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it's great!! 16% [ 14 ]


Yes it is. 22% [ 19 ]


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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 9:34 am

@anth; It was hilarious but I said weak coz Razor seems to be missing...... Nice fanfic anyways
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Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 9:48 am



DONTREADIFYOUDONTLIKEITFKINNOOBKSERINALLGAMESFU!!!!

and that people..is how you flame..

lololol..jk..
Razor is too busy farming to care about anything..hehe..

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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 5:49 am

Chapter 10:woot?chapter 10 already?

At last..we are in the mid game..

Razor:Nevermore!!got your Lothars?

Nevermore:oh shit!i forgot about it..can you help me take it pls?

Razor:huh..fine..

….

Razor:what does it look like?
Nevermore:I think it looks like a banana..oh..wait..thats Terrorblade’s..
Nevermore:I think it looks like an axe..
Razor:THERE ARE MANY AXES IN HERE!!
Nevermore:oh yeah..if you click on it..you’ll turn invisible..
Razor:here it is..

…

Razor:there you go..read the precautions first before you use it..

Nevermore:ok..it says..

Precautions:Do not overuse this item.Overuse may cause vomiting,diarrhea,loss of eyesight,loss of brain cells,loss of brain cells,did you see loss of brain cells twice?,that means you are losing you're brain cells..,pimples blow up,reverse peristalsis of your digestive system which will result in vomiting..again..(the rest is blocked by Nevermore’s hand)

Nevermore:done..*uses lothars to gain ms*..
Razor:wait for me!
Nevermore:no way..this thing only lasts for 9 second!

….

Razor:ok..now our mission is to gank on Mirana..
Nevermore:*lothars buff on cd*whaat?cant hear you!
Razor:wtf?let me see that thing..

Precautions:overuse may also cause loss of hearing..

Razor:WTF?!stupid item!

Warning:flaming on Lothars will cause the flamer to get struck by lightning..

Razor:uhh..did I say stupid?i mean..great! LOTHAR’S EDGE IS THE GREATEST ITEM IN THE WORLD!!

Warning:trying to kiss Lothar’s ass will cause cancer!!

Razor:WTF!?

Nevermore:GIVE ME THAT!!THIS IS MY PRECIOUS!!
Razor:take it..it’ll only bring misery to me..

Razor:there she is..we’ll gank her when she’s near our tower..
Nevermore:what?she’s near our tower?lets get em!

Razor:no!!NOT YET MORON!!
Nevermore:take this mirana!!

Mirana:how’d you know my name?!
Razor:faceBook..

Nevermore:*lothars*..lalalalala..feel my Requiem of Souls!!

And in an instant,Mirana’s hp fell to 300..

Razor:*Plasma Field*..

And Mirana’s hp fell to 97..

Mirana:cant..die..yet..must..fulfill..Captain Tesca’..tasks….

And suddenly her body shines and she gains her hp back..

Chen:next time, bring a bottle!!!
Mirana:yeah..whatever…

And Ratster came…

Ratster:WTF?!IT’S RHASTA!RHASTA!

Uhh..yes ofc..

And Rhasta came..

Rhasta:Mirana!lemme help you..

Mirana:ok..disable them pls..
Rhasta:no problem!
And Rhasta tried to hex Razor into a frog..but failed..he misclicked the necromancer..lol..

Rhasta:shit!!well..Guinsoo then..and he turns Razor into a chicken..

Shortly after that,Rhasta started to do his Chicken Dance..

Rhasta:wtf am I dancing?!Mirana!Starfall now!!
Mirana:right!*Starfall*..
Mirana:*singing*Twinkle twinkle little star..how I wonder what you are..like a diamond in the sky..up above the world so high..

Razor:WTF ARE THEY SINGING?!

Icefrog:READ the changelogs!!

Razor reads the changelogs and it says..

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Changelogs:Rhasta will start to do the Chicken Dance once he Guinsoos a hero.
Mirana will start to sing once she casts Starfall.

DON’T SEND ME ANY BUGS!I HATE THEM!
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Razor:WTF!?this game is retarded!
Razor:and ths fanfic is even more retarded!

Mirana:like a diamond in the sky..twinkle twinkle little star..how I wonder what you are!

Mirana: When the blazing sun is gone,When there's nothing he shines upon,Then you,show your little light,Twinkle, twinkle, through the night.Twinkle, twinkle, little star,How I wonder what you are!

Razor:*yawns*huaaa..so sleepy..
Rhasta:*already sleeping*..
Nevermore:*drooling already*..

Mirana: In the dark blue sky so deep,Through my curtains often peep..For you never close your eyes..’Til the morning sun does rise...Twinkle, twinkle, little star..How I wonder what you are..

Razor:*takes a pillow and sleeps*..

Mirana: Twinkle, twinkle, little star..How I wonder...*yawns*..what you are …*ZZZ*

Wow..i feel sleepy after writing this..lol..
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 6:06 am

hahaha LOL...you included me in the last chapter in the library...I fu*king owned silencer bwahahaha
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 6:12 am



uhh..library?
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 6:14 am

Yeah...I think...I pointed at a library sign right?? I kinda forgot...pls correct me if Im wrong
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 6:15 am

oh..yeah..
hehe..i forgot about that..
and yes you did owned him..lol..
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 7:06 am

Precautions:Do not overuse this item.Overuse may cause vomiting,diarrhea,loss of eyesight,loss of brain cells,loss of brain cells,did you see loss ofbrain cells twice?,that means you are losing you're brain cells..,pimples blow up,reverse perstalsis of your digestive system which will result in vomiting..again..(the rest is blocked by Nevermore’s hand)
Hhahahaha Today i read you'r fic from 1-10 its awesome man good job can you add me in to you'r Great Retardet story pls
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:01 am

nice one, u put the techies
can u put me in too?
i like playing clockwerk and raijin for now, but lich is good too
and keep up the good work

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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:46 am

NICE NICE NICE... *applause*
i guess Miranha's voice were so sweeeeet lol.. XD..
good work.. 15/10 for chapter 10
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:46 am

Edit:

Fuuuu DOUBLE POST >_<

anyway.. just edited it... Miranha is singing ze fail song
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:46 am

wootwoot?
everybody wants to be in my fanfic..lol..

@backbone
tell me what hero you want to be and i'll do anything to fulfill it..hehe..

@Krizad
sure..wait for it..

anybody else?

@\->F3lix<-/
you owe me 500 gold..:P

@CT
nice double post..hehe
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 10:07 am

One Word to describe it...

-bleep-!


Anxiously awaiting next chapter!
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 10:28 am


describe what?
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 10:32 am

Sorry to say but i didn't like this chapter not too much comedy for me.

I didn't want to say it right away so i just put the "bleep" word cause i red it again and still i din't like it, sorry.
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