A story hope you enjoy it 4 (warcraft meets written death)

A story hope you enjoy it 4 (warcraft meets written death)

Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:13 am

Hope you enjoy it...

One dark night at Lordaeron,it was stormy, the only sounds that can be heard was the sound of the raindrops kissing the ground and the sound of thunder that echoed through the sky.
There was a man named Leo, whose family was killed by a depraved murderer, he could only stare at the murderer as he escaped. Even when the murderer was caught he was never brought to trial, because of insufficient evidence. Soon the murderer was released. He was even thought of by the royal court as a mentally ill man. He was even sentenced to five years of rehabilitation in a strict correctional asylum, where he fell inlove with a kind miracle worker named Mave, that helped prove of his sobriety.

One day, as he was walking through a market place, he saw the very same man who had killed his family...

Giving him a mocking gesture and laughed at and said" How pitiful you now are, you have now, absolutely nothing..."

Leo, making an angry look towards the man, upsets the murderer and hits him in the face. Upon leaving the market place, he stumbles upon a black notebook that has the label on top "DEATHNOTE" and takes it home. Reading it's instructions(it says that if a man's name is written inside it he or she will die), he wrote the man's name as an act of cursing.

Moments later he heard commotion around the place and went to see what was going on...

"Oh my gosh he's dead" "WTF, happened here" "Call for a doctor"

The commotion went on until the rest of the night. Leo could not believe what happened, and

thought to himself that it was all a coincidence. The following day, he visited Mave and

saw the patient that she was taking care of. It was a woman who was not in the right state

of mind. All of a sudden the woman seized Mave by the neck andattemptted to choked her to

death, Leo, quickly responded and grabed the woman by the shoulders and removed her off

Mave. Later that evening, Mave and Leo had a talk about the incident.

"I think that you should retire from that dangerous proffesion, my dear(yes, they already had an affair)" said Leo.

"But I can't Leo, she is someone in need of special care until she attains her sobriety" replied Mave.

Leo, a bit upset and short tempered, wrote down the woman's name and luaghed about the entire incident. The next day, when Mave visited the woman, she heard a shocking news that the woman died. When the news got to Leo, he thought to himself, "does this notebook really kill? Let's find out shall we." He went to the their town's hall and at that time KingTerenas Menthil happened to be at the same place. He thought to himself,

"this man released the murderer and embarrased me infront of the people on that day" let's see if this works,

He wrote the name of King Terenas Menthil on the notebook. Moments after, he saw the king pressing his chest and and falls to the ground. Then after a few seconds the king lays motionless on the floor.

"What is happening there, get a doctor quickly" shouts prince Arthas.

"I am sorry Prince Arthas the king of Lordaeron has perished" said the doctor who examined the king's body.

Upon exiting the hall, a demonlike creature lands right infront of him.

"So I see that you finally confirmed that thing's power" said the creature.

"What are you" said Leo.

"Hmm...you're not reading a lot of the rules" I'm the deathgod and I'm the master of that deathnote" said the deathgod (shinigami)

After conversing for a few more minutes, Leo finally heads home. Leo writes the name of the other judges of the royal court and other criminals. He finally decides to play as "the saviour" who will iridate the world of all evil and injustices.

As the mysterious deaths strook the land, the people started to talk of an angel of justice that will save their land of all evil. The Silver Hand, finally alarmed, started an investigation of the deaths.

"Could this be a plague" said a paladin.

"No the targets are to limited to the criminals and the royal court judges" said prince Arthas.

"I agreen with you boy, if there are specific targets, than this must be a mass killing case" added Uther.

"Hmmm...there are to little clues to go on, we may not be able to solve this" said another paladin.

"That could be arranged, I heard that there is a brilliant student in Kirin'tor that doesn't like to study magic, he is even capable of outwitting even it's highest of arcmagi's" said Uther.

"Then let's contact him" said Arthas.

"That's not entirely possible, lad, he is very secretive and even throws glass bottles even at the highest of Kirin'tor's mages if he doesn't get what he wants" added Uther.

Months of mysterious death's have passed and the news finally arrived to Kirin'tor. When they sent him to investigate on the case, he sent a messenger that told of the results that
he is probably a peasant that works for landlords because all the killings happen real early in the morning or real late at night. The messenger also said that the Kirin'tor student is done with this and he won't solve it.

When the Silver Hand stopped the working of all peasants of a lordfor about a week(one lord at a time), Killings happened after stopping the working from one of the Silver Hand's knights and they were soon investigated...

"Hmm....these are the suspects, middle class pesant, Leo and two lower class, Reede and Mealad, they all had been victims criminal cases, and all were tried by the royal court and the criminals were all released" said Arthas.

"No lad, every single one of them can be a suspect, many people hate criminals, but we cannot stop the weekly vacation for each lord because if we do, we might be suspected that we are investigating" replied Uther.

Leo thought to himself that the vacations for a whole week was just to kind for his cruel overlord and so when the vacations finally finished. He decided to write the names of the Silver Hand's knights(they are famous) and the Kirin'tor's Magis(they are famous too).

The striking death blows left Prince Arthas alone and miserable his freinds, and family are now all dead. In the castle while he was greiving his losses, an object dropped beside him, it was a black note book that is labled "DEATHNOTE" he picked it up and when he turned back, he saw a figure that looked like a demon.

"Hmmm...I've been watching you lately Arthas Menethil, oh where are my manners my apologies prince" said the shinigami.

"What is this, and more importantly, what are you?" replied Arthas.

"Why, I'm the master of that notebook, you know it can end your problems" Added the shinigami

"How" Arthas asks.

"Why just write a person's name and that person will die" the shinigami answers.

With that he searched Lordaeron for the man, but Leo kept on killing. The shinighami told him:

"If you acquire the eyeof the shinigami you will see a person's name as long as you can see their face you can even see their life time and their name, oh and if that persons using a deathnote you won't see that person's life time."

Prince Arthas travelling all of Lordaeron failed to see the man he was after, even with his aquired eyes. Then one night he bumped with two people. Arthas, quickly responding, thought to use his eyes to see their names to give a proper apology. But when he used his eyes he saw Leo's name but there was no lifetime. Quickly realizing that this is the man he was after, he drew his sword and slashed his arm and used the blood and a piece of wood to write Leo's name.

"You, you are the man who took everything away from me!" shouted Arthas.

Realising that Arthas was writing his name in a deathnote he quckly grabbed his sword and

stabbed Mave at the heart and quickly draws out his deathnote and used her blood to write with his finger, he wrote: "Arthas Menethil" in his deathnote. A few moments later both of them died.

The end.
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:24 am

erm, y didnt he just kill him the sword.....
insead of wasting time with writing names

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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:26 am

I don't really get the last part. Why did he put his own name there. Because he's alone???

But this is amazing!! I like it!!

Now I know what a want for Christmas!!
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:37 am

Yay.Another great story...
Keep it going...

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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:49 am



good point there, he was addicted to it
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 3:04 pm

ahhahaha what a story,just like DEATH NOTE the anime series.. but why mixed it in warcraft >< those who are interested just watch the anime its great
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 3:38 pm

@leander_05
are you leander abergas just asking?

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nice story
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 2:40 pm

Nice one. Keep it up.
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