A comedy of Razor by anthdx..COMPLETED!
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is this story good?
No ending time set.
it's great!! 14% [ 14 ]
OMG!!!ITS AWESOME!!! 64% [ 64 ]
Yes it is. 21% [ 21 ]
Fluffeh wrote:
...Im not even going to seriously review this
1.It's not funny
2.It's waste of space that could otherwise be something productive like an arts and crafts station. or a fountain...Or a rock
3.Why in gods name do you take the time to spew this out?
4.Honestly this story needs to eat paint and retard itself out of existance, It isn't that far away
5.It doesn't even qualify has fanfiction
6.It's more like a script written by the mentally challenged boy in the dark and sticky corner of your math class.
It may be in the name of fun and you DO have a right to post what you want but seriously.
...Im not even going to seriously review this
1.It's not funny
2.It's waste of space that could otherwise be something productive like an arts and crafts station. or a fountain...Or a rock
3.Why in gods name do you take the time to spew this out?
4.Honestly this story needs to eat paint and retard itself out of existance, It isn't that far away
5.It doesn't even qualify has fanfiction
6.It's more like a script written by the mentally challenged boy in the dark and sticky corner of your math class.
It may be in the name of fun and you DO have a right to post what you want but seriously.
thank you..
if you dont like it,
DONT READ IT!
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I got halfway through the first page. Never said i wanted to read it.
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First of all welcome back dude and thank you for ading my briliance again in your story
And whytf did i get scared from vojin and isnt he from scorge 0_o but anyways was funny 
.BTW i will destroy the fcking Sentinels to the ground ^^ after i drink 20 galons of beer @fluffeh if you want intelegent sense of humor ya fcking NErd watch the fcking discovery chanel There you will see some amebas talking about reproduction lol talking about guys who dont have some retardet sense of humor i know that its in all of us _________________
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its an -apdm game..
thats why VolJin is in Sentinel..lol
@fluffeh
my bad..
if you don't like it,GTFO!
oh snap..your a newbie in here..
well..well..well..
before you comment on my fanfic,
try writing one..
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Midnight-Killer wrote:
Omg, you're a fcking nuts, you ask us whether ur story is good or not, then the selections are 1)yes, it is 2)it's great 3)it's awesome .................. How am I gonna pick , you freak
Omg, you're a fcking nuts, you ask us whether ur story is good or not, then the selections are 1)yes, it is 2)it's great 3)it's awesome .................. How am I gonna pick , you freak
made my day.
was funnier than the whole story.(no ofence to the writer)
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neimi wrote:
made my day.
was funnier than the whole story.(no ofence to the writer)
Midnight-Killer wrote:
Omg, you're a fcking nuts, you ask us whether ur story is good or not, then the selections are 1)yes, it is 2)it's great 3)it's awesome .................. How am I gonna pick , you freak
Omg, you're a fcking nuts, you ask us whether ur story is good or not, then the selections are 1)yes, it is 2)it's great 3)it's awesome .................. How am I gonna pick , you freak
made my day.
was funnier than the whole story.(no ofence to the writer)
ouch!
that hurts!
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backbone_ wrote:
First of all welcome back dude and thank you for ading my briliance again in your story And whytf did i get scared from vojin and isnt he from scorge 0_o but anyways was funny .BTW i will destroy the fcking Sentinels to the ground ^^ after i drink 20 galons of beer @fluffeh if you want intelegent sense of humor ya fcking NErd watch the fcking discovery chanel There you will see some amebas talking about reproduction lol talking about guys who dont have some retardet sense of humor i know that its in all of us
First of all welcome back dude and thank you for ading my briliance again in your story
And whytf did i get scared from vojin and isnt he from scorge 0_o but anyways was funny .BTW i will destroy the fcking Sentinels to the ground ^^ after i drink 20 galons of beer @fluffeh if you want intelegent sense of humor ya fcking NErd watch the fcking discovery chanel There you will see some amebas talking about reproduction lol talking about guys who dont have some retardet sense of humor i know that its in all of us
This is why im losing faith in the internet. Shame.
And who says I want intelecutal humor there is NO humor in this story. The "humor" is a random sequence of events with caps and acronyms in place of "dialogue"
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Fluffeh wrote:
This is why im losing faith in the internet. Shame.
And who says I want intelecutal humor there is NO humor in this story. The "humor" is a random sequence of events with caps and acronyms in place of "dialogue"
This is why im losing faith in the internet. Shame.
