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Gon Rockbreaker - The Ogre Warrior

Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 11:59 am

This is my first dream hero. this picture is hero model.

Gon Rockbreaker - The Ogre Warrior
Range: 100 | Move Speed: 290
Primary: STR
Str: 25 + 2.95 | Agi: 14 + 1.55 | Int: 14 + 1.65
Damage: 54 – 60 | HP: 600 | Mana: 200
HP Regen: 1.00 | Mana Regen: 0.69
Attack Speed: 1.65 | Armor: 3

Extreme thrust (E)
Gon smashing his mace to enemy with very powerful thrust,so he feel pain after use it.stun for 2 second.
Level 1 - Deals 100 damage cost 10 HP
Level 2 - Deals 150 damage cost 15 HP
Level 3 - Deals 250 damage cost 25 HP
Level 4 - Deals 300 damage cost 30 HP
Mana Cost: 95/ 115/ 125/ 135
Cooldown: 15

Attack weak point (A)
Gon have ability to sense enemy weak point.every attack have chance to maim attack.
Level 1 - 10% chance to maim attack
Level 2 - 15% chance to maim attack
Level 3 - 20% chance to maim attack
Level 4 - 25% chance to maim attack
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A

Warcry (W)
Gon focused his spiritual power to gain more power and speed. increase all stat for 10 second.
Level 1 - +5 to all stat
Level 2 - +7 to all stat
Level 3 - +9 to all stat
Level 4 - +11 to all stat
Mana Cost: 30/ 50/ 70/ 100
Cooldown: 20

Berserk (S)
Gon use special potion to throw himself in rage condition. increase attack speed and movement speed also losing hp per second.last 10 second
Level 1 - Increases attack speed by 100% and movement speed by 10%. losing 5 hp per second
Level 2 - Increases attack speed by 125% and movement speed by 15%. losing 10 hp per second
Level 3 - Increases attack speed by 150% and movement speed by 20%. losing 15 hp per second
Mana Cost: 125/ 150/ 200
Cooldown: 150

please give comment. If too powerful please correct it!

Changelog 23/09/2006
-fix imbalance skills
1. increase mana cost and cooldown time for Berserk and Extreme Thrust
2. decrease chance attack weak point
-fix skill name and grammar
P.S : please give me suggest for grammar

Last edited by zex on Sat Sep 23, 2006 12:50 am; edited 3 times in total

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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 10:12 pm

Hmm, i don't really think your hero's skills fit with his race.. And please improve the grammar.
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 10:42 pm

Wow this guy is wayyy to stacked.

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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 2:24 am

First skill is too cheap.
Second skill is too powerful! Needs to be nerfed.
Warcry is good enough..
Berserk manacost too cheap.. And there are 4 manacosts. O_O

This hero needs a nerf..
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:40 am

errr... nice hero, but i think hes too stacked up. good poinnt asdfjjj
your grammar sounds like gon the ogre wrote it himself! (no offence)
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 9:35 am

this hero really needs nerfing

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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 10:33 am

Don't mind the grammar.. Not all people can speak English well anyway. But try to improve.

^_^
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 9:43 pm

yea, some fixes and better style would make this a good hero to enter my next group.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 12:35 am

yeah....I've edited it. I need some suggestion for grammar and hero description.

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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 4:53 am

Checking...
HP: 625
Mana: 182

Ulti's hotkey cannot be (S) since it's an active skill. Change it or something.
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