Thunder Reborn~Chapter 25:The beginning of the end
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Chapter 22
"After countless years,I finally found a body that suits me."
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Chapter 22
"After countless years,I finally found a body that suits me."
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Is the Lich King in Clinkz's Body?
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Yeah he is.Err chapter 23 should be out tomorrow.
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woohoo cant wait for chapter 23
and was it a nice vacation? ^.^
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read everything in 2 hours
interesting story you have there!
unique stories, i must say
i thought clinkz was serving the lich king?
why didn't lich king use his body in the first place?
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@BlastingIllusions
Yeah it was hahaha.
@chris
Clinkz died in one of the chapters.Err his body couldn't be used at first cause of the fire that surrounds his body?Ice and fire don't mix well.Haha
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Chapter 23
As Razor stared at Gondar,he knew that he had to get the location of the hideout from him.But he needed to take him down first.He put away his mace and charged forward with his steel staff.
Gondar,with only one hand and a charred body,did his best with one blade and parried the blow,only to find it sliding down the blade's length and spun to his hand.The sword was knocked out of his hand and he was weaponless.Gondar took out a shuriken and threw it at Razor whom blocked it.
Razor placed the staff on Gondar's hand and looked into his eyes.
"Where is your hideout?"
"Why should I tell you!?" spat Gondar.
"Please Gondar,don't make this harder for us than it already is."
Gondar hesitated.The master had taken care of him since young and made him the man he is.Betrayal would be a sin for him.
"No."
"If you don't your master will destroy this universe!The combined powers is legendary!That's the reason the old members of the Keepers died!Because they wanted to protect that immense power from your master!"
"What can you do...It is already too late.Magina has already arrived at the base and Time has already been found.
"What?Darkterror is still with the Lich King is he not?"
"There isn't only one Time in this world."
"Then you should tell me their hideout before they fuse!"
"Fine.But I want a royal pardon from Furion and full protection from the Black Hand."
"I'll see what I can do..."
"Here is a map.In this forest,there is cave.Everything you want to know about the Black Hand is inside there."
Razor took out a note and scribbled words in his own blood on it.He placed it in Gondar's shrivelled hand and placed another scroll to his chest.Razor muttered some words and soon a pillar of blue light surrounded Gondar.
"Thank you." muttered Razor as Gondar was teleported away.
Razor turned towards the direction of the forest and left.
In the Sentinel camp,everyone was getting ready to leave.Ner'zhul whom had taken over Clinkz's corpse walked with his party to the center of the camp.The fire which once lit Clinkz's body that prevented Ner'zhul from laying his cold hands on was now frost.
Ner'zhul told the Sentinel that they had very little troops left as the ghouls were their only form of primary battle.Kael suggested to them that the ghouls and treants may be with the Black Hand.
Furion returned from the forest and in his hands,a mushroom.He walked towards his tent and in about half an hour,he walked out holding a vial of blue liquid.The liquid was blue,but at the same time colourless.It was as if the vial had water,but then,empty.
As Furion got ready,he suddenly saw a blue pillar shine down on a remanining tent.In a few seconds,Gondar walked out,with one hand missing.
Gondar passed Furion the map and told him the location of the hideout.Furion,nodded after reading the note which Razor had left and agreed to Gondar's conditions.
Furion stepped forward and raised his staff.
"The Black Hand shall fall!"
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I have a very good feeling who is the alternate time. One of the scourge!
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just read all of it right now! and i must say, this story gets better with every chapter that comes out. so great job! looking forward to more
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the story is in climax now!
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Chapter 24
As Razor slowly approached the cave he had found in the middle of the forest,he knew that he couldn't take them all by himself.But what he saw was even too incomprehensible for him.Out walked something that looked like a ghoul,but wasn't comepletely a ghoul.
Its white claws were replaced by wooden branches and their heads had leaves sticking out of them.They looked like half treant half ghoul.Razor gasped as he realized the true power of the master's 'unification' powers.
He could not infiltrate the base when such dangerous creatures were outside.But it was too late.He saw a scythe-like hand touching his chest and instantly realized who it was.Lesale.Lesale Deathbringer.The venomancer who never talks.
The venomancer groaned and nudged to Razor to step out of the bushes.Razor knew he couldn't be captured here as the time for the unification of the 10 powers was near.He took out his staff and placed it in between his chest and Lesale's scythe hand.Lesale noticed it and pulled back,attempting to cut Razor's chest.
But the staff blocked the scythe while Razor gathered a bolt of electricity into his mace and swiped at Lesale's head,sending the venomancer flying back.Razor knew that if the ghoul-treant monsters were alerted,there was no way he could run.
He had to run.Now.Lesale slowly got back up and chased after Razor whom was running back into the forest.When they were deep in enough,Razor knew he could fight Lesale without alerting more enemies.
Razor gathered lightning into his mace and shot it at Lesale whom blocked it with his scythe.Lesale opened his mouth and spat out a purple substance straight at Razor.It was too fast for Razor to retaliate and the substance hit his shoulder with a great force,causing him to take a few steps back.
The substance burned Razor's armour,then his skin.It was like acid.Lesale then shot some more poison at him before moving forward and slicing at Razor's shoulder.Razor's blood mixed with the acid,causing an even immense pain as the blood slowly turned green.
Razor gathered plasma into his mace and let loose a shockwave which stunned Lesale and causing him to fall back.Lesale's scythes were useless now as they were burnt off.He got back up aimed his poison at Razor and got ready to shoot.
He didn't get the chance.A steel staff smashed the venomancer's head from the right side and then came flying down from above.But the poison was affecting Razor too much.He was slowly losing consciousness.
Then,he felt something in his mind.Like someone was talking to him.He was inside his own consciousness.
"Losing this battle Razor?"
"What...your voice sounds familiar..."
"I shall grant you this power...power that I used in battles years ago.You shall overcome your enemies and destroy the evil that surrounds you..."
"Father?"
The voice was silent.Before Razor knew it,he was back in the battlefield.His mace was glowing,and a spear-like tip of electricity was attached to it.
Using instinct,he shot the tip at Lesale,whom could not parry against it.The damage was not great but Razor could see that the venomancer was losing energy while he was slowly getting more alert.
It was like a link between their 2 bodies.Lesale fainted and tumbled into a heap on the ground.Razor had no idea what to do next.The only thing left was to infiltrate the base.But it was too late.He felt a force travel through his body and he fell to the ground.The energy that he stole from Lesale,was dissappearing,and Lesale slowly gained consciousness.
The force which went through Razor was slowly appearing.As Razor fainted,he saw a nerubian slowly appearing.It was a fabled nerubian weaver.Anub'seran.He had a small control over time,not even worth comapring to Darkterror but he made up for that with his battle tactics.But what was he doing there.Then he realized.The only one who volunteered to be part of the 10 powers.
The nerubian gazed down at Razor.
"I am Time."
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suhhhhhh weeeeeet~!
nice chapter! hope to see more soon
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suhhhhhh weeeeeet~!
nice chapter! hope to see more soon
suhhhhhh weeeeeet~!
nice chapter! hope to see more soon
haven't the judges voted yet? I haven't seen any result thread yet lol...
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