And who says I want intelecutal humor there is NO humor in this story. The "humor" is a random sequence of events with caps and acronyms in place of "dialogue"
Hey everybody!
this guy thinks he can review a fanfic by just reading the few lines of my fanfic!
wow..he's so cool!
make a comedy fanfic will ya?
if its funnier than mine, then you win all!
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@Fluffeh
each person is entitled to their own opinions so if you dont like this fan fic, then just move on to another one. dont linger around here arguing with the author if you disagree.
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Fluffeh wrote:
This is why im losing faith in the internet. Shame.
And who says I want intelecutal humor there is NO humor in this story. The "humor" is a random sequence of events with caps and acronyms in place of "dialogue"
This is why im losing faith in the internet. Shame.
And who says I want intelecutal humor there is NO humor in this story. The "humor" is a random sequence of events with caps and acronyms in place of "dialogue"
LOLWUT...You can't have INTELLECTUAL humor if you can't spell intellectual correctly dammit.
intelecutal?!? wtf!!
before you try to correct others, look at yourself first. If you want, I can give you free spelling lessons every time I see you online in DS okay??
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dohyun99 wrote:
@Fluffeh
each person is entitled to their own opinions so if you dont like this fan fic, then just move on to another one. dont linger around here arguing with the author if you disagree.
@Fluffeh
each person is entitled to their own opinions so if you dont like this fan fic, then just move on to another one. dont linger around here arguing with the author if you disagree.
I have pointed that out a long time ago, im just tying up loose ends before I go. And your really throwing out the i'd like to see you do better challenge? Well okay then but its not going to be a comedy because im not a funny person, then again neither are you so lets throw that tits up.
Ill see you in a bit.
I've got some heroes of newerth to get back too.
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Fluffeh wrote:
I have pointed that out a long time ago, im just tying up loose ends before I go. And your really throwing out the i'd like to see you do better challenge? Well okay then but its not going to be a comedy because im not a funny person, then again neither are you so lets throw that tits up.
Ill see you in a bit.
I've got some heroes of newerth to get back too.
...
dohyun99 wrote:
@Fluffeh
each person is entitled to their own opinions so if you dont like this fan fic, then just move on to another one. dont linger around here arguing with the author if you disagree.
@Fluffeh
each person is entitled to their own opinions so if you dont like this fan fic, then just move on to another one. dont linger around here arguing with the author if you disagree.
I have pointed that out a long time ago, im just tying up loose ends before I go. And your really throwing out the i'd like to see you do better challenge? Well okay then but its not going to be a comedy because im not a funny person, then again neither are you so lets throw that tits up.
Ill see you in a bit.
I've got some heroes of newerth to get back too.
first: i never challenged you to make a fan fic. the other people did but you dont have to create one if you dont want to. thats your freedom. but its also the freedom of anthdx to write a fan fic if he wants to. so you shouldnt be so rude. i say rude cause i could say exactly what you said in a more civil manner. understand that, aye?
second: what loose ends? the loose ends you speak of are only loose ends to you and anyone else who disagrees. its all relative...
third: im telling you to not keep arguing with the author when you can just say your opinion and end it there. so why are you still here debating? that goes to everyone else goading Fluffeh as well.
fourth: see who where in a bit? if youre saying you want to enter the Writer's Block fan fic competition, then thank you. but if youre not talking bout entering that, i have no clue why you said that.
fifth: have fun with that (HoN). personally id prefer LoL but again, each person is entitled to their own views and opinions. a difference in those shouldnt be a reason to argue. and actually, ive got some DotA to get back to myself
sixth: "neither are you"... subtle flame is still a flame.
seventh: was only your first sentence directed at me? cause the rest doesnt exactly tie into anything ive said before. therefore if the rest wasnt directed at me, you should put either a break (press enter twice) or type "@anthdx". im telling you this cause not doing so may cause future mishaps and lead to more mayhem at a later point in time.
eighth: tits? O.o
ninth: since you want to be so blunt about everything in relation to grammar, diction, and all that jazz, i shall do the same to you. your "your" should be a "youre", since you said tits your "that" should be a "those", and your "too" should be a "to". was it necessary for me to point all that out? no. but are you nitpicking? yes. so therefore i shall treat you how you treat others. hence..... i nitpicked your response.
