Thunder Reborn~Chapter 24:Revelation

Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 12:36 pm

hes been away for quite a while now...
WHERE THE (INSERT WORD HERE) CAN HE BE??
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 1:31 pm

Well.. Even though there are rumors that spectre is a shemale / male.. most of the people believe that she is a girl.. and you must stick to her being a woman since its more acceptable and less confusing.. but editting your latest chapter might take you several minutes.. your grammar is understandable so I guess you don't need to edit it..

waiting waiting... zzz
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:20 pm

sir this is really great! its nice to read a nice fanfic again after my break from reading stuffs =)
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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:32 pm

K thanks for all the support.From this chapter onwards,Mercurial is a girl.I'm too lazy to edit previous chapters

Chapter 17

The claw on his hand represented what his bloodline possesses.The power of dragons.His blood was magnificent.Many would pay a fortune for a single drop of his blood.But he was protected by the Sentinel.No one dared to touch him lest they wanted a whole army after him.

But right now,the Sentinel weren't there to protect him.Thus the decision to take matters into his own hands.Mercurial gathered more energy into her staff and pulled back for a lunge.She too knew the wrath of Davion's bloodline.But she too had fearful power.The dark energies that surround her were made from rage and vengeance.She can concentrate her enemies' fear into a dark energy.

The dark energy had properties that would degenerate a person's armour,flesh and bone.It would eat away and completely destroy a person if the person has absolutely no courage to face her.Right now,Davion could face her,making her power less useful by the minute.She had to end it fast.

She lunged at Davion whom had dropped his staff and would fight with his claw.Just as the staff touched his claw,she disappeared and reappeared behind Davion.Davion's enhanced senses had anticipated this and when the stuff was swung at him from behind,he spun around and swiftly caught the staff.

The dark energies barely hurt him at all.His courage had frown to an extent that he had no fear.Davion's claw crushed the stuff as easily as he caught it.He then swiped at Mercurial whom decided to change tactics and threw a black dagger at Davion.Davion's claw swiped downwards at the dagger.Although the energy did not hurt him,the blade did.

Mercurial knew she couldn't defeat Davion like this.He ran towards his chakram and dashed straight for Davion.Davion pumped his blood into his whole arm and lifted it up to his head.Mercurial's chakram couldn't slice through the tough dragon scales that had replaced Davion's skin.

This time it was Davion's turn to attack.He pumped more blood into his hand.Slowly,the claw which colour was green slowly turned red.Mercurial gazed at the claw.Shee noticed something forming inside it.A flame.Before she knew it,the small spark had expanded into a fireball the size of a head and was heading towards her.

This was what Mercurial had driven into many of her enemies' hearts.Fear.She clutched his burning chest and knelt on the ground.Davion ran towards her and plunged his claw towards the spectre's head.As the claw neared her head,he felt a sharp pain in his body.His claw immediately turned back into a hand.

Although Mercurial's life would be saved,the hand had flung into her cheek and the force pushed her onto her back.

"Mercurial!We were gone for awhile and you decided to play with our prisoners?"

"You do not command me Nortrom!I only serve the 'master'!You have no right to command me what to do!" said the irritated spectre.

"He does not.But I do."

All those present turned around and saw Balanar,the fearless night stalker.He was the 'master's personal bodyguard although he is rarely around.

"Mercurial.You have disappointed 'master' greatly.You might not know this,but you...are Darkness."

"What do you mean!?I am one of of the powers?No!I will serve the 'master'!I will not leave him!"

"You are not leaving him...you are just...fusing with him.Although he would be in control of all of your minds,you would still be serving him...just in a different way"said the dreadlord.

Far far away from the deserted mountain,near Northrend,Razor's party had arrived at the meeting place.The Lich King would have gotten the letter by then.They would wait for half a day.If he did not arrive,then they would take it that he rejected them.

"Look there Razor!"shouted Luna.

The party turned and saw in the distance saw ghouls walking towards them.Magina grabbed his blades but Razor motioned to him to stand down.As the ghouls arrived,so did a caravan right behind them,with a Scourge hero on each side of it.On the left,Nevermore,the shadow fiend whom controlled souls.On the right,was the near-invincible time-walker,Darkterror!

Furion knew not from the bodyguards but the aura that the person inside the caravan was the Lich King.Or at least the Lich King's soul.

"Why have you called me here...today Furion...after your army...captured...Lucifer...Terrorblade...Dirge..."

Razor felt a feeling in his heart.The Lich King completely ignored him.He could tell that Ner'Zhul regarded him as a traitor.

"Our generals have been captured as well!We thought you captured them." said Furion.

"Then it seems...there is a...third party...in this war..."

"What do you suggest then?"

"Hmm...there is only one way to defeat a stronger force."

