there for the time being!I need some cooking to do!Now run along and play with your dog at the garden!We'll continue the story tomorrow!Is that Ok huh Little Timmy!?
Little Timmy:Ofcourse Grandma!I'm excited to what happens next at Cinderylai!Ok Grandma I'm gonna go now!See you later!!

===To be Continued===
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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 1:47 pm

LOLWUT!!!!!!!!

Hahaha that time zone are pretty future XD
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:33 am

@skyking
no.. you lolwut.. haha..
@clare
haha.. teh.rock.cinderella
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 12:44 am

lol twisted cinderella
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 6:00 am

The truth about cinderella is she is really a Metal girl!
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 6:18 am

hahaha!!!i enjoyed reading it.especially the clinkz daughtry part..hahaha!!is she a big fan of american idol?..please post the continuation....asap!!!

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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 6:25 am

Sure!But i think i need to put it in the same post because it's my entry for the Fanfic competition!But i don't know!?
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 6:26 am

continue pls
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 8:40 am

@daxisonlyme
Patience young one!Patience!
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 4:41 pm

Lol, nice storry. Made me laugh.



Anyway, Dohyun said no stories in chapters for the competition....so are you entering with only this or....?
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 5:06 pm

Metal head
Enjoyed reading. Can't wait for the next chapters
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 10:17 pm

@Sinclare & Gunslinger

chapters are accepted as long as the story is finished before the deadline

SO HURRY UP!!!!

and nice story so far btw, very funny ^^
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 11:55 pm

Now this is more like it! Cinderella doesnt have to be all pretty and fun, your version can be horror, sad, comical etc..
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A Cinderylai Story - Issue 2

Posted: Fri May 22, 2009 1:51 pm

The sun is almost done and Little Timmy is still bored....
Little Timmy:i still don't have anything to do....Maybe i should go to Grandma and ask her if she can continue the story!
Grandma:*Drinking tea while reading a book entitled "Twilight"*
Little Timmy:Grandma!Grandma!tell me the story again!!!About Cinderella!
Grandma:Oh!!You want me to continue the story again?but i was about to tell you that tomorrow!
Little Timmy:But i want to know what happens next!Tell me the story again!Come on!!
Grandma:Oh!Alright!let's go to the Study room again!
At the study room.......
Grandma:Ok Timmy sit down and i'll tell you what happened next....
Let the story begin.......

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Alright we shall continue where we stopped before!Obviously!.Cinderylai was ordered to buy the most beautiful dress on the mall for Arhastasia while Drazilla ordered her to make a sandwich before she could watch Desperate Housewives.....

Arhastasia:Hey Drazilla i am like, Ordering Cinderylai to buy me a new Dress so like back off or i will slap you in the face!!!
Drazilla:Why you!i was the first one to order her so you should be the one to Back off!!
Cinderylai:*Listening to the tune of Clinkz Daughtry's famous song "Home"*I'm Going home, to the place where i belong and where your love has always been enough for me.........

Arhastasia:Hey Cinderylai didn't i like ordered you to buy me a new dress!!
Drazilla:No don't follow her!Get me that sandwich!!

While the two ugly step sisters were busy fighting over our little Cinderylai!Her evil and Dark step mommy Lady Motremaine just came from hawaii.....

Lady Mortremaine:You two stop it!!!*steps out of their luxurious multimillion limo*
Arhastasia & Drazilla:LOLWUT!!!!!!!
Lady Mortremaine:I have a greater idea!Why don't we all go shopping on the mall and let Cinderylai do all the carrying for us!What do you say?
Arhastasia:That's fine by me!
Drazilla:Me too!
Lady Mortremaine:Then it's settled!we are going to the Mall!!!!!!Get your stuff ready cause were leaving today!!we can't afford to loose that Big Sale!!

While Cinderylai is still listening to the tune of "Home"...The two ugly step sisters and Lady Mortremaine were readying themselves for the Mall!!

