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`pein

Dominating Posts: 182 Joined: 25 Apr 2008 4919 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:32 am

gj Very Happy

nc fanfic
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SINclare21

Mega Kill Posts: 964 Joined: 04 Aug 2008 19338 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:24 am

Nice one! This is even funnier than the first chapter!
Anxiously awaiting next chapter!
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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1165 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29544 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:41 am

Thanks so much everyone for reading and enjoying my fanfic!!
i wish to make chapter 3 today if i have the brain and the creativity that i have a few hours ago..
anyways..thanks so much!!!
enjoy the story..
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SINclare21

Mega Kill Posts: 964 Joined: 04 Aug 2008 19338 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:46 am

Don't rush man!
A good story is made by relaxed,focused and healthy minds without pressure nor stress and if not, you'll just create a mess out of it. So keep it cool and take your time!
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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1165 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29544 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:49 am

oh..ok..thanks for the tip..i'll keep that in mind..
thanks..:P
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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1165 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29544 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:16 pm

Chapter three:Razor:2+2=5!..right?

Mid game..

Aiustha went on saying..
Aiustha:I;m so wasted..i’m so wasted
Until she reached Razor..

Razor:oh no..it’s a talking cow!
Aiustha:what?!a talking cow? Where?!
Razor:*whistling while trying to look as if he didn’t hear anything*

And then came Dare..
Razor decided to pull a prank on Dare..

Razor:hey Dare..
Dare:what?
Razor:*speaking rather fast*Sir Monkeybutt says WHAT..
Dare:WHAT?
Razor:Sir Lickadick says WHAT…
Dare:WHAT?
Razor and Aiushta starts to laugh..

Razor:hey Dare..
Dare:what?
Razor:Sir Pencildick says WHAT..
Dare:WHAT?
Razor and Aiustha laugh so hard they didn’t realized they were torrented by Dare..
(yes…Dare is using Admiral)
Razor:wooohooo..this is better than a jakuzi!
Aiushta:*electrocuted by Razor’s statics*…
Dare:wow..fireworks..

Then Zeus came and started nuking on Aiustha and Razor..
They were getting raped so Aiustha the smart one of their team decided to flee..
Just before Zeus was to Drop the motherload on Razor, a flying hammer hit his head..

Zeus:OUCH!what was that?!
None answered..
Zeus:oh it’s my hammer that ricochet on the trees and hit me..
Zeus:oh yeah..where is that razor..
Razor:yumyum..never tought these corrupted tree would be delicious..
Zeus:there you are!!Feel my Thundergods Wrath!!!
Zeus:*pressing W many times*
Dare:uhh..Zeus?
Zeus:WHAT!?CAN’T YOU SEE I’M BUSY HERE!?
Dare:I hate to interrupt you but…you’re only still level 5..

Lina on the far bot lane..
Lina:*FACEPALM*..

Suddenly Aiushta came running towards Zeus..
Aiushta:I’m so wasted..i’m so wasted..
Zeus:hey there pretty lady..
Aiustha:I’m gay..
Zeus:WTF!
Flodian:WTF!!AWW MANNN!!!
When Zeus realized that Aiushta was gay..
Zeus:OMG!!A TALKING FAT COW!!
Aiushta:What!?Where the heck is this talking cow?!
Zeus:nevermind..
Nevermore who had hearing problems said..
Nevermore:What?you call on me?
Zeus:oh great..just great..another retarded hero…this’ll make my day..

Sven came near Zeus and said..
Sven:you wanna know what I wanna be when I grow up?
Zeus:NO!
Sven;when I grow up,I wanna be famous..i wanna be a star..i wanna be in movies..
Sven:when I grow up, I wanna see the world,drive nice cars..i wanna have groupies..

Zeus:I need a BKB to block these kinds of retarded chats..

Razor came an said..
Razor:hey Zeus!
Zeus:OMG!!HERE COMES THE WTFPWNNOOBGAYDAGONMANTASTYLER!
Razor:can’t talk right now…need..to..*FART!*ooh..*FART SOME MORE*..yeah baby..thats it..*RAZOR THE FARTING MACHINE*..aaahh..yes!!yes baby yes!!!!
Aiushta:is he..having an orgasm?

Zeus:WTFISWRONGWITHALLOFYOUARENTYOUSUPPOSETOBEFARMINGORSOMETHING!!!

Razor,Sven,Nevermore and Aiustha looked at zeus..
And after a few seconds..

The sentinel has pwned Zeus for 10 golds..

Razor,Sven,Nevermore and Aiustha:WTF..Only 10 golds??

[this one probably isn't funny enough like the second one..
didnt take SINclare's tip..] Laughing

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Dark_3

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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:20 pm

Yup..

I love the 2nd chapter, this, loved it but not that much..

I really laughed at:

Zeus:*pressing q many times*
Dare:uhh..Zeus?
Zeus:WHAT!?CAN’T YOU SEE I’M BUSY HERE!?
Dare:I hate to interrupt you but…you’re only still level 5..

lol.

=)
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Unkn0wn

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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:27 pm

LOL hahaha made me laugh...and thundergod's wrath is W...not Q Smile

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backbone_

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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:31 pm

nice Laughing

and i think Ench is travestite Very Happy

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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1165 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29544 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:32 pm

oh..thanks..i'll edit that right now..
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kill~me~if~u~can

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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:34 pm

ya,thunder wrath is W not Q
really made me laugh
Smile

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sloonzz

Mega Kill Posts: 521 Joined: 27 Sep 2008 12153 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:38 pm

Nice one man!!
Especially the level 5 Zeus part!
This inspired me to make a fanfic in the future.
Keep it up!!
Nice job!
Laughing

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SINclare21

Mega Kill Posts: 964 Joined: 04 Aug 2008 19338 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:52 pm

Nice job bro!
It's ok!I like it!but my fave is the 2nd chapter!
Anxiously awaiting next chapter!
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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1165 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29544 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:20 pm

with a few hours of sleep..
my brain cells wil be fully recharged..
but i doubt that i will be posting the 4th chapter tomorrow..
XD..
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Unkn0wn

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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:30 pm

@ anthdx

I pmed you already about ur question of the url thingy...^_^
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