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is this story good?

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Yes it is. 22% [ 19 ]

it's great!! 16% [ 14 ]

OMG!!!ITS AWESOME!!! 60% [ 51 ]

raziel023

Dominating Posts: 115 Joined: 15 Jun 2009 3073 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:52 pm

lol
every chapter made me laugh Laughing

(specially the second one)
keep it up dude...

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captain_tesca

Warnings : 2

Mega Kill Posts: 826 Joined: 01 Sep 2008 22087 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 2:51 pm

hm... this writing style is quite familiar to me.. we kinda have the same writing style dude.. keep it up and check your grammar and spelling always better than rushing the story and go back to check the grammar and spelling.. since i'm interested in your story, i request that you include miranha that's singing "twinkle twinkle little star" when using starfall, and a Lion or Rhasta (because they have hex or maybe hero with guinsoo) that sings "mary had the little lamb" while they permahex the hero.. looking forward to how you fulfill my request Very Happy

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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1168 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29596 gold

Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 2:55 pm

your wish is in my command...lol..i'll try to do it..
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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1168 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29596 gold

Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:06 am

backbone_ wrote:
nice Laughing

and i think Ench is travestite Very Happy

uhh..whats a travestite? Smile

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Nooby_killer

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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:16 am

LOL!!
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Will be back at sig making when I regained my skills
"Love makes Life complicated"

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Nooby_killer

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Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:17 am

LOL!!
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Will be back at sig making when I regained my skills
"Love makes Life complicated"

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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1168 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29596 gold

Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:21 am

wow..nice..double-post FTW!
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sopas111

Warnings : 2

Beyond Godlike Posts: 2677 Joined: 24 Oct 2008 57793 gold

Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:24 am

I sense the outcome of this story. Funny dude!

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snow_blade

Dominating Posts: 154 Joined: 24 Nov 2008 4047 gold

Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:42 am

Lol!
Keep it up dude!
Waiting for nxt chapter...
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nightAkane

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Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 3:23 am

good stuff.
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My First Fanfic!
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sopas111

Warnings : 2

Beyond Godlike Posts: 2677 Joined: 24 Oct 2008 57793 gold

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 3:37 am

this kind of fan-fic really keeps me going

i suggest you edit your title into something like this

The story of Razor - The Lightning Revenant; Chapter [*insert latest chapter] is out!

So they'll know when a new chapter is out.

This fan-fic reminds me of AmC and his humorous fan-fic

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nginferno

First Blood Posts: 42 Joined: 23 Jan 2008 1615 gold

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 3:44 am

Yay, nice story.
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and my unhatched adoptions

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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1168 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29596 gold

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:58 am

sopas111 wrote:
this kind of fan-fic really keeps me going

i suggest you edit your title into something like this

The story of Razor - The Lightning Revenant; Chapter [*insert latest chapter] is out!

So they'll know when a new chapter is out.

This fan-fic reminds me of AmC and his humorous fan-fic

how do you change the title? Hysterical

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anthdx

Godlike Posts: 1168 Joined: 06 Nov 2008 29596 gold

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:42 am

Chapter four:Monkey see, monkey do..not!

Late game…

At the end of mid game, Razor’s inventory was nearly finished..
With his maelstrom and Dagon, Razor was ready to take on anyone..

While he was jungling, Lina approach and stunned Razor..

Razor:WTF!!THIS IS BORING!!!!CHANGE THE SUBJECT!!
Anthdx:STFU U F**KING NOOB!!I WAS JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD PART!!
Razor:THEN START GETTING THERE!!
Anthdx:SHUT UP NOOB!!DON’T YOU KNOW WHAT STFU MEANS?!
Razor:I KNOW WHAT IT MEANS U MORON!!IT MEANS ..
Anthdx:SHUT IT!ONE MORE WORD AND I’LL STOP THIS FANFIC!!!
Razor:…
After this..Razor won’t dare to bother me when I’m writing a story..except for Dare of course who can’t stand being challenged..lol..
(Author=FTW)..

So Razor was roaming on the top river until..

Razor:oh..look at what we have here..an illusion rune..
Razor:*making hand signals*Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!!!

And a couple of illusions spawn..

Lina:WTF!another Naruto addict huh?..
Sven:what is it now?..
Lina:oh its you..wanna have a good time baby?
Sven:I have better things to do..
Lina:awww…c’mon…please..i’ll be nice..^o^..
Sven:OKOKOK!!!!!!!

Dare 3:^lol…

So..both of them went to a hidden jungle..

Lina:oh..Sven you bad boy..
Sven:I grow tired of waiting..
Lina:oh sven..click me baby one more time..
Sven:Insufferrable mount!
Lina:hmm..i don’t remember casting slow on you..
Sven:I grow tired of..
Lina: Maybe you should get a strategy guide..
Sven:heh..that may work..
Lina:you don’t get out much do you?
Sven:I have better things to do…
Lina:hmm.. maybe I can help you..
Sven:what is it now..
Lina:try this..for the end of the world spell..press alt+Q+Q..
Sven:*pressing slowly*alt….q….q….done!
The screen turns black and a message appears..

Message:you have left a total of 5,598,443,555,632 games..you are now banned from Battle.net,GGc,DotA,Icefrog,Friendster,Facebook,DS.com,DA.com,any DotA related topic or story and also Twitter..Thank you for playing!

Lina:hahahaha..works everytime..beware Caspian..you’re next…huahaha..

Nevermore:WTF!!NOOB SVEN LEAVER!!!
Aiustha:YES!!!oh..wait..NOOOOO!!!
Razor:*too angry that he types wrongly*WTFDG!!!SVEAN SO NOOB!!1!GDHYTRYASDVCBCJSFKITUERQWETHGCVNVKOPDSHFDBNCXVBATEYTHFGHCVNDGHFGHTYERU!!!alt+alt+alt+1234567890—908632645ty451412!!!!!!

No one ever hears from Sven anymore…

As for the rest of Razor’s team..

Lina seduced them to do the same as Sven did..INCLUDING Aiustha..ESPECIALLY Aiustha..

All of them DC-ed from the game..lol..

Razor:WTF!!!IS THAT ALL!?OMG!!!THIS IS EVEN WORST…EVEN WORST THN MY ULTI!!!!I’LL F**K U!!!

Anthdx:I didn’t even say that this is the end…I’m still going to continue the story ..
But I agree with you..your ulti is GAY!!!

[don't worry..the story will continue.. Laughing

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sopas111

Warnings : 2

Beyond Godlike Posts: 2677 Joined: 24 Oct 2008 57793 gold

Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:48 am

razor wrote:
Kage Bunshin No Jutsu

lolwut! xD

Keep 'em coming.

Btw, i think you can change the title by changing your the title of your first post in this thread.

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