Lady Mortremaine:Cinderylai get inside quick!!!!
Cinderylai:*still listening*Lalalalala....
Lady Mortremaine:Cinderylai!!!!!
Cinderylai:*still listening*I'm going Home......
Lady Mortremaine:WTF!!!This Bi**h is really annoying me!*Takes her slippers off and throws it in the head of Cinderylai*!
Cinderylai:*slams down at the ground because of impact*Ouch!who did that!Oh!coming right up!

Cinderylai,Lady Mortremaine,Arhastasia,Drazilla were on their way to the mall to buy random things they think is beautiful for them but they are wrong because they are ugly,Fat,smelly and they have an ugly face!!!!i'd prefer seeing someone being stabbed repeatedly than see Lady Mortremaine,Arhastasia and Drazilla's Fu**ing faces!But for Cinderylai i could stand for hours watching her.....Enough of this let's continue to the story.......

Driver:Were here mam!
Lady Mortremaine:Alright let's go and buy us some new dress for the ball!!
Arhastasia & Drazilla:YES MOTHER!!!
Cinderylai:Can i also do some shopping mother!?
Lady Mortremaine:No you can't!you're here to carry our bags!that's your job now go and carry our bags!

They started roaming the mall trying to look for the best dress they can find....while on the mall cinderylai got separated from them and also started looking at the different and beautiful dresses she sees.....

Cinderylai:These dresses are so beautiful...i wish i had one....But mother won't let me buy new dresses!I have to work double-time at the Mcdonalds just to buy a new Iphone!*Sigh**Riiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnggg!!!!!*Oh!my Phone is ringing!*picks up her Iphone*hello!?*started walking while talking to the phone*
Lady Mortremaine(at the phone):Cinderylai where are you!?we need someone to carry our bags!get here!
Cinderylai:Coming right up Mother i just have to find!Ugh!....

While Cinderylai was talking to the phone she suddenly bump into someone and dropped her phone....

Unknown Person:*ugh*Sorry...i didn't mean to bump into you....are you hurt?
Cinderylai:Ow!ow!ow!*stands up and fixes up her dress**looks at awe with the Unknown Man*No!No!i'm ok!BTW!.....You look Just like Davion Cook!
Unknown Person:LOLWUT!?really?i never saw myself as him before when i look at the mirror!Anyways....again sorry for bumping into but i got to go!!!May i know your name?
Cinderylai:My name!?It'll cost you 5 bucks!
Unknown Person:*reaches up on his pocket and takes 5 bucks and gives it to cinderylai*Here...
Cinderylai:I'm Cinderylai!
Unknown Person:Cynderylai....What a beautiful name!Got to go bye!!!
Cinderylai:hey wait you haven't given me your name yet!
Unkown Person:It'll cost you 100 bucks....and i think you don't have it so i won't tell you!Bye!!

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At grandma and little timmy......

Litle Timmy:Grandma what happened to Bradly the dog?
Grandma:Bradly is still on their house sitting in his favorite bed near the door!and everytime the door opens, it hits the bed of Bradly and send Bradly flying to the other room.He's ok!

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Back to the story.......

Arhastasia:Where were you Cinderylai?I was like, having a bad time carrying this bag of clothes!
Lady Mortremaine:Were done here!let's go back to the house!Take our bags Cinderylai and put it in the limo!
Cinderylai:Yes mother!

While the Limo was heading towards the house of Cinderylai, She suddenly remembered the Guy who looks like Davion Cook and wonders what's his name was?and she still wondering if ever she can buy a new dress......

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At grandma and little timmy......

Grandma:Ok Timmy that's enough for now!I still have more to tell you but don't rush Ok!
Little Timmy:Ok Grandma!see you!
Grandma:Bye!

-+to be continued+-




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Posted: Sat May 23, 2009 5:16 am

whew funny
but btw you plan to continue it to chapter issue *name any numbers here*? i wont
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