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What do you think of this hero?

No ending time set.
Ugly 30% [ 4 ]
30%

Joker is Pudge's little brother? 30% [ 4 ]
30%

Can compete in the BC's with other heroes 15% [ 2 ]
15%

Handsome like Brad Pitt 23% [ 3 ]
23%

KevinMaster

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The Joker - The maniac Clown (June BC entry)



Okay! this is my first BC entry so far! don't get too harsh at me if it's no good!
The June BC is superheroes, but I make super-villains myself. It's more interesting!
Here's my entry guys!



The Joker - the Maniac clown
Range: 100 | Move Speed: 290
Primary: INT
Str: 20 + 2.5 | Agi: 10 + 1.1 | Int: 24 + 2.9
Damage: 45 - 50 | HP: 530 | Mana: 312
HP Regen: 0.85 | Mana Regen: 0.97
Attack Speed: 1.54 | Armor: 3

The Joker is one of the worst criminal in Gotham city. He was once a criminal named Red Hood. He was a scientist looking to steal from the company that employs him and adopts the persona of Red Hood. After committing the theft, which Batman thwarts, Red Hood falls into a vat of chemical waste. He emerges with bleached white skin, red lips, green hair and a permanent grin. Depressed by it, he eventually traveled and traveled. Until finally he actually arrived in Azeroth. Because the change of climate and everything, his body can't withstand it and became a big ugly monster. He met a necromancer that said he could cure Joker's appearance. But only after he served the Lich King first. So he joined the scourge and make their enemy laughed until they eventually died from it.


Laugh Bomb (G)
The Joker always carry a nasty Laugh Bomb with him. Joker throws this to an AOE of 500. Deals damage and get a "Laughing" buff.
Level 1 - Deals 100 damage. "Laughing" buff last 2 secs.
Level 2 - Deals 150 damage. "Laughing" buff last 3 secs.
Level 3 - Deals 200 damage. "Laughing" buff last 4 secs.
Level 4 - Deals 250 damage. "Laughing" buff last 5 secs.
Let me explain what laughing buff is. The enemy who gets laughing buff will have reduced movement speed by 10%. And every second, they will actually laugh for a short period of time and have a effect like shadow's strike on top of it. (no ministuns nor disables)
Mana Cost: 150
Cooldown: 20
Framework: Throw a green bottle into the AOE and have a green fog effect.


Breath Gas (R)
Being tunred into an ugly creature, the joker can use his breath to damage the enemies in front of him in 500 range. The enemies get "Laughing" buff for 3 secs. The "Laughing" buff stacks with other skill.
Level 1 - Deals 75 damage
Level 2 - Deals 125 damage
Level 3 - Deals 175 damage
Level 4 - Deals 225 damage.
Mana Cost: 100/120/140/160
Cooldown: 20
Framework: Just breath a green gas in front of him.


More Laughs! (-)
As a maniac clown, the joker always want more laughs from the enemies. Increase the duration of "Laughing" buff.
Level 1 - Increase by 1.5 secs
Level 2 - Increase by 2 secs
Level 3 - Increase by 2.5 secs
Level 4 - Increase by 3 secs
Mana Cost: -
Cooldown: -
Framework: Get a black greenish aura around him.


Laugh is the best medicine! (G)
Laugh IS the best medicine for everyone. Even enemies of the joker. Everytime the Joker activates this, he deals minor damage in 700 AOE. Every time an allies laugh, they will heal by a certain amount of their max HP. But for every enemy they will get damaged by a certain amount of their max HP. Last 15 secs.
Level 1 - Allies get healed by 2% of their max HP everytime they laughed. Enemies will get damaged by 2% of their maximum HP. Deals 100 Damage after activation.
Level 2 - Allies get healed by 3% of their max HP everytime they laughed. Enemies will get damaged by 3% of their maximum HP. Deals 125 damage after activation.
Level 3 - Allies get healed by 4% of their max HP everytime they laughed. Enemies will get damaged by 4% of their maximum HP. Deals 150 damage after activation.
Gives enemy "Pain of laughter" and allies who struck by this skill "Joy of laughter" which everytime they laugh making the effect happen.
Mana Cost: 150
Cooldown: 25
Framework: everytime allies laughed they will get a healing effect from omniknight. enemies that laughed will get a LVL? death effect froom doom bringer.
Discussion:

First the hero model


the only thing i could find for joker

Next the skills

~Laugh Bomb~
The first initiator to a battle. It deals a lot of damage in AOE. And give the enemies the "Laughing buff", the most important part of the joker's skills. It could be used for farming pretty well if you already had the ulti. It can also used to last hitting enemy heroes.

~Breath Gas~
Another initiating skill. Deals a fair amount of damage and quite large range. Used to last enemy hero that's gone quite far from you. Another "Laughing" buff with only 3 secs.

~More Laughs!~
A passive skill that increase the laughing time that deals more damage for the 4th skill.

~Laugh is the best medicine!~
A nuke ultimate which gave the real effect of the "Laughing" buff. Without this skill, "Laughing buff won't do any much good. And it deals a slight damage which can also be used for last hit.
~For your information~
The laughing buff stacks with other skills. SO the total time would be 5 secs(LB) + 3 secs(BG) + 3 secs (AMC) + 11 secs overall. so the total damage is only 44%. less than enigma's midnight pulse (48%) of maximum Hp. I think it's balanced well enough.

