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Freedert Whitefang - White Wolf (revised skills)

Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 11:44 pm

Freedert Whitefang The White wolf
This is probably my last creation before hero builder

Freedert was once the greatest wolf in his pack but he was banished for taking part in the war of the sentinel and the scourge, living as a stray freedert was found by one of the sentinels most nobel soldiers, rexaar the beastmaster as freedert joins the sentinel he has promised to help the sentinel in return of the sentinel accepting him.

Stats
STR: 18 + 1.75
Agi[Primary]: 22 + 2.55
Int: 18 + 2.00
HP: 492
Mana: 195
Armor: 4
Aspd: 1.4 + 22% IAS
Range: 140 [melee]
Movespeed: 310
HP regen: 0.54 HP/sec
Mana Regen: 0.72 mana/sec
Base damage: 46-48

Skills

Rapid Slash- Freedert unleashes lightning fast slashes to the target if the target goes out of range Rapid Slash would be canceled. (considered as a physical attack)(abilities can be used while slashing)
200 aoe at all levels
cooldown: 30/20/15/10
manacost: 100/110/120/140
duration: 4 seconds
Level 1-200AS% each slash deals 10 damage ,
Level 2-300AS% each slash deals 20 damage
Level 3-400AS% each slash deals 30 damage
Level 4-500AS% each slash deals 40 damage

Piercing Cut- Freedert's claws gains the chance damage an opponents armor. When he is succesful he deals 20 damage to the target, targets armor can only be reducted once every 2 seconds
Cooldown:15/10/5/3
Duration: 2 seconds
Level 1- 10% chance to reduce targets armor by 2
Level 2- 15% chance to reduce targets armor by 3
Level 3- 20% chance to reduce targets armor by 4
Level 4- 25% chance to reduce targets armor by 5

Slyness- Freedert has the ability to predict the next move of the enemy.

Level 1-10% chance to evade
Level 2-15% chance to evade
Level 3-22% chance to evade
Level 4-27% chance to evade

Chain Crushes- Freedert attacks with extreme speed resulting in him jumping through opponents and damaging them, you get 30% more damage while using Chain Crush.
Manacost:160/220/320
Duration:5 seconds
Cooldown:70/60/50
Level 1-Freedert can jump 3 times, number of slashes is determined by attack speed, can be used with rapid slash

Level 2-Freedert can jump 5 times, number of slashes is determined by attack speed, can be used with rapid slash

Level 3-Freedert can jump 7 times, number of slashes is determined by attack speed, can be used with rapid slash

sorry for some of the skill details missing did this hero in the morning

Changelog:
Changed 2nd and last skill

Last edited by donatboy on Mon Sep 25, 2006 12:13 pm; edited 4 times in total

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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:29 am

ee, what is the duration of Rapid Slash? Is it gonna slash all the way until the enemy goes out of range?
Nice hero though!
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:25 am

Slyness is like blur but without transparency, its even weaker.. and your ultimate is like that black hero who collects souls(i forgot his name, sooo stupid)... The first 2 skills have high synergy.

Do some adjustments and you'll be great.
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:28 am

Rapid slash reminds me of Celestine's thousand slash. Ahehehe..
Deep wounds is like Ulfsaar's fury swipes.
Slyness needs a buff..
Orb of souls is like necromastery of Nevermore.

Hmm.. so-so..
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:43 am

i changed the second skill a bit and completely changed orb of souls to chained crush since it sticks to the concept a little.

please judge again
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Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 10:11 am

Wow, now its excellent! well done!
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 7:06 am

Heaven, black hero you mean nevermore?
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 11:38 am

Hey! No poll thread..
Can't make this hero voted..
Even the hero is cool, still no thread poll!
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 11:42 am

poll thread? what do you mean i should put polls? or the main thread?
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 11:48 am

Okay.. How about if this hero gets many "good" replies on this hero, then this hero is cool.

Let's see, this hero has been accepted by at least 3-5 or 3-6 peeps, including yourself. If this hero is cool enough by 6 peeps or more, this hero may enter icefrog's sights.
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 11:52 am

hmmmm 6 or more? hmmm its hard to just ask people to comment since i dont force my hero to get into ice frogs sight i just want to have fun like everyone does any way peeps the only people who didnt reply yet are drew nidoking noobster kaizer aboardboy and orochi please here me out hehe comment on this
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 12:58 pm

The Hero is cool but the ultimate its not almost the same as Juggernat??? and the Piercing cut its like ulfsaar? and the ultimate get canceled if they came out of range?

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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:17 pm

its like omni but more like chain frost effect but slashes opponents before another jump, yes it gets cancelled when the target/s go out of range, the difference from omni slash is freedert uses normal attack and he can use skills
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Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 6:05 am

@darkshadow
Yea i mean nevermore.

@everyone
I can just send this hero to icefrog O.o. he things i am some kind of official representetive or sthg. or so i think.
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Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 11:03 am

Hmm....not bad but i think maybe you could make rapid slash last longer but the attack speed slow at level 4 maybe at 350%??? maybe make the duration at 20seconds,4 seconds is so fast lolz hard to get a kill if this hero is in dota on my opinion but over all nice hero!!!
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