is this story good?

No ending time set.
OMG!!!ITS AWESOME!!! 61% [ 51 ]


it's great!! 16% [ 14 ]


Yes it is. 21% [ 18 ]

Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 1:48 am

@fluffeh
fine..fine..if you dont like it then its ok..
its not like anyone's forcing you to like it..

one more thing..
dont quote long posts..

its easier to put @NAME.
eg. @anthdx
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 3:01 pm

well hope you two resolved everything

@Fluffeh
if you want a beta key for it you can try PMing Ghost, you might get lucky

@Felix
just LOL *facepalm*
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 3:07 pm

@mighty comic creator

Anthdx:WTF, THIS IS FANFIC!

Me:Sorry, hehe

@lousy funny fanfic maker

Anthdx *facepalm*

It was fluffeh i was talking bout...quoted dohjun's part too, just to make it longer a bit, more funny when they see it after a looooooooooooooooooooong post...
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:21 pm



Thanks but I think ill stick with HoN.
LoL looks hilariousy bad

@above poster


I have no idea what you said,care to organise your thoughts into something readable?

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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:23 pm

The FAIL picture was meant for you!
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:27 pm



I said post when you organised your thoughts.
And never use a lolcat picture in association with me; thats hitting below the belt.

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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:31 pm

I see, you would rather wanna pool associated one, or one of the other 1k fail picts out there...

No worries about my thoughts, they are organized...
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 12:51 am

dont spam in here!
this is my thread!
MY THREAD!

its making this thread looks bad..
so just stop it..
if you have anything to say that has no relation with this fanfic, then use the PM button.

thank you.
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You missed the part where I mentioned I was a breed a forum troll apparently.

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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 3:00 pm

No worries, we will bug each other via PM ...
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 4:17 am

28 posts and he gets banned what a shame isnt that a record huh
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 7:44 am

anthdx where is me morty
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Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 12:33 pm

Chapter 12:Battle Sange and Yasha Fury!

Part III

Dwarven:we’re goners..
DK:yep..got that right..
Vol’Jin:don’t fail me now red circle thingy that heals my allies..

And Dwarven was the first to die..

Sloonzz:oh noes..i died..damnit!

And soon it was Zeus’s turn..

Rexxar:I’m baaaack!
Rexxar:of f**k!i’m too late..

And then..and then..

Chapter 13:GG..

Rexxar:*casts ulti*

“BZZZZZT”
Unkn0wn: oh yeah baby!Unknown is here to bring down the roof to the air!
Raijin:wtf?stop posting stupid messages man..

And then Raijin starts to spam all of his spell..

Raijin:gotcha!now feel my remnants!

Puck:FEEL you REMNANTS?oh no you don’t..i ain’t touching anything!
Raijin:wtf?!i’ll kill you!*spams even more*
Unkn0wn:yeah that’s it!now kick his ass!alright..now ulti on him!NOW!NOW I TELL YOU!

Raijin:*looks at Unknown in an annoyed kinda way*
Unkn0wn:oh..sorry..i was getting too carried away aren’t i?

Android:YES YOU ARE!

OD:damn..we’re so dead if help doesn’t come..
Sand King:Donut wurih!i’are hear!

And SK went on doing his super dupper awesome combo..which is..
Ulti->dagger->sandstorm->burrowstrike->dagger->caustic finale-> Burrowstrike->GG..

Which he failed..obviously..

SK:I safeing you know!

And he burrowstriked to a hill then casts his sandstorm when he tried to burrowstrike..
After that,he “accidentally” epicentred when he was going to blink in..

Carnage07:DAMN YOU SK!I’LL SETTLE THIS MYSELF!
Carnage07:err miss..can you..uhh..emm..eeeiii..
Mortred:alright..i’ll do it..
Carnage07:wow..that was easy..

Carnage and Mortred went to the battlefield as fast as they can..
But when they reached there..

Carnage:OMG!everyones beaten up by that guy in a blue dress..

Raijin:IT’S A SUIT!A SUITTT!!!NOT A DRESS!
Unkn0wn:it..it looks great on you sir..i like how your dre-..i mean your suit matches your whiskers..
Raijin:..*sigh*why do I have to stick with this moron..
Unkn0wn:BECAUSE WE’RE A TEAM!
Raijin:no..i’m the master..and you’re the minion..get it?
Unkn0wn..i’m..i’m your minion?OMG!THIS IS THE BEST DAY OF MY LIFE!
Raijin:*facepalm*I was hoping he would cry and GG out of this fanfic..

