Leonidas The King Of Sparta

Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 2:07 pm

This is cool. Maybe have a 'leap' attack or something instead of the first skill though? Not exactly in keeping with classical sparta, sure, but the film WAS awesome...

I was thinking about doing Spartan heroes... maybe some sort of aura that improves hp/dmg if you're in a lane with more than one hero? or something... I don't know, haven't the time or the intelligence to think this one through...

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Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 7:59 am

ty ..
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 7:09 am

nice idea but his ulti would give him like what 2000 str??
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 11:13 pm

fix the attack speed thats faster than anyone antimage attacks 1.4
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 10:43 am

ulti still seems imba imo... yeh im bak.. if no where near as frequently lol (little tym cos of job, excessive clubbing and myspace lol)
anyhow jst wanted 2 point out jst how strong he does get during that ulti, cos no joke that thing is far 2 powerful.
-80% str increase 4 12 seconds which thus boosts his health and damage significantly.
comparing 2 Sven
-150% dmg increase 25 seconds (onli from base str and str items): major dmg boost.
Looking at that sven seems 2 get the beta deal.. ONLY due to his increased duration.
Add stun repel..dude he has the equivalent of an avatar plus hp boost plus dmg boost...
THEN u hav added 50% dmg reduction... HUH???? u do realize how strong he will b from that?!?! he practically is uncounterable for 12 seconds by either dps and spell heroes...
Its a centaur/sven and old naix hybrid that is jst ridiculously good.
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 2:45 pm

@mangoman

welcome back bro ...

hahaha ... he is IMBA .. i know ! and i like it ! because Leonidas is Strong !!! very Strong !!! hahaha ... ok .. ill hit him with te nerfstick ... ^^
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 8:40 am

@dark star 27: cheers , lol and yeh prolly will b infrequently visiting and in that case cheking onli the older crew's heroes, cbf lookin at the new peoples ideas haha.

n yeh seems beta now nice work
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 10:49 am

LAwlz very IMBA~

Especially that inner rage thing....

It just gives me the hibijibis....
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Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 6:09 am

@mikorkeza

ei ... havent seen u around until now .. lol

lol why ??? imba ??? its temporary dude .. and each buff only lasts for 7 seconds ...
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 2:40 pm

ok .. already nerfed ..
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 11:58 am

any more comments ?
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Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 2:21 pm

wow i loved his first skill a leap with damge his leap is farther than mirana's tiger his INHUMAN THEN hahaha!! people will love this guy with catch phrases like
1.THIS is SPARTA!
2.WE WILL DIE IN HELL!!
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 1:41 am

@Synestrial

lol yeah ... nice catch phrases ...

and if u watch the movie ... Spartans do Leap onto enemies then slash them to pieces ... lol
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 9:39 pm

1/10.

Your hero makes no sense. He's a strength hero who nukes, his ulti is an imba buff, and he has a 7-second buff that is next to useless in a real game. This hero is so terrible I can't give you a summary, I need to outline its flaws one by one, so here goes.

primary attribute:Strength
STR: 28 + 4.00
AGI: 21 + 1.80
INT: 14 + 1.10
attack damage: 68-70
attack range: 128
Your hero's stat gain is stupid and broken. 28 str + 4 per level is way too powerful, where that tiny amount of int is going to make it impossible for him to use all his skills with their mana costs. Supplementing his mana in items such as an arcane ring would work, but why must an auto-attacker dump 2000+ gold just to be able to FUNCTION CORRECTLY? Also, 68-70 dmg on an auto-attacking, str melee hero is nuts.

aspd: 1.61
mspd: 280
Are you trying to imply your hero is balanced because despite his overpowered stats he's slow? Dota doesn't work that way bud. For one your hero makes up for it with a leap move and a stun. For two, giving a hero such bad speed is making them UNDERPOWERED and unbalanced, but in this case your heroes skills and statgain make it an exception.

Shatter

Leaps Onto a unit Striking it with its blade delivering heavy damage and pushes it forward .

