Alone

Alone

Posted on Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:22 pm

No walls for miles.

What the -bleep-!

No echoes. At all. Chills were sent down my spine, and I did what I do best.

Think.

I sat down....and thought....Where the -bleep- am I!?!?!

"You are where the living Breathe, the dead are lost, and the Silent are never heard from again."

The light in the center of this emptiness seemed to never move. I was terrified at the concept of leaving it, hey, I didn't know if I'd find another light. And I didn't know what else I'd find here.

That's when I realized, the tears had Already reached my Hoodie.

I mean, I had so much waiting for me in the world. The best, most loyal friends, A semi-promising future, And the World's Best girlfriend.

I didn't want to leave that behind. No, please, God, NO!.

DONT LET ME FCUCKING GO OUT LIKE THIS!

I DONT WANT TO FCUCKING DIE ALONE!

I.....I......Don't....want to be alone....

I stared at that Divine-looking spotlight pointing at the center of this Abyss. I thought to myself, "hey, maybe I can use this to keep me company".

Hello there, light.

How are you doing?

.....And cue the awkward silence.

Dammit, I'm going off of my rocker. I'm going crazy. I'm talking to a Goddamn Light. In the middle of darkness.

Oh yea Albert, you're totally sane.

I sat in the light for I-don't-know-how-long. Thought about my Parents, my girlfriend, the life I wanted to keep...And.....how the -bleep- I'm not going hungry.

What the hell?

Oh how swell. Can't die of hunger here.....That's good. Lets me think for as long as I want.

Still sitting. It feels like days, but then again, I haven't slept. Don't get sleepy in this shithole. And then, I got the sudden urge to stand up and scream.

Is this Purgatory?

....No answer....as usual.

Hmmm....

Mom....she must be going crazy...Her baby boy is gone...

Sis....She probably misses my teasing, in some Way....somehow...

Dad....misses the sarcasm I hope...

My Girlfriend, oh...she must be dying without me. She probably misses the songs I'd play for her...how I'd smile when she'd pop out of nowhere and hold onto my shoulders...

WHY? WHY WHY WHY WHY FCUKING WHY!

I'm....Im running out of breath....I can't take this...I want to kill myself, but...I can't die. I've left behind the light what seems like days ago. It's pitch black, and All I can do is remember, and scream.

My legs never get tired. I've been walking for God-knows-how-long.

I've tried sprinting.

I can go on Forever.

I've tried breaking my Fingers, Gouging my eyes, Puncturing my throat, smashing my head against the Ground.

I draw no blood.

Break no Bones.

Lost no eyes.

Break no skin.

This is too much for a single man to go on with. And yet, I'm forced to do so.

This is a fate worse than Death.

This is a fate Longer than death.

This is a fate......That belongs to me.



The above was found in what Seems like a Record of Sorts, with the Words "Test 0" on the cover. And the words "Subject Suceeded" on the Back. The Journal was found in a Small Crater on the Dark side of the moon. No other Information about the Book has been found, but by the author's words, It is from around the 2000's, meaning it's about 50 years old.

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Posted on Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:31 pm

Strange, yet compelling. Reminiscent of one story I read by Poe. Still no definite end. Is this a start of something or a standalone(the epilogue hints something)
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Posted on Mon Sep 28, 2009 5:04 am

Cool.



A tortured soul story? Or one about values, politics and stuff like that?
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Posted on Mon Sep 28, 2009 5:14 am

Whats with the italics at the end?

So you didnt write this?
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Posted on Mon Sep 28, 2009 8:07 am



I just put it there to make it creepier, dude.

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