Who should be the main character?

No ending time set.
Lina 4% [ 10 ]


Mortred 11% [ 25 ]


Anub' Arak 2% [ 6 ]


Magina 21% [ 46 ]


Terrorblade 11% [ 25 ]


Sven 14% [ 30 ]


Rylai 13% [ 29 ]


Banehallow 10% [ 23 ]


Purist 4% [ 9 ]


Kel' Thuzad 3% [ 8 ]

Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 12:14 pm

WoW Bardman thats some good noir story ur writin there and TYRFRING is BACK OOOOOOOOOOH YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH the holy creator of dota school rumble "CHEERS" yyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaayy
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Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 1:00 pm

Hehe.. Thanks btw I was thinking of making the dead come back to life. They'll be in an ethereal plane with ______,_______,_______,______ and ________ what do you guys think? PM me if you want to know the blanks ^_^
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Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2007 10:11 pm

I do I do!

But I'm not gonna pm MUHAHAHAHA!

Here is my teacher/leshrac story continued.
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"Ah, so you're gonna hang out with them little boys?"

"Yeah, I mean, they're evil guys, I'm evil so we balance eathother out. Besides, they are the only other goths in school." The strange spirit told Mirana. The rush of the luchbreak was about to tear them apart, so she threw a quick response "Well, you can all go goth then See you"

Leshrac quicly wiped the smirk off his face, and went back to the basement bathroom. There he found his two friends and three girls. Ish'Kafel was rolling up a Ancien Tango of Potification with a Scroll of Town Doper. Obsidian was making out with Krobelus, and holding the others with his extra limbs. Krobelus turned back seductively, leaving Obsidian to one of those greenish etheral girls. "Well, who do I see here, isn't it the spirit who sleeps with the teache . . . Hey, quit puffing that thing into my face!" Ish'Kafel smiled, and spoke for the first time this week "Sorry, bitch. Oh yeah, Nerzhul broke my silence oath this afternoon." They threw a sarcastic frown at eathother when they were interrupted by Leshrac.

"Who are these new, girls? (They're girls, arent they?)" Both of those figures turned around. "My father killed me when I was a baby." "I was raped and murdered." The etheral girls introduced themselves. Krobelus made the former greeting. "Leshrac, these are just two of my spirits, Melinda and Selene. By the way, I have to talk to you, about this. Girls, go back where I told you to!" Obsidian, dismayed, didn't wanted to let got, but the spirits popped and vanished. The banshee and the strange creature went outside and started walking.

"Look bringing spirits to school, that is some bad business. If it goes on your record . . ." Krobelus placed a finger on his mouth. "This is what I have to tell you, I need you. The prom next week, I'm gonna do an exorcism!" Leshrac was stunned, not by a storm bolt but . . .

-WHAT! So you are storing spirits nearby? How many have you got?
-40ish and more coming, I will hit the fifty mark and stop.
-Look, Kro, smoking Tangoes, that can be cloaked. Going Astral, that can save our ass from escaping school. But do you honestly think that IceFrog will not notice the spirit count around the school (they have machines that count it) is off by a 50!
-Exactly, that is where you come to the thing! Mirana is doing the count next week.
-Well, then we are gonna have fun, but I will have to check with her.
-OK then, you do it tonight.

Suddently, he saw a figure creeping down to the basement. He knew what was about to happen, he had to intervene before it was to late.

"Hey, creep, get out of there!" Leshrac shouted. He spotted that furry creature and the armoured knight last night, they came down here. Itw as the trio's free perios and damn they were gonna use it.

"This is out place, goth. Just get the hell out of here!" Barathrum tried to intimidate Leshrac. Abaddon drew his sword up. "Move, or I will nove you" he said, sticking his Froustmourne out. Leshrac could feel the etheral wind blowing towards the sword, trying to catch spirits as they flat by. Obsidian, creeping out from the bathrooms door walked by Leshrac and spoke into his ear "Man, Kafel's high. We gotta take them two on two." Then he turned to the two standing in front of them. "I'm quite positive we can resolve this figh . . . ATTACK LESHRAC! ASTRAL PRISON!" He suddently shouted and pointed his two scepters at Abaddon, which dissapeared in green light. Leshrac saw Barathrum fix his eyes on Obsidian and disappear. He knew what to do. Just as the shadows near them got denser, he splitted open the earth. The appeared Barathrum fell down, stunned. He quicly reales a Diabolic Edict, and turned his Pulse Nova on. Just at that moment, Abaddon reappeared, feeling like his brain was invaded. He forged a shield of energy around his falling ally. Harbinger touched his two staff's crystal ends together and conqured a ball of pure mana and launched at Barathrum. Leshrac shouted "NO!" and the shield exploded, sending the two flying. Bothered by the blasts of the diabolic mana current and the constant pulsing of flames surrionding them, the two got a chance to pick themselves up. Another green ball of mana hit barathrum right in the chest and sent him flying through the wall. Abaddon, already wounded from the onslaught of the spells, chanted a prayer to Nerzhul that covered him in an inpenetratable shield. The blasts of lightning and the arcane orbs couldn't hur him and both turned to escape