Aaanywayss..

Mortred:heh..this is going to be eeezzzyyy…

Morted throws herself in front of Zeus and with a few hits of her circle thingy, a red 1257 appeared on her head..

Zeus:aaargh!looks like it’s the end of me!
Mortred:looks like it is..*throwing the last blow on Zues..i mean..Zeus*

But from out of nowhere,the roar of a gun covered them with shock..ness..
The gun Roared again..and this time it managed to stun Mortred..just enough to keep Zeus alive..

Zeus:its about time you came back!

Dwarven:lol..sorry for the late comeback..

Vol’Jin:you’re alive?!
Dwarven:you guys don’t think that I’ll die easily right?

…

Dwarven:guys?did you?
F3lix:well..
Dwarven:aww..come on!

Vol’Jin:Zeus!get back here!
Zeus:I can’t!I’m stuck!
Vol’Jin:who the heck put that barrier in there!
Anthdx:oops..sorry..*removing the barrier*..

Zeus ran as fast as he can towards Vol’Jin but Mortred managed to slow him with her “dagger”..
In a blink,she appeared in front of Zeus and cuts his body in half..

Rexxar:noooo!Zeus!
Zeus:I’m sorry..i think..this is it for me..
Vol’Jin:don’t woory Zeus!i’ll save you!
Zeus:its no use..i’m destined..to die in this battle..*cough*

Mortred watches as they desperately try to save Zeus..

Zeus:it has truly *cough* been an honor..to have fought..alongside all of you..
DK:NO ZEUS!DON’T GO TO THE LIGHT!

Before he takes his last breath, he uses all of his energy to perform his last task for the Sentinels..

Zeus raised his hammer to te sky and..

Zeus:I call forth..the Thun…..der!

And the clouds suddenly tears open and thunders began to reign on every worshipper of The Frozen Throne..

Somewhere in this world..

Reborn7:OUCH!i think I just got strucked by a blue thunder that was reigning on every worshipper of The Frozun Thronn..

Anyways..

A light shines on Zeus’s body and a shadowy figure appeared..

Mortred:no!it can’t be!is it really you!?

The figure then stops from whatever it is doing and looks at Mortred..

Silkwood:yes..it is I..sister..Silkwood..your sister..your own sister whom you murdered in-..
Razor:*FART!*
Silkwood:WTF?!
Razor:sorry..can’t help it..
Silkwood:ugh..nevermind!

Silkwood:Morty..
Mortred:stop calling me Morty!you know I hate that name!
Silkwood:I’ll say whatever I want..MORTY!
Mortred:STOP IT!
Silkwood:MORTY!MORTY!MORTY!MORTY!MORTY!
Mortred:that’s it!this means war!*takes out a pillow*
Mortred:PILLOW FIGHT!
Silkwood:PILLOW FIGHT!

Anthdx:WAAAAAAIIIIITTTT!what about the story?

Silkwood:oh..right*throws the piilow away*
Mortred:*throws the pillow on Silkwood’s face*
Silkwood:HEY!thats not fair!

Anthdx:the story?

Silkwood:oh fine..

Anthdx:alright..everyone’s on their station?great..ACTION!

Silkwood:it’s not too late for redemption..you know?
Mortred:redemption?mwahahaha!why should I?!
Mortred:It’s because of all of my action that’s got me way more powerful than any of you!
Silkwood:then..there should be no mercy for you..


And then Omniknight came running forward as fast as he can..

Omniknight:YOU ARE PAST REDEMTIOOOOOOONNNNNN!

He then ran back to his stink hole to eat his gummy bears while pooping at the same time..

Silkwood then carries Zeus’s body back to the heavens..but before leaving, she screamed a terrorful..uhh..scream..

Silkwood:WAAAAAAAAARGHHH!
Silkwood:that might help you..
DK:what the..

And then they were gone…leaving no trace of they’re existence..

Mortred:*looks at the sky*Elune shines upon the guilty and the innocent alike..
DK:you!you did this to him!you’ll pay for that!

And DK morphs into an elder Dragon with cold attacks..that stacks with Eye of Skadi..damn imba DK!

And then DK will hit Mortred as hard as he can..

