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My First Hero Idea " Fëanor : The Fire Spirit",

Posted on Fri Nov 20, 2009 3:36 pm

Fëanor - The Fire Spirit. (Fëanor define as Spirit of Fire in ancient language of Elf)

Fëanor - The Fire Spirit

Fëanor - The Fire Spirit
Range: 100 | Move Speed: 315
Primary: AGI
Str: 16 + 1.4 | Agi: 22 + 3.2 | Int: 16 + 1.8
Damage: 47 - 49 | HP: 454 | Mana: 208
HP Regen: 0.73 | Mana Regen: 0.65
Attack Speed: 0.72 | Armor: 4

Fëanor, the Fire spirit is one of the triplet brothers of the Storm spirit.He was summoned by chaos of war between Sentinels and Scourges. His fury immolates those who dare to oppose him, and provide a massive fire power to those who trust him.

Mirror Fire

Mirror Fire (F)
Force out two Fire breathes,in front and back; each takes damage to foes,also slows foes for few seconds.
Level 1 - Level 1 - 75 Damage, burn and slows by 5% MS, for 2.5 seconds.
Level 2 - Level 2 - 125 damage, burn and slows by 7% MS, for 3 seconds.
Level 3 - Level 3 - 175 damage, burn and slows by 10% MS, for 3.5 seconds.
Level 4 - Level 4 - 225 damage, burn and slows by 14% MS, for 4 seconds.
Damage Type - Magical
Mana Cost: 115/135/150/175
Cooldown: 14 seconds
Framework: Like Dragon Knight's Breathe Fire, also from back,those who took this spell were burnt with fire , flame is not for extra damage , for slow, and for his Heat Absorber skill.
Notes: Skill for Farming, Ganking, Chasing, Fleeing, and Team Battle.

Blades of Immolation

Blades of Immolation (E)
Two blades of Fëanor, illuminate with Fire, causing a huge damage to foes , burn enemy for few seconds.
Level 1 - 75 base damage, 2x Agility damage, burns an enemy for 1 second.
Level 2 - 100 base damage, 2x Agility damage, burns an enemy for 2seconds.
Level 3 - 150 base damage, 2x Agility damage, burns an enemy for 3 seconds.
Level 4 - 200 base damage, 2x agility, damage, burns an enemy for 4 seconds.
can be auto-cast. Burn is not for extra damage,no slow,only for Heat Absorber skill.
Mana Cost: 75/100/150/200
Cooldown: 10 seconds
Framework: When Two Blades are burnt up with fire(turn to red), you can hit foe,and fire is gone,like Kunkka's Blades of tide, flames on the enemy body for Heat Absorber skill, like Husker's burning spear effect, but no extra damage here.2x agility damage appears as blue numbers like Morphling.
Notes: For hero killing, with damage multiplier, combo with other spells.

Heat Absorber

Heat Absorber (R)
When there are burning units,non-hero unit or hero, near Fëanor , increase his Movement Speed and Attack Speed.
Level 1 - 3% AS and 2% MS per non-hero unit burned, 8% AS and 3% MS per Hero burned.
Level 2 - 5% AS and 3% MS per non-hero unit burned,10% AS and 4% MS per Hero burned.
Level 3 - 6% AS and 4% MS per non-hero unit burned,12% AS and 5% MS per Hero burned.
Level 4 - 7% AS and 5% MS per non-hero unit burned,14% AS and 6% MS per Hero burned.
Passive
Mana Cost: NA
Cooldown: NA
Framework: A Ring of fire glow below Fëanor, when there are burning units or heroes. This skill is work only for his Mirror Fire-Breath, Burning Blades, DeathlyFlames and Immolation, not stack with fire of Dragon Knight, Sacred Warrior, Axe, Pit Lord,etc.Not over than Maximum AS and MS.
Notes: For Team battle, Chasing, Ganking, Jungle.

Deathly Flames

Deathly Flames (D)
Fëanor finally, combusts with Fire,releasing his fire power around him within 350 AoE and burns foes, and Immolation from him dealing damage and burns foes.
Level 1 - 200 damage, 20 immolation damage, last for 8 seconds.
Level 2 - 250 damage, 30 immolation damage, last for 10 seconds.
Level 3 - 300 damage, 40 immolation damage, last for 12 seconds.
Level 4 - 350 damage, 50 immolation damage, last for 15 seconds with Aghanim's Scepter.

Damage Type - Magical
Mana Cost: 200/250/300/300
Cooldown: 40/45/50/50
Framework: Combusts with fire like infernal and fire release like Nevermore's soul release, but flames instead of souls, and deal same damage on every hero and creep within 350 AoE, any distance ,unlike Nevermore. Enemies are continuously burnt till immolation over.
Notes: For Team battle, Chasing ,stacks with other skills.

Pros

* DPSer with slowing skill
* Good attack speed
* No Orb effect ,Buff placer , Channeling skills
* Damage Multiplier skill
* Ultimate with sufficient AoE

Cons

* Much Mana cost
* Weak in early games
* Less strangth gain
* Heat Absorber is not an Aura

CHANGE LOG

Total Edited 1 time , changing values to cover mana cost.

Last edited by LIBROSCORPIAN on Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:21 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Posted on Sat Nov 21, 2009 12:08 am

INT-AGI hero. Change stats please and explain "burn". Is it DoT burn or just there for the description?
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Posted on Sat Nov 21, 2009 12:57 am

Your gonna have alot of mana problems if you don't increase that mana gain.
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Posted on Sat Nov 21, 2009 7:53 am

I mean burn as hero or unit is on fire, or make it on fire. I will consider to ahange stats.

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Posted on Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:23 am

Yeah, if I change Str gain 1.6 and int gain 1.6 how about it?

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Posted on Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:55 am

You might still need more int. like 1.8 or 1.9
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Posted on Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:21 pm

OK , int 1.8 and I have to reduce strength to ,1.4, for balance.

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Posted on Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:27 pm

Ok, how about it?
Fëanor - The Fire Spirit
Range: 100 | Move Speed: 315
Primary: AGI
Str: 16 + 1.4 | Agi: 22 + 3.2 | Int: 16 + 1.8
Damage: 47 - 49 | HP: 454 | Mana: 208
HP Regen: 0.73 | Mana Regen: 0.65
Attack Speed: 0.72 | Armor: 4

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Posted on Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:56 pm



Now, I've change to stats as above. cool?

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Posted on Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:51 pm

Lol this is awsum! i luuuuuv panadas! and this one farts and breaths fire!!!

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Posted on Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:56 pm

@hero maker

It looks good now.
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Last edited by pomlaos on Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:59 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Posted on Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:56 pm

@hero maker

Use the edit button :P

btw accidentally double post so I edit this one...
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Posted on Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:51 am

By the way, I knew how t edit, long time ago, I confused that my ideas were not on page like others (that's before I know the step to publish )

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Posted on Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:34 pm




I edited , this page, attaching changelog, also at my strategies, thank you , I don't mean to be BC entery , only for my first attempt, to enlighten me, and for my curiosity ,why my ideas, item ideas and strategies are not on page like others(before I knew those steps).

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