summary: say constructive criticism, not flame
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dohyun99 wrote:
first: i never challenged you to make a fan fic. the other people did but you dont have to create one if you dont want to. thats your freedom. but its also the freedom of anthdx to write a fan fic if he wants to. so you shouldnt be so rude. i say rude cause i could say exactly what you said in a more civil manner. understand that, aye?
second: what loose ends? the loose ends you speak of are only loose ends to you and anyone else who disagrees. its all relative...
third: im telling you to not keep arguing with the author when you can just say your opinion and end it there. so why are you still here debating? that goes to everyone else goading Fluffeh as well.
fourth: see who where in a bit? if youre saying you want to enter the Writer's Block fan fic competition, then thank you. but if youre not talking bout entering that, i have no clue why you said that.
fifth: have fun with that (HoN). personally id prefer LoL but again, each person is entitled to their own views and opinions. a difference in those shouldnt be a reason to argue. and actually, ive got some DotA to get back to myself
sixth: "neither are you"... subtle flame is still a flame.
seventh: was only your first sentence directed at me? cause the rest doesnt exactly tie into anything ive said before. therefore if the rest wasnt directed at me, you should put either a break (press enter twice) or type "@anthdx". im telling you this cause not doing so may cause future mishaps and lead to more mayhem at a later point in time.
eighth: tits? O.o
ninth: since you want to be so blunt about everything in relation to grammar, diction, and all that jazz, i shall do the same to you. your "your" should be a "youre", since you said tits your "that" should be a "those", and your "too" should be a "to". was it necessary for me to point all that out? no. but are you nitpicking? yes. so therefore i shall treat you how you treat others. hence..... i nitpicked your response.
summary: say constructive criticism, not flame
Fluffeh wrote:
I have pointed that out a long time ago, im just tying up loose ends before I go. And your really throwing out the i'd like to see you do better challenge? Well okay then but its not going to be a comedy because im not a funny person, then again neither are you so lets throw that tits up.
Ill see you in a bit.
I've got some heroes of newerth to get back too.
...
dohyun99 wrote:
@Fluffeh
each person is entitled to their own opinions so if you dont like this fan fic, then just move on to another one. dont linger around here arguing with the author if you disagree.
@Fluffeh
each person is entitled to their own opinions so if you dont like this fan fic, then just move on to another one. dont linger around here arguing with the author if you disagree.
I have pointed that out a long time ago, im just tying up loose ends before I go. And your really throwing out the i'd like to see you do better challenge? Well okay then but its not going to be a comedy because im not a funny person, then again neither are you so lets throw that tits up.
Ill see you in a bit.
I've got some heroes of newerth to get back too.
first: i never challenged you to make a fan fic. the other people did but you dont have to create one if you dont want to. thats your freedom. but its also the freedom of anthdx to write a fan fic if he wants to. so you shouldnt be so rude. i say rude cause i could say exactly what you said in a more civil manner. understand that, aye?
second: what loose ends? the loose ends you speak of are only loose ends to you and anyone else who disagrees. its all relative...
third: im telling you to not keep arguing with the author when you can just say your opinion and end it there. so why are you still here debating? that goes to everyone else goading Fluffeh as well.
fourth: see who where in a bit? if youre saying you want to enter the Writer's Block fan fic competition, then thank you. but if youre not talking bout entering that, i have no clue why you said that.
fifth: have fun with that (HoN). personally id prefer LoL but again, each person is entitled to their own views and opinions. a difference in those shouldnt be a reason to argue. and actually, ive got some DotA to get back to myself
sixth: "neither are you"... subtle flame is still a flame.
seventh: was only your first sentence directed at me? cause the rest doesnt exactly tie into anything ive said before. therefore if the rest wasnt directed at me, you should put either a break (press enter twice) or type "@anthdx". im telling you this cause not doing so may cause future mishaps and lead to more mayhem at a later point in time.
eighth: tits? O.o
ninth: since you want to be so blunt about everything in relation to grammar, diction, and all that jazz, i shall do the same to you. your "your" should be a "youre", since you said tits your "that" should be a "those", and your "too" should be a "to". was it necessary for me to point all that out? no. but are you nitpicking? yes. so therefore i shall treat you how you treat others. hence..... i nitpicked your response.
summary: say constructive criticism, not flame
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dohyun99 wrote:
first: i never challenged you to make a fan fic. the other people did but you dont have to create one if you dont want to. thats your freedom. but its also the freedom of anthdx to write a fan fic if he wants to. so you shouldnt be so rude. i say rude cause i could say exactly what you said in a more civil manner. understand that, aye?