~Skill build~

1. Laugh Bomb
2. Breath Gas
3. Laugh Bomb
4. Breath Gas
5. Laugh Bomb
6. Laugh is the best medicine!
7. Laugh Bomb
8. Breath Gas
9. Breath Gas
10. More Laughs!
11. Laugh is the best medicine!
12. More Laughs!
13. More Laughs!
14. More Laughs!
15. Stats
16. Laugh is the best medicine!
17-25. Stats


~Pros and Cons~`
Pros:
- Good INT gain of 2.9
- Good STR gain of 2.5
- A vey good support to allies
- deals heavy damage in large AOE

Cons-
- No escape mechanism
- Poor AGI gain of 1.1
- Really item dependant
- not so good if alone



~Synergies~
there's actually only one synergy.
Laugh is the best medicine(initiator) + Laugh bomb(nuke) + Breath gas(nuke) + More laughs(boost) and let them die while escaping! MWAHAHAHAHAAA!!!!


the only other synergy is adding guinsoo's and shiva's to it.

~BONUS~
worst enemy = Levi! his kraken shell can remove all buffs within partial seconds! your skills all must be buffed up! and this is no enemy to be underestimated!

There!
my hero idea is finished!

GOOD LUCK TO OTHER BC'S ENTRANTS!

Need comments to improve this!

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EDIT:
changed the ultimate
clarify that "Laughing" buff deals no ministun at all
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Fakesound

Dominating Posts: 133 Joined: 10 Oct 2007 gold



sounds like a pudge wards combo imo

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KevinMaster

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only the model is.....
nothing else is similiar to pudge....
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hoothoot

Dominating Posts: 132 Joined: 18 Mar 2009 gold



humorous hero......I love it......

all his technique are happy skills......

wait...I have a question here....with this item.....

Breath Gas (R)
Being tunred into an ugly creature, the joker can use his breath to damage the enemies in front of him in 500 range. The enemies get "Laughing" buff for 3 secs. The "Laughing" buff stacks with other skill.

what's the connection of being ugly and nasty breath??? i get your point...i just want to know the relationship....
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dare18

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joker is...superhero ?
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TheGunslinger

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Oh man....I so have to review this....


Stats - Fine, the huge str and str gain can be tolerated when paired up with the meele range and crappy MS(290).


1st skill - fine by itself. But one question - does this affect the aoe around you(like shivas), or the aoe you choose(like nether blast, split earth, etc.). If it afects the AoE you choose, what is the casting range?

2nd skill - also fine, byitself. works like breath of fire skill i can see.

3rd skill - works to boast the other skills, nothing more to say here realy.

Ulti - now, this brings in the imba. Your "Laughing" buff has a major thing to it - the ministun - every second + the slow. It will disable the enemy from doing anything...mostly Also, the ulti works to make them die easily with the buff - even though the damage doesnt seam signifacnt, lategame, its huge. Even early game - since you have 2 good nukes - the damage from the ulti would just be a great finisher - they cant realy run away from the 1000 AoE of the skill either, do to the slow, and the ministuns. All this hero realy needs from items are phase boots and dagon - use your 2 skills and dagon, and let the ulti finish them - you can chase a little with phase boots if needed. I realy don't like the ulti cause of all that...

I myself would increase the amount of damage, but make it a toggle skill(like, for example, Tormented Souls ulti) which drains mana while active.


Thats it from me....
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KevinMaster

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@hoothoot
I made them this way because there's someone in my class that is ugly, and he has bad breath. maybe there's some connection between them

@dare18
I already said the joker is a super-villain! it is allowed.

@TheGunslinger
the 1st akill already said that "Joker throws this on a AOE of 500", it means it is targeted at an area.
-the Laughing buff doesn't deals ministun but every second it just happened the effect of shadow's strike. so no ministun at all.

and btw, who the heck voted for 'handsome like brad pitt' ??!!
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As you said....
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they will actually laugh for a short period of time works like a ministun but no. they don't have the blue spiral on top of it. just like shadow's strike on top of it.

So it has the same effect as a ministun just a different animation...that makes no difference.

And, did you fail to see my comment about the ulti, or are you just ignoring it?
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[quote="TheGunslinger"]As you said....
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So it has the same effect as a ministun just a different animation...that makes no difference.


i agree......and for an ultimate that covers an AoE of 1000 is really imbalace.....

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for the ulti, I couldn't think for the new one... it needs time to think for it...... I'll change it tomorrow or later...
@hoothoot
mercurial's dispersion has a 1000 AOE and it's only 3rd skill (or 2nd)....
if I reduced it to 600-700 I would think it won't deal any damage at all cause your opponents already ran away from you.... that's why I make it to 1000...
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There! I edited the ultimate and 'clarified' that "Laughing" buff deals no ministun at all!!
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awww.... no more comments? I really need to balance this guy....
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I voted for brad pit Smile. And he seems balanced.Let me calculate the damage of ulti, just to see is it imba like they say.
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HOLY CRAP.Can crap be holy?Nvm. So ulti lategame can do up to 56% dmg with just one activation of each skill+the More Laughs! Also, imagine that kind of heal on allies. Cool Smile.
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Quote:
Can crap be holy?

Oh yes it can....





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