Furion knew the answer to Ner'zhul's words.

"Unite."

End Of Chapter

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Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:49 pm

awesome, the battle of good with evil and...?? evil??
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woah

Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 5:17 pm

woah nice fan fic..pls continue..i hope you can finish your fan fic...

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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 4:34 am

Continue pls, i wanna see who is the so called 'master'.
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:00 am

zomgwtfshit sentinels + scourge vs. the black hand. woooo
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:09 am

zomg freaking exciting haah!

@carnage 1v1 me now thx

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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:38 am

Chapter 18

In the Black Hand's mountain,all the prisoners were kept in cages and surrounded by wards with energies which could block their powers from working.But soon,Balanar noticed someone was missing.No,not a prisoner.A member.

"Yes Furion...if we call it a truce for now...we can defeat this...force." said the Lich King whom had read Furion's mind.

"What are you saying?We have fought for 3 years now,surely you do not expect us to join forces?Especially from you?You are the epitome of destruction yet you suggest unity?"

"How dare you speak to my master like that!?"said the shadowfiend who had kept quiet the whole encounter.

"Allow me."

Darkterror walked towards the center of the 2 parties and started to chant.In an instant,they were thrown into a different scene.

It was dark.The clouds were burnt red,ground stained black and water dirtied green.In front of them,weird creatures were walking towards them.They looked liked abominations but at the same time like druids.

"This is what would happen if we let this evil go through with his plans.This is a parallel universe.Being a master of time,I have travelled through different realities and this is the most dangerous one.This is the true form of the 'master's powers.Unity."

Everyone present realised that the beings in front of them were abominations and druids fused together.As the reached them,Luna backed away as the foul beings walked closer and closer.

"Do not fear.It is too dangerous for me to bring you to this timeline.So..."

As Darkterror said that,the creature passed through Luna is though she wasn't even there.They realized the creatures were walking to something behind them.They turned and saw a massive castle sitting on the top of the mountains.

"This is...the Black Hand's world.Should we fail that is."

"Why didn't you...tell me...earlier..."

"I'm sorry master.Some things have to be told at the right time.I have another thing to show you master.If we do not unite as one army,this is what would happen."

The scene changed again and they were in an icy wasteland.Around them,ghouls,treants and the abomination-druids were all fighting.

"If we do not unite and carry on fighting,soon,all 3 'factions' would gain a tremendous amount of power.If all 3 powers met,the energies would cancel each other out and result in a massive explosion that kills off 85% of Azeroth's people.Black Hand would gain descendants of the 10 powers.The Sentinel would gain a special elixir which properties granted the user immense mana and energy.The Scourge..."Darkterror paused.

"Master,why don't you see for yourself."

The area around the parties changed once again,and they were standing on an icy palace.Beside them,was a massive pillar of ice.As they looked closer,a set of armour was frozen inside.

Everyone recognised it.It was the Lich King's armour.But no one recognised the man who walked towards them.He was a man,known for his immense courage and strength in war.He was a valiant knight and was powerful.But the power ate him up from the inside and soon he turned to temptation.

In order to gain power,he killed his father,the king and many people who had once loved him.His once kind and caring personality turned into a beast who longed for more power.His name was...Arthas.

The man named Arthas lifted his sword and a blinding light was seen.The party looked at the ice pillar which once stood beside them which was shattered into pieces.The man picked up the Lich King's helmet and placed it on his head.

Everyone felt a strong aura resonating from the helmet and man.They were uniting as one.The man's eyes flared a blue colour and sat down on a massive ice throne.

"This is what would happen master.You wanted to control his body.But soon,your vessel turned on you and emptied you from his consciousness.He replaced you as the Lich King."

The palace soon turned back into the icy wasteland they were in and everyone agreed that unity was crucial in order to defeat the Black Hand.

Back in the Sentinel's base,Chen had reached the Northern gate and would go into the forests for some peace and quiet.Furion and the rest were not back yet.What would happen if Ner'zhul decided to bring his whole army to the meeting?

His thoughts were soon interrupted by a stranger approaching from behind.

"Who are you stranger?"

"Please...help me..."

"Oh my goodness...Mercurial."

End of Chapter

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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 4:19 pm

woah woah woah....that was nice..i must say your getting better and better..keep up the good work

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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:25 am

GUYS,TIMBANGERS IS BACK! HE SAID HIS NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE THIS WEEK!
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Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:56 am

Omg, too much chapters after i was gone...Will try to read them all...
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Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:41 am

hmmm.. so far.. this is getting way way unique.. and way way blown out of proportion (in a good way).. very surprising twists and a nice plotline.. go go go.. i want moarrr XD
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 11:11 am

The next chapter will be out tuesday,maybe earlier.I've gotta study for exams.After the next chapter the following chapters will be slower cause exams next week.

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