DK:*hits Mortred as hard as he can*

SEE..I TOLD YOU DIDN’T I?..

Mortred:huh..when will you people learn..
Mortred:I’m an anti-DPS for god sake..

DK:damnit!if only I have an MKB!

And an MKB appears on his hand..

DK:YES!can I have a cookie?
Anthdx:don’t push your luck kid.

DK:hahahahaha!no miss!
Mortred:damn!if only someone could disable this guy..

And then Atropos came and Fiend Grips DK..

DK:aaargh!damn!
Dwarven:don’t worry..i’ll save you..

Dwarven:*shootshootshoot*damn!proc you stupid ministun!

Blarfles:wtf?!whats rong with this fanfic?!how come an mkb suddenly appears on DK’s hand!and why is Atropos suddenly here?!

Anthdx:o.O RONG..

Blarfles:aaargh!nevermind..

And a guy in black came..

F3lix:*facepalm*..not this guy again..

Nevermore:WHAAAT?!SOMEONE CALLED ME?!
Blarfles:NO!NOBODY CALLED YOU!
Nevermore:what?everybody’s calling me?
Blarfles:NO!
Nevermore:NO?!but you said everybody’s calling me!
Blarfles:I DID NOT!
Nevermore:BUT YOU JUST SAID YOU CALLED ME!
Blarfles:I DID-..arrgh..nevermind!
Nevermore:WHAAAAAT?!

Razor:stop it!just stop it!

And then suddenly Leshrac came..

Leshy:why wont you leave Britney aloneee!!!
Puck:SILENCE!
Silencer:OI!ONLY I CAN USE THE SILENCE!

Azwraith came..wtf?!

Azwraith:I am..Mojo Jojo!you cannot tell Mojo Jojo what to do because I am Mojo Jojo!

Silencer:SILENCE!JUST SHUT UP OK?!

Azwraith: I, Mojo Jojo, am your master, and you shall obey my commands like the dogs you are! Because I am your master, it is I who you will obey! Obeying commands is what you’ll do! I will give you commands, and you will obey them!

DK:wtf are you talking about?

Azwraith:I am Mojo Jojo!

DK:why the f**k do you have to say like that?you sound like some monkey wearing a helmet to hide his large brain or something.

Azwraith: I do not talk like that! The way I communicate is much different. I do not reiterate, repeat, reinstate the same thing over and over again. I am clear, concise, to the point!

Balanar:dude..whatever k?now watch me dance..*starts moonwalking*

Viper:hmm.. I wonder..
Viper:*viper strike*
Balanar:yeeeeeaaaaaaahhhh!!!!*slow motion*
Viper:cool!

Kel’Thuzad:I’m baaaack!

Mortred has pwned Kel’Thuzad’s head for 250 golds..again..

Raijin:omg!i think I just entered a retarded fanfic..
Unkn0wn:wtf?you didn’t read the warning at the gate before you enter?

At the gate:WARNING!WARNUNG!WARSCHIWCHK!ACHTUNG!BEHIND THIS GATE IS A WORLD OF RETARDIOCY!ENTER AT YOUR OWN COST!BUT I MUST WARN YOU..DONT ENTER IT!please enter it!I REPEAT!DO NOT ENTER!no!just enter!YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!YEI HIEV BIEN WARNING!YOUSFH HAVESWQH BEENHAAJK WARSCHIWCHK!ACHTUNG!

Unkn0wn:you didn’t read it did you?
Raijin:err..ehehehe..


Aaaanyways..

Mortred:you think you can beat me with that?
DK:no..but I can beat you with this!*morphs into a dragon*
DK:Dragon blood boils in my vein..dragon blood..BOILS IN MY VEINS!OMG!ITS BOILING IN ME!OMG!

F3lix:you’re an ice dragon for crying out loud!
DK:oh right..hehe..
F3lix:huh..my dragon is better..
F3lix:oh yeah!btw,please comment on my dragon!here it is: http://www.dotastrategy.com/forum/ftopic24105.html
Anthdx:*slap*don’t advertise in my fanfic moron!

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DK:mwahahahahaha!you’re dead!
Mortred:not yet I’m not!*activates Blade Mail*
DK:wtf?this guy have no weaknesses!
WiN|WeaKNess:I know his weakness..its-..

Mortred has pwned WiN|WeaKNess’s head for 250 gold!

