That Other Cinderella Story [WB-Entry] - Chapter 4

That Other Cinderella Story [WB-Entry] - Chapter 4

Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 6:29 am

Chapter 1 - The Diary Entry

Dear Diary,
I was so surprised when I saw that cute prince in our class when I went to school.. Turns out he went back here
to manage the castle and the town.. It was a relief.. since we were still kids when I last saw him.. and god... how
handsome he still is! I still remember that cute little smile.. now a sweet smile of royalty.. that warm face, now a face
worthy of worship.. Well.. why am I even telling this to you? Your seeing me blushing again probably.. I don't think I
need to tell you this.. since.. since you knew it even before.. well i'll have to sleep now.. need to wake up early.. I
really wanna have a chat with him.. oh god.. I really like him..

Love,
Ella
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:11 pm

Chapters? Its risky business completing them all by the deadline.. But keep going, its good
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:12 pm

The end

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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:15 pm

Nice

Captain Tesca is back
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♥ I'm fighting for this girl,
On a battlefield of love,
Don't it look like baby cupid sendin arrows from above, ♥

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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:16 pm

i knew it.
tesca is gay.
prince...
fuuu!
XD
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:18 pm

Pffft

You don't have to be gay to write a good story
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On a battlefield of love,
Don't it look like baby cupid sendin arrows from above, ♥

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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:21 pm

3 competitors for Writer's Block!
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:29 pm

OMFG what?? cinderella?? When I saw who wrote the story in the diary, I read "Bella" I remember twilight lol hahaha
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Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:36 pm

Lol, I too was thinking its more a "Cindy" than an "Ella"
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:03 am

Chapter 2 - Princess meets the Prince
Ella woke up as early as she could but then she didn't wake up earlier than expected.. she really needs to have a chat with the Prince.. She hurried up to dress when she heard a familiar voice..
" Ella, Ella we are going to be late!"

" I'm opening the door, dont worry.." interrupted by her step sister Sylvia..

A beautiful woman with blue mysterious eyes.. brown mousy hair.. and a pink glow that is very rare among the people of Theramon, went to open the door, she moved gracefully like a ballerina and opened the door.. upon opening it, she saw a guy in his 20's holding books and carrying a backpack..
his body was slender and (theres no other word for it) sexy.. This has been iminent to Sylvia ever since she met him.. and she liked this kinds of guy.. although he seems to ignore her beauty, but she won't give up.. after all, if he ever gets this really cute guy, it would be all worth it..

"Uhm, Ella? John is here, you're kind of late for school.. but you'll reach the school in time so don't worry.. by the way.. i'm going to go to the university later, so you might not see me when I come.."

"Alright.. hmm.. give me a minute"

and surely after a minute, Ella was already dressed.. she looked pretty right now.. not to mention the red shirt that she wore that was so nice on her..

"you looked really good now" stared dumbfoundedly by John

"oh.. John, Stop doing that face, you look weird " snapped back by Ella

"lets get going then"
"alright.."
"ready for the first day?"
"you bet!"

-to be continued-

@unknown
got her nickname from twilight actually xD
@sopas
srsly.. do you think im finishing that so easily? surely not lol..
@shise
where did I ever go? just high school >_>
@varun
the deadline is today i believe, but since the entries are too few, Dohyun might consider cancelling May-June Writers Block for June-July Writers Block
@other readers
i'm inserting this to my assignments if i have time prolly.. so please abide with me since I wont have that much time anymore..
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Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 7:44 am

Chapter 3 - Start of School!

"here we go, *sigh*", Ella was annoyed, she thought too much about the prince to even fall asleep,

and now here she is, tired and late for school.. but at least they can talk during break times..

too bad she anticipated too much..

She went to the classroom, only to see that the girls were flocking on one table, all of them

talking animatedly and vying for attention.. meanwhile, the guys were talking animatedly at their

different group of friends.. John sat in one of the chairs and after awhile, was already talking

with his friend, Raijiko.. She went inside at once, and went on to see what was the commotion

happening in that table, he saw Prince, which was obviously surrounded by girls, they were all

asking for his number and asking him out for lunch or dinner but he doesn't seem to notice that

he's so popular, not just within the girls of their section, but also the whole group of girls in

our school.. Almost all guys here in the academy envies him, but they can only go as far as hoping

that someone will go out with them.. Some guys including John takes this cooly though, he even

looked cheerful when I glanced at him, probably he doesn't care after all..

The Bell rung.. then they hurried to their seats.. a sexy teacher at her 30's went inside the

room.. she looked at Prince then started introducing herself..
"Gudmorning, I'm gonna be your teacher for Science, my name is Chloe Fukuma, you can call me Ms.

Fukuma, because... because i'm very much single" i noticed Ms. Fukuma blush after saying this, and

I was the only one who probably noticed this, Ms. Fukuma was flirting with Prince.. and this was

funny for awhile until I thought about him.. Can she handle too much attention and flirting from

different students? including teachers?! and that wasn't just all.. I wouldn't have any chances of

talking to him privately.. hmm.. just the two of us.. and I was surprised when I saw him go near

me..

"can I get your number?", he said with a grin in his face..

I feel like this is gonna be the happiest day of my life..

-to be continued -
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Chapter 4 - Whole New Friendship

Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 10:26 am

She blushed again..
why does he read her mind so good?

"Just kidding, umm, my name is Prince, what's yours?" he grinned innocently.

"Ella" Why does he have to forget all about me

"Oh.. nice to meet you!"
"You don't remember me anymore?"
"Errmm... have we met?"
"Of course" Ella's cheeks started going red.

"I seem to have forgotten all about you, oh well..."
The guy grinned again in his innocent way, which really seem to melt Ella..

The Bell Rung..

I need to do something

This was too much for Ella and before she knew it she already said it.

"Would you like to go out with me tomorrow?!"
"Would you like to go out with me?"

They had said the same words at the same time.. now Ella was blushing even redder, She hadn't expected their meeting to be like this, Ella went home happily that day, she can't believe that she's going out with PRINCE!

-to be continued-
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Posted: Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:21 am

See this is the risk with chapters: You couldnt finish in time, and so the scores will be relatively less for the plot and depth criteria: Sorry! But I do want to read this to the end, please continue it..
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Posted: Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:29 am

da** it...all good...hard to judge...

did u finish all of them VSG ?
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Posted: Mon Jul 06, 2009 2:31 am

I finished judging 3 so far, got 4 more to do by tomorrow the latest.. I am still ruing the fact that I couldnt finish my Bard Challenge/Writer's Block entrants in time
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