second: what loose ends? the loose ends you speak of are only loose ends to you and anyone else who disagrees. its all relative...
third: im telling you to not keep arguing with the author when you can just say your opinion and end it there. so why are you still here debating? that goes to everyone else goading Fluffeh as well.
fourth: see who where in a bit? if youre saying you want to enter the Writer's Block fan fic competition, then thank you. but if youre not talking bout entering that, i have no clue why you said that.
fifth: have fun with that (HoN). personally id prefer LoL but again, each person is entitled to their own views and opinions. a difference in those shouldnt be a reason to argue. and actually, ive got some DotA to get back to myself
sixth: "neither are you"... subtle flame is still a flame.
seventh: was only your first sentence directed at me? cause the rest doesnt exactly tie into anything ive said before. therefore if the rest wasnt directed at me, you should put either a break (press enter twice) or type "@anthdx". im telling you this cause not doing so may cause future mishaps and lead to more mayhem at a later point in time.
eighth: tits? O.o
ninth: since you want to be so blunt about everything in relation to grammar, diction, and all that jazz, i shall do the same to you. your "your" should be a "youre", since you said tits your "that" should be a "those", and your "too" should be a "to". was it necessary for me to point all that out? no. but are you nitpicking? yes. so therefore i shall treat you how you treat others. hence..... i nitpicked your response.
summary: say constructive criticism, not flame
Fluffeh wrote:
I have pointed that out a long time ago, im just tying up loose ends before I go. And your really throwing out the i'd like to see you do better challenge? Well okay then but its not going to be a comedy because im not a funny person, then again neither are you so lets throw that tits up.
Ill see you in a bit.
I've got some heroes of newerth to get back too.
...
dohyun99 wrote:
@Fluffeh
each person is entitled to their own opinions so if you dont like this fan fic, then just move on to another one. dont linger around here arguing with the author if you disagree.
@Fluffeh
each person is entitled to their own opinions so if you dont like this fan fic, then just move on to another one. dont linger around here arguing with the author if you disagree.
I have pointed that out a long time ago, im just tying up loose ends before I go. And your really throwing out the i'd like to see you do better challenge? Well okay then but its not going to be a comedy because im not a funny person, then again neither are you so lets throw that tits up.
Ill see you in a bit.
I've got some heroes of newerth to get back too.
first: i never challenged you to make a fan fic. the other people did but you dont have to create one if you dont want to. thats your freedom. but its also the freedom of anthdx to write a fan fic if he wants to. so you shouldnt be so rude. i say rude cause i could say exactly what you said in a more civil manner. understand that, aye?
second: what loose ends? the loose ends you speak of are only loose ends to you and anyone else who disagrees. its all relative...
third: im telling you to not keep arguing with the author when you can just say your opinion and end it there. so why are you still here debating? that goes to everyone else goading Fluffeh as well.
fourth: see who where in a bit? if youre saying you want to enter the Writer's Block fan fic competition, then thank you. but if youre not talking bout entering that, i have no clue why you said that.
fifth: have fun with that (HoN). personally id prefer LoL but again, each person is entitled to their own views and opinions. a difference in those shouldnt be a reason to argue. and actually, ive got some DotA to get back to myself
sixth: "neither are you"... subtle flame is still a flame.
seventh: was only your first sentence directed at me? cause the rest doesnt exactly tie into anything ive said before. therefore if the rest wasnt directed at me, you should put either a break (press enter twice) or type "@anthdx". im telling you this cause not doing so may cause future mishaps and lead to more mayhem at a later point in time.
eighth: tits? O.o
ninth: since you want to be so blunt about everything in relation to grammar, diction, and all that jazz, i shall do the same to you. your "your" should be a "youre", since you said tits your "that" should be a "those", and your "too" should be a "to". was it necessary for me to point all that out? no. but are you nitpicking? yes. so therefore i shall treat you how you treat others. hence..... i nitpicked your response.
summary: say constructive criticism, not flame
Internet faith restored, I like this one. And on the grammar bit I don't try for perfect grammar, The more i tend to type with it the more i'll do it naturally.
And I tend to say things that most people wouldn't understand... Such has getting my gob off though that wouldn't be hard to decipher. Oh and do not critique the critq...-er
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I'd try LoL too if I had the beta-key for it.
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