A story hope you enjoy 3...(Phantom Lancer Story)

A story hope you enjoy 3...(Phantom Lancer Story)

Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 4:27 am

Another one...

Ok,... this time I hope you enjoy it.

When the orcs sensed an anomaly in the Stonetalon Mountains, they sent an orc named Broxigar

and a younger warrior...The younger warrior was killed and Broxigar was thrown thousands of

years in the past to the time when the Kal'dorei(night elves) was young and the time of the

war of the ancients...There he was captured by the moonguard and treated like an animal by

the Kal'dorei. But Tyrande treats him fairly and would give him food and healed his

wounds(Broxigar calls him shaman, believing that her healing powers came from spirits). One

day Tyrande set him free...

Now here comes the fanfic part...

Broxigar, escaping, stumbled upon a Female Kal'dorei warrior...

"What are you doing here!?, escape now while you can!" said the female warrior.

Broxigar escaped. But went back a few days later telling himself:

"I'm gonna check up on shaman if they will punish her for freeing me" he tells himself

repatedly.

But every time he tells himself, the scenery of the night that the warrior had let him go

flashes in his mind. He strugles to keep track of what he's doing then, he feel someone

tapping he's shoulder. When he turns to see who it is, he's surprised to see that it's the

same Kal'Dorei warrior...

"What are you still doing here!? you're not supposed to be here if they catch you, they

might do something worse than lock you up and treat you like an animal! Escape now! Don't

worry, Tyrande is alright." said the Kal'dorei warrior.

When Broxigar left, he kept thinking about the warrior. Several times he came back telling

himself that his motive was to check up on the safety of Tyrande, each time he did, a

feeling of fidelity came upon him that was always distracting him, each time he came, he

recieved the same warnings from the same warrior. Until he only came to see the warrior.

And one day, he finally admitted to himself that he had feelings for the Kal'dorei warrior.

One night, while the warrior was on night watch duty he approached her, and admitted his

feelings for the Kal'dorei warrior...Feeling shocked(but overjoyed), the warrior denied her

affections(if the two of them are seen together she would be a laughing stock of the

Kal'dorei cause they look at Broxigar as an animal) and told him that she just doesn't feel

the same way towards him...Broxigar, heart broken, went home, lonely...The warrior also

saddened, fell to tears when Broxigar was out of sight.

A few days later, the Burning Legion finally invaded in Azeroth, and the Kal'dorei warrior

that Broxigar loved was one of the first warriors to fight the first few waves of the

legion's attack. The Kal'dorei force soon overwhelmed and was overrun and the warrior that

Broxigar loved was fataly wounded and battered was almost crushed by the stampeding horde of

Felhounds if it was not for the efforts of rescue by Broxigar.

"I-ah-I, ha-have t-to c-c-confess m-my t-true f-felings f-for y-you, Bro-Brox-si-si-ga-r"

said the Kal'dorei warrior.

"Please, save your breath for your life, please don't die on me!, not after that we finally

know how we feel for each other! And I have not even found out your name!" said Broxigar.

"M-My n-name i-is K-Keina Moonbreeze" replied The Kal'dorei warrior.

Tyrande approached them, healed Keina's wounds and said:

"The goddess approves of your relationship, but I'm not sure with the rest of the Kal'dorei,

please take care of her, like shandris, she is like a child to me. I know that you love her

and that she loves you, start a home in the forests of Ashenvale. Please aid us in this

war, but first, take care her."

While Keina was resting, love between her and Broxigar grew. And soon, Keina bore a child

that resembled an orc but has the skin of a night elf. Their son soon had descendants and

to the present day, Azwrath, the Phantom Lancer, fights in honor of his ancestor who bravely

fought the dark titan, Sargeras and strook a mighty blow on the titan's leg.

The End...

I ran out of ideas for my usual style, so I made this to have something different
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Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 7:38 am

COOL! But the part about the orc & the night elf loving each other is an incrediblely fiction. The brute orcs and the lovely night elves loving is quite a sick idea.
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Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 7:54 am

Yeah I know but I just really wanted to post something cause I'm terribly bored and I ran out of ideas(now that I think of it, it is sick and wrong)
oh and I should have changed the title to: Why the race of Phantom Lancer exists

Oh yeah if you really wanna know what sick is check out Elune and Malorne's love story, it's a Kal'dorei goddess and a giant stag love story
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 12:09 am

Ewwww now that i think about it, that IS disturbing... a goddess loving a huge stag... BEASTIALITY i say!

Nice story btw but it seemed a bit..well..rushed...
Anyways, keep it up

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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 1:55 am

Well...I really ain't that good at writing stories it's just somekind of I don't know, I really can't call it a past time, it's just something I like doing anyways I really kinda start to feel lazy typing when I reach the final parts
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 3:33 am

Cool 666 really cool but its too imba 666 stats
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 3:58 am

lol?

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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 4:08 am

Please give me ideas of what to write
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 4:38 am

lol ~~~ nice imaginations ther my friend !! nice story .. but i agree wid grey_crow .. hahaha orc and an elf loving each other ? .. lol !!!
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 4:54 am

Hmmmmm, a different story of phantom lancer.....

Interesting.......
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 9:40 am

Thanks for the comment guys, I still have to think of other stories before I can post again
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 2:30 pm

Nice. keep writing these.
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:07 am

this is the story of how the lancer was born d'ohh. this ishh is what Broxigar and Keina Moonbreeze tell azwraith when its is birthday and when its their aniversary *lol* : "and I was like OMG! Im pregnant!"
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 11:37 am

OK. I GOT FREAKED OUT. I COULDNT READ PAST THE FIRST LINE. please dont leave such big spaces. newayz i will go and try and read the satory now. Wish me luck
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