LVL 1 = shatters 100 hp and 100 mana . 100 range knockback distance . 350 Leap Distance

LVL 2 = shatters 185 hp and 185 mana . 165 range knocback distance . 450 Leap Distance

LVL 3 = shatters 245 hp and 245 mana . 200 range knockback distance . 650 Leap Distance

LVL 4 = shatters 300 hp and 300 mana . 265 range knockback distance . 750 Leap Distance

manacost - 160 at all levels
cooldown - 30/25/20/15
cast range - 128 at all levels
cast time: 0.12
How exactly is this a leap if the cast-range is 128? How're you supposed to leap at someone when you need to be in near melee range to even use it? I can accept a 300 life and mana burn every 15 seconds, but with a 750 leap and a knockback? No. No. No. Imba imho. Nasty chasing skill too, essentially no enemy can flee from you unless your retarded int stat gain has your mana low enough.

With Each Kill , Leonidas Rapidly increases his momentum , gaining temporary Strength Buff that lasts for 7 seconds .

LVL 1 = gives 1.0 str per creep , gives 2.0 str per hero

LVL 2 = gives 1.5 str per creep , gives 4.0 str per hero

LVL 3 = gives 2.0 str per creep , gives 6.0 str per hero

LVL 4 = gives 2.5 str per creep , gives 8.0 str per hero

manacost - N/A
cooldown - N/A
cast range - N/A
cast time - N/A
7 seconds isn't a very long time. You'll never see this useful against any hero, because if you get a battlefury and buriza to creep a group fast, giving you 10-20 str, you're only getting +10-20 dmg and +200-400 life for seven seconds, that's barely enough for your slow hitting and moving hero to take advantage of. You'd be better off lowering it to a smaller str gain and a longer lasting effect so at least it's USEFUL.

heavily Bashes its Shield onto a Target Unit dealing damage to the Force given by Leonidas . deals damage depending on Strength and Base Damage .

LVL 1 = 50% of strength plus 20% of damage . stuns for 1.40 second

LVL 2 = 80% of strength plus 30% of damage . stuns for 1.60 seconds

LVL 3 = 120% of strength plus 40% of damage . stuns for 1.80 seconds

LVL 4 = 150% of strength plus 50% of damage . stuns for 2.00 seconds

mana cost - 85/95/105/115
cooldown - 18 at all levels
A two second stun for around 200-300 dmg given your stats are averagely geared, every 18 seconds. A basher on this guy would be pretty gross if you grabbed a hyperstone first to make up for his idiotically slow attack speed, wouldn't it? Anyways, this skill isn't bad, but it's extremely bland, done before, and doesn't synergize well with his other skills. I'd say if you had to ditch all but one move, keep this one, since it's the only one you seem remotely close to doing well.

Spartan Rage

Releases the True power of a Spartan Warrior , Turning his Own Body into a Lethal Weapon . Lasts for 15 seconds

LVL 1 = increases your strength by 15% , Reduces Physical damage by 15% , increases AS by 25%

LVL 2 = increases your strength by 25% , Reduces Physical damage by 25% , increases AS by 35%

LVL 3 = increases your strength by 45% , Reduces Physical damage by 35% , increases AS by 50%


example: if your strength is 100 and you use Spartans Rage Lv3 , 45% of 100 is (100x0.45) = 45 , so 100+45 = 145 will be your total strength for 12 seconds

manacost - 200/250/300
cooldown - 140/100/85
The moment I saw 85 second cooldown, I decided it is imba. By the way, is the skill 15 second or 12 second duration, because in your example you say 12 but the description says 15. Anyways, this skill makes enemies flee from you, but since you got a stun and leap they can't escape, so you become an overpowered killing machine, and you do it every minute and fifteen seconds - just about as long as it takes for your enemies to reenter the game after dying late game, so you can do it again. Not to mention it costs 300 mana, which is kinda of stupid since your hero has bad mana gain due to his int. Of course you could drop money into more mana but then you weaken your ulti by not taking str stuff and autoattacking stuff.

CONCLUSION: Think more thoroughly how the hero would fare in an actual 5v5 dota game. Your hero is a hit or miss - can be useless to the team, or can be imba enough to make the other team leave-game early. Not to mention this hero will not be fun at all to play since you will either always be out of mana or forced to buy an arcane ring and an energy booster just to use your skills. If you want advice for how to fix your hero up and make it much more presentable, I'd go up and reread my post, address some of the problems I point out. Drastically, not slightly.

Good luck, hope your hero improves.

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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 12:14 am

@Zabasaz

hmmm ... thank you for using .."terrible" , "retarded" , "Stupid" and other GOOD words that u said .... i do appreciate it ..

oh .. did i mention that this is only a Dream Hero ??? aww maybe not
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