DK:noo!
Mortred:you’re next!

And so the battle begins..

DK:Queen to E5!
Mortred:Bishop to F9!

D4ark:lolwut?they’re playing chess?

Now lets get to Raijin..

OD:RAZOR!USE YOUR STICK NOW!
Razor:you’re not the caption!
OD:JUST DO IT!AND ITS “CAPTAIN”!
Razor:alright..*throws his stick at Raijin*

Raijin:hah!that all you got kid?!
Unkn0wn:that’s all you’ve got?!
Raijin:you’re gonna have to do better than that!
Unkn0wn:yeah!you’re gonna have to do better!
Raijin:*slaps Unknown*
Unknown:*slaps himself*

OD:WTF?!YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO SUMMON LIGHTNING!OMG!
Razor:why didn’t you say so?!
OD:you were supposed to know that!
BS:huh..noobs!
BS:I’LL end this!

BS starts running to Raijin but slips to the ground thus activating Rupture to himself..

Clockwerk:BS DON’T MOVE!IF YOU MOVE YOU’LL DIE!
BS:what the heck are you talking about..i can’t activate Rupture on myself!now leave me alone!i’m gonna settle this!

BS:*tries to hit Raijin*
Raijin:hah!can’t catch me!you’re to slow kid!
BS:OH YEAH!?*turns on Haste from bottle..oh god*
BS:lets see who’s slow now!
Raijin:*even grin*heh..thats it..faster..faster..
Raijin:still can’t catch me!mwahahaha!
BS:oh really?!*turns on Lothars Edge*

He doesn’t know that his hp is red now..

BS:hah!gotcha!
Raijin:nope..thats a remnant..
Raijin:you’re dead!*ulti+slow+remnant+slow*

Raijin has pwned BS’s head for 250 gold..

Puck:nooo!

Raijin has pwned Puck’s head for..oh wait..he didn’t..

Puck:oh yeah!Phase Shift FTW!

Raijin has pwned Puck’s head for 250 golds..but puck still managed to cast his ulti on Raijin..so I’ll give him 250 golds..

Clockwerk:lolwut just happened?

Anthdx:I don’t..know..bug or something..

Clockwerk has pwned bug for 250 golds..

OD:quick!now’s our chance!
Razor:but I don’t have my stick!
OD:here take mine!now purge him!
Razor:ok!i summon thunder to aid me!

thunders roar the ground and the sky opens..
and a rain of hands came rushing down on everyone’s face!

FACEPALM FEST!EVERYBODY FACEPALM!

Razor:OMG!its broken!
OD:GIVE ME THAT!*Prisons Raijin*
OD:hmm..works perfectly with me..

OD:alright..i’ll take him on!

OD went near the imprisoned Raijin..

Raijin:whoa!wtf just happened?!
OD:you’re dead!*cast ulti*
Raijin:*ulti to out of OD’s ulti range*
Raijin:you could’ve done better kid..shift-queue FTW!
Unkn0wn:YEAH..ftw…
Raijin:my turn..

OD:hah!take you’re best shot!
Raijin:I don’t have to..if I do,you’ll be dead!
Clockwerk:well maybe you do have to..*casts Battery Assault*
Raijin:those mini stun..those ministun..those ministu..DAMNIT!
Clockwerk:haha!distorted animation!OD!we can take him!
OD:*spams Arcane Orb*

Rajin:you think you can take me that easy/think again!
Raijin:*ulti near OD and Clockwerk and slows the both of them..then casts remnant and slows again and finally casts Electric vortex then slow then remnants blow up*
OD:no way!i’m not gonna die to this noob!

Backbone has left the game!
Raijin has pwn Clockwerk's head for 250 gold
Backbone:FFFUUU noob writer!i need some metals to cool off!

And so..backbone went on nerdraging on his next post while listening to his mp3..just the way he always wanted it to be..

…

Raijin:you’re next!
Razor:no..please..noo!you can’t do this to me!i’m the star in this fanfic!just ask anthdx!
Raijin:*looks at me*
Anthdx:meh..do whatever you want with him..
Razor:why you trader!TRADEEERRRR!!!!
Raijin:sorry..but its nothing personal..
Razor:mwahahaha!you..you can’t kill me!i’ll revive everytime I died!read the changelogs in this fanfic!

