Thunder Reborn~Chapter 25:The beginning of the end

Posted on Thu Nov 19, 2009 12:43 pm

wait nerubian assassin? time lapse? doesnt he know vendetta?

aint it nerubian weaver? i'm confused
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Posted on Thu Nov 19, 2009 1:06 pm

@above

Oh,sorry I got caught up with him being an assassin cause of his invisiblity.Corrected.Thanks for pointing that out. =)

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Posted on Thu Nov 19, 2009 1:09 pm

hehe no problem ^.^
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Posted on Thu Nov 19, 2009 8:33 pm

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yeahhh i only have like 3 judge scores. i might be forced to just go off of that and my own judging and then go to the poll =P
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Posted on Sun Nov 29, 2009 3:38 pm

Sorry for the delay!

Chapter 25

The Sentinel's whole army and about half the number of Scourge set out for the location Gondar had pinpointed in a map.After the creatures of both armies had dissappeared,their numbers have been halved.

Mirana was determined to find Magina before he loses his life.In the mean time,Chen was questioning Gondar on the details of the Black Hand's plans.

"No one has seen his face.Not even when he came to us and invited us to join him.I was still a young draenei at that time,and had approached me before I joined the war.My job in the Sentinel was to be a spy and scout.I was to make sure the Sentinel did not mess up his plans,and scout for 10 of the powers."

"What are his plans then?"

"He intends to unite the 10 powers together and become a being that can use the 10 powers and combine them,causing tears in the fabric of space and time."

"And you consent to his plan?"

"He promised us a continent each if he suceeded,in a world where he would be king."

"This is bad...How many members are left in the Black Hand?"

"Enough.Enough to protect him till his fusion is complete."

In the cave deep in the forest,Razor had been captured and imprisoned beside Magina and Davion.

"Razor,how did you find us?"

"I can't say...what matters is that something is going to happen next.And I won't be able to do a thing about it."

"What do you mean?"

With some hesitation,Razor looked up.

"You will be fused with 8 other heroes,and together with the Black Hand's leader.I promise...no I swear...I will get you guys back.I won't let any of you die!"

As he said that,Davion and Magina looked at him .

"We have faith in you.There was a reason you were ressurected.This is it."

10 treant-ghouls went to each cage and picked up all of them.They carried them to a circle in the middle of the room,and placed them down.

Razor grabbed the bars of his cage,which was made with a special element which prevented the prisoners from doing anything.

"You don't have to do this!Listen to me!You'll destroy this world if you do so!"

The Black Hand leader,stood in front of Razor,back turned towards him and tilted his head to the side.

"Well we'll just have to deal with it won't we?"

Razor's eyes glowed blue with fury.

"If you go through with this...I promise you...I'LL KILL YOU!"

The hooded man ignored him and proceeded to gather energy into his hands.A ball of blue,a ball of red and a ball of white.it was then Razor realised who the leader was.

Furion was walking beside Ner'zhul and Darkterror whom were trying to create a plan in the case they had to fight the leader.Furion sensed a killing aura around him.It was then he knew the Black Hand's leader was near them.

He turned around,but it was too late.A burning rock hit him straight in his faceand forced him to his knees.Darkterror turned around and face Kael,the Invoker whom had shot the fireball.

"I knew it was you all along Kael."

"It's too bad.You could have stopped me,but you didn't.You just lost your last chance.As of now,10 people are going to become a part of me,you won't be able to stop me."

Darkterror swung his mace straight at Kael's skull which turned into smoke and it was then,the whole party knew that the Kael that was with them,was an illusion.

Rikimaru the stealth assassin shook his head at the fact that the leader of the Black Hand was right beside them.

"This is bad..."

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Posted on Sun Nov 29, 2009 4:11 pm

Awww... Men!

why does it have to be Ka'el!

but its cool!

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Posted on Sun Nov 29, 2009 7:07 pm

Kael's too cheap!
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Posted on Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:03 am

lol Kael mustve found an illusion rune

hahaha EPIC story, nice job! cant wait for moreeeeeeeeee ^^
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Posted on Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:31 am

Oh,why don't you guys like Kael?

He's the only one as far as I know that can fuse things,so sorry if I dissappointed you guys.
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Posted on Mon Nov 30, 2009 4:31 am

as a matter of fact, you didn't lol..

that was the most sensible candidate for the leader..
well.. kael is a weakling in dota games anyway.. let him have the time to shine
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Posted on Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:14 pm

i have replays that could prove otherwise

Kael can be scary late game ^^
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Posted on Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:20 pm

Point for Kael! its like the first fanfic that ive read that includes him as the scary scourge hero he is!!
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Posted on Sat Dec 12, 2009 1:51 pm



I was generalizing.. since kael's users are usually not that good at using him..

i'm not saying that he's weak.. he's not just used to his full potential.. am talking about the caster build..

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Posted on Sat Dec 12, 2009 9:29 pm

gooooood point hahahaha! even when i own with him i use like 3-4 spells max
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Posted on Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:54 am

I apologize guys!I will be taking a break till Christmas cause im spending my time on MW2 at the moment.Too addictive.Once again i apologize!
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