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SenDo1337

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The Olympians' Struggle

Posted on Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:36 am

Notes: This is my 3rd attempt to making a fanfic, hope you guys like it!
Special thanks to: stepanov_283 for helping me with the story.

Sorry chapter 1 is quite short, it's still on beta, if you guys want me to continue it, kindly reply ^_^

I am Zeus, the Ruler of the Sky and the Lord of the Sentinels.

After the great war between the Sentinels and the Scourge ended, the Lich King, the leader of the Scourge, revealed that he wasn't the one pulling the strings. He described it as a force even more ancient and powerful than the gods, the Lord of Time. At the thought of it the ground beneath us trembled, and for the first time I felt fear.

The ground spoke. "Hello son, it has been a long time. Bwahahahaha!" I felt weak, like someone even larger just stepped on Hope. My brothers and sisters won't be here to help me. I must return to Olympus to seek their help. Then, I felt that I was moving so slowly, like a force so heavy on my shoulders. "What's the matter, Zeus, is that all you can do after you overthrew me? Or you need your pathetic brothers and sisters?" said the ground as it trembled. I ran as fast as I could, not even the power of lightning can stop it. I had to do something, I have to protect what I was fighting for all these eons! I created a barrier to protect my comrades. "Hahahaha! You think that that weak bsrrier can stop my power? I am a TITAN! You CANNOT DEFEAT ME!" and the ground trembled even more, and I felt a presence of great power.

From the ground emerged a giant figure, when I looked at it, I saw the hatred and lust for power. I sent hundreds and thousands of bolts on him, but I couldn't even scratch him. He raised his arm and used a strange incantation and everything turned pitch black.
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Stepanov_283

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Posted on Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:41 am

Nice lol. Keep it up. I'll try to help a bit lol.
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DrifterZ

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Posted on Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:45 am

No. Greek mythology + dota (except zeus) = wrong.

dont use lord of time/chronos

edit chapter 1 and go straight to the point.
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3L4cK.3uNNy|r

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Posted on Wed Sep 30, 2009 5:33 am

DrifterZ wrote:
No. Greek mythology + dota (except zeus) = wrong.

dont use lord of time/chronos

edit chapter 1 and go straight to the point.

agreed ^^
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