THE CHANGELOGS:

RAZOR:DAMN YOU ANTHDX!TRADERR!TRADERRR!!
Anthdx:oh yeah..for future reference..its traitor..not trader..

Raijin:don’t worry..this’ll be quick..

After 0.25 sec..

Raijin has pwned Razor’s head for 250 golds..

Raijin:told ya it’ll be quick..

Now that that’s done..
At mortred’s site..

Mortred:hah!you lose!MWAHAHAHA!

DK:I have lost..i have failed you master..
F3lix:that’s okay!you can still beat him!
DK:no!i have disgraced your name..there can only one thing to do..
F3lix:I see…
DK:HARAKIRI!

DK has killed himself!

Anthdx:that truly is the perfect way for you to go F3lix..lol..

Rexxar:Vol’Jin!lets team up and pwn this guy!
Vol’Jin:we’re already on the same team moron!
Dwarven:wait!i’ma join you guys!

Mortred:three heroes against me?this’ll be fun..

Rexxar:now Vol’Jin!stun him!

Right after that,Rexxar throws his axes..

Mortred:*FOR KHAZ’MODAN!*
Mortred:hahahaha!your spells are no match for me!

Dwarven:I’m a DPSer!i don’t need any spells to take on anyone!

And then Mortred came to Dwarven and kicks him out of the map..

Dwarven:WHY DOES THIS KEEP HAPPENING TO MEEEEEEEE!

And then he fell to the woods and thus trapping him from returning..
Bored..he leaves..lol!

Dwarven has left the game!

Rexxar:no Dwarven!pig!slow him!
Pig:*snort*..
Mortred:this is no way near fun..*kills pig*..i’ll take you first!*points at Rexxar*

Rexxar:you can’t beat me!
Mortread:oh really??*charging forward*

So Rexxar and Mortred began their epic fight..

Vol’Jin:nobody ignores The Witch Doctor!*attacks Mortred*

And then after a few seconds..

DOUBLE KILL!!!!!!


Sinclare21:wtf just happened?!
Blarfles:OMG!

Mortred:I have Battle fury!mwahahahaha!
Mortred:one more thing..I AM A GIRL!STOP CALING ME GUY!I AM A 20 000 YEAR OLD GIRL!

Flodian:HAH!and people said Battle fury on PA is NOOB?!who’s laughing now?!

Sinclare21:FFFUUU ANTHDX!
Blarfles:THAT’S IT!NO SIGS FOR YOU ANYMOAR!

Mortred:well..that was easy..
Raijin:this time it wont..
Mortred:*turns his body facing towards Raijin*what?you want some of this?
Raijin:well then..lets see what you’ve got..
Mortred:YAAAAAH!!!
Raijin:RAAAAAWWWRRR!!

And they fought..remnant this..remnant that..blink strike this and that..miss..miss..ulti here and there..blood spills to the ground..clothes torn off..everything was used by the both of them to fight..they we’re both desperate to survive..until…

Raijin:*drops to the ground*..*pant*..*pant*..
Mortred:you have *pant* lost..

And Mortred slashes Raijin in half..thus killing him..

Mortred has pwned Raijin’s head for 350 golds..

Mortred:huh..huh..i finally won!haha..hahahahaha..hahahahahahahahahaha!
Mortred:the world is mine!
Mortred:I should get there fast!i’ll take this shortcut!

Mortred went to the woods and decided to take a shortcut..

She was walking steadily when suddenly..she stepped on it..

*tick..tick..tick*

Mortred:OH FUC-..

BOOOOOOOOMMMM!

Techies has pwn Mortred’s head for 800 golds!

Techies:it finally paid off..mwahahahahaha!


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Anthdx:cut!thats great people!we’ll see this on the silver screen!

Thank you for all of you who reads my fanfic!

Oh yeah..and uhh..
COOKIES!for the stars in this fanfic!
SINclare21
Blarfles
F3lix
Izwan.hs
Backbone
Krizad
Floor
Carnage07
Sloonzz
Raziel023(a.k.a sclouduall)
Nginferno:as Razor(yeah..didn’t expect that did you?)
Unkn0wn

special thanks for all the DSers who reads my fanfic and also for the facepalms,faceplants and also laugh.i wanna thank you everyone for this award..

Razor:just cloes the curtains already!
anthdx:oh..right..

*curtains closed*
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GOOD JOB!
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COOKIES FOT THE FIRST POST TOO!
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