"Oh no, it doesn't end there" a voice appeared behind the door. His eyes were blood red and he could barely stand up. He watched the carrion swarm traveling at supersonic speed to harm the attackers, bats biting them and trying to eat through their flesh. Ish'Kafel managed to create a void in his clouded brain and he crudely pulled the attackers near Leshrac and Obsidian. Krobelus was watching them from across the exit door of the basement, smiling. Leshrac, with a movement of his hand, crushed the earth and bounded then to the ground with earth shackles. Obsidian turned to the gang to recieve confirmation. The two boys nodded. The girl spoke "Oh, for the love of Satan, yes!" Obsidian gave a devilish smile.

He closed his eyes. His eyelids started twitching and his eyes were forced opened. His head was gathering electricity and generated sparks at nearby metal objects. His eyes were completely radiant with blue light. He pulled his head ear his curled arms and gave a little moan. Then he toseed his head backwards while drawing his arms to his side, tightened and in agony and screamed "AAAAARGH!" A cloud of dense magic appeared at the ceiling and countless red bolts cascaded like a waterfall from the clouds. They gazed upon the burnt, unconcious heores. Ish'Kafel, a little bit sobered up from this display of power, Vacuumed them to the infirmary. Leshrac looked at his iBracer. "Holy shit, the lesson starts in 2 minutes!" and the gang dissipated.
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How do you like that? Leshrac doesn't act that goth near Mirana, it is just that because he is both the ass and the sensitive guy.
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Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 4:49 am

Interesting... Bard Man hopes to see more after Christmas. Until then, HO HO HO!
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 3:40 am

Heres the story guys ^_^

When the centaur opened his eyes he saw his friends looking down on him. Hey guys he's awake! Nevermore shouted.

Centaur: Ughhh.. Where am I?
Nevermore: The Ethereal Plane I guess. This is where the dead roam.
Centaur: (Sees Razor) Why is he here?!
????: This is where the spirits of the dead dwell.
Razor: Wh...wh..who's there?!
(As he said that an old man stepped forward.)
Razor: What the?! Your nothing but a scrawny old man!!
Necrolyte: Silence! If you do not wish your soul to perish here you will listen to what I have to say.
Centaur: May I ask a question?
Necrolyte: Yes you may.
Centaur: Where are the others?
Necrolyte: They are in the care of the others.
Nevermore: Others? There are more of you?
Necrolyte: No. I have companions in this realm.
Nevermore: Companions? Who?
Necrolyte:Visage, The Necro'lic. Krobelus, The Death Prophet. Ezalor, The Keeper of the Light and Atropos, The Bane Elemental. You may search for them, but I'm not responsible if your souls get lost. If you can't fin them then you'll wander here forever... HAHAHAHAHAHA!
Centaur: Let's go Nevermore.
Nevermore: Ok
Razor: Hey Hey what about me!! Wait up! HEY!!

So.... if you guys like it I'll continue but if you don't then I'll just edit it into something else.
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 3:51 am

GREAT, continue it man!!
Umm, was nevermore already dead?
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 4:42 am

sven! even though he gets owned unless your playing pubs, i think you can make a great story out of him

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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 4:55 pm

@yogmee
please read "value of true power by razorfane" It's a good story about sven.
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 6:47 pm

He plagiarized the story, btw this is not THAT swen, wtf would you say that?

Krobelus was mine! Well she can do two things at the same time, she probably used the spirits from the nether realm

Someone has to compile these things
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 9:53 am

Who plagiarized the story? Sorry... Please continue to explain about Krobelus being yours thing......... sorry. BTW Axe is the only survivor of the group.
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 2:46 pm

pudge needs to be like an super hero, cafeteria cook by day, super hero by night

SUPAH PUDGE POWAHS!!!
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 10:46 am

Hey, SlwaBluPhnx, who plagiarized which story?
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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 11:20 am

lol i voted terrorblade, i was going to vote magina...but terrorblade seems more of a MAIN character xD
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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 2:49 am

This Ethereal Plane arc seems kinda lame
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and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 4:52 pm

meh spread the christmas spirit!

*pours stale eggnogg on bardman*

just returning the favor!
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