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Scythorn-The Arcane Ranger

Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:41 pm

Scythorn - The Arcane Ranger
Range: 600 | Move Speed: 305
Primary: AGI
Str: 18 + 1.6 | Agi: 30 + 3.4 | Int: 20 + 1.6
Damage: 51 - 56 | HP: 492 | Mana: 260
HP Regen: 0.79 | Mana Regen: 0.81
Attack Speed: 1.4 | Armor: 5

Scythorn was once a Woodelf General alongside with Sylvanas.They were very good friends and fought together every battle.However,Scythorn was a Woodelf unlike all others.His father was a Woodelf,but his mother was a Highborn.So he was a half-blood.One day,he had a vision,he saw that he could combine magic with his Ranging skills.He told about it to Sylvanas but she was purely negative because her pride didn't let her to agree with it.Although his disappointment,he told his mother about the dream and she lend him some books in order to learn to use magic with his natural Ranger skills.He,then,started to practice,mystically,some magic forms in order to find the best synergy with his skills.However,Sylvanas found about it and,blinded from such a betrayal,she sworn to haunt him down.Luckily,he was able to escape using some of the magics he had learned and escaped to the mountains.He was hiding in the caves learning how to survive in such environments for many years and studying over the books his mother had given him.He has lost the count of days and had no idea of what was going in the woods.One day,while he was studying,he found a story of a legendary bow named Quicksilver.After 3 years of endless searching he found at last the bow and mastered magic synergy over his skills.The bow,however was alive and evil.It was trying to take Scythorn's heart but Scythorn was stronger and in the end he made the bow to act as his will.After all this time of endless wondering,he returned to the woods in order to show Sylvanas how wrong she was.When he arrived,he found nothing but ruins and strange ghouls.After slaying all of them,he found a Lich named Kel`Thusan,who saw the fury and the power that was burning in his whole being and made him an offer.He would reincarnate his family for his power and support in the battlefield.He agreed but with some doubts.When his mother and his father stood before him,he couldn't believe his magical eyes.They said that Sylvanas killed them because of his betrayal.His rage and fury was unstoppable and Quicksilver found in this very moment to partly take control of him.He now has sworn his alliance to the Lich King and sworn to make Sylvanas to pay.He now stands in the battlefield seeking to destroy the World Tree and to kill Sylvanas.

Frost Shot (T)
Scythorn is adept at firing a frost shot that slows the target and makes him more vulnerable for 4 seconds.It can be fired from 800 range.
Level 1 - Deals 100 damage,slows the target's movement speed by 5%,his attack speed by 10% and reducing armor by 2 for 5 seconds.
Level 2 - Deals 150 damage,slows the target's movement speed by 10%%,his attack speed by 20% and reducing armor by 3 for 5 seconds.for 5 seconds.
Level 3 - Deals 250 damage,slows the target's movement speed by 15%,his attack speed by 30% and reducing armor by 4 for 5 seconds.
Level 4 - Deals 300 damage,slows the target's movement speed by 20%,his attack speed by 40% and reducing armor by 5 for 5 seconds.
Mana Cost: 100/125/150/160
Cooldown: 20
Framework: A frost arrow like Traxex's will be fired at the opponent with normal speed.
Notes: A pure damaging disable that helps a lot.

Quicksilver (E)
Quicksilver is the arrow that Scythorn found among his journeys.It is an alive bloodthirsty bow that has partly taken control over him.It becomes deadlier with each kill and when Scythorn's life is in danger it takes full control and attacks with tremendous speed.
Level 1 - 25% attack speed increase when his life falls at 10%,1 damage for each hero kill.Adds 1 damage for each 6 agility.
Level 2 - 50% attack speed increase when his life falls at 20%,1.5 for each hero kill.Adds 1 damage for each 5 agility.
Level 3 - 750% attack speed in increase when his life falls at 30%,1.7 damage for each hero kill.Adds 1 damage for each 4 agility.
Level 4 - 100% attack speed increase when his life falls at 40%,2 damage for each hero kill.Adds 1 damage for each 3 agility.
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Framework: Scythorn holds a silver bow as in the icon which becomes red when the buff is on.
Notes: A buff and agility bonus.

Scy Eyes (C)
His eyes are magical allowing him to passively make his opponents fear him slowing their attack speed,making them to miss their attacks and are able to find sometimes the weakness of the perfect armor.
Level 1 - Reduces attack speed by 15% and makes them miss every 10 attacks.Has 11% chance to do 1.75 of normal damage.
Level 2 - Reduces attack speed by 20% and makes them miss every 8 attacks.Has 12% chance to do 2 of normal damage.
Level 3 - Reduces and attack speed by 25% and makes them miss every 6 attacks.Has 13% chance to do 2.2 of normal damage.
Level 4 - Reduces and attack speed by 30% and makes them miss every 4 attacks.Has 14% chance to do 2.5 of normal damage.
Are of effect 600.
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Framework: None
Notes: A fearful skill.

Silver Veil (R)
Transforming himself into an arrow and letting his precious bow to aim,Scythorn pulls all units in his way into an area and then explodes to reform himself.Channels for 1 second.
Level 1 - 2x direct damage to the target.Pulls all units that come in his way at his final target and then explodes dealing 200 damage in 400 AoE.
Level 2 - 2.5x direct damage to the target.Pulls all units that come in his way at his final target and then explodes dealing 300 damage in 500 AoE.
Level 3 - 3x direct damage to the target.Pulls all units that come in his way at his final target and then explodes dealing 400 damage in 600 AoE.
Mana Cost: 200/450/600
Cooldown: 60
Framework: A silver arrow like Mirana's.The whole arrow is Silver.It moves with 522.Techies' big suicide for the explosion.
Notes: A finisher.

This is a hero is on approval i would like to ask thumbs up or down?

Under the burning skies,
Under the metal rain,
His soul blindly shies,
Seeking revenge in one's name.
Do not feed him with your fear,
Do not stand in his way,
Silent your prayers in real,
Or rot bleeding through Silver Veil.

Just a poet as Sherek'thalu's.And a new ultimate.
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Ghost


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Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 11:02 pm

man sylvanas go it bad.
betrayed by traxex AND this guy
she could still take you down.

Frost Shot)
a simple slow/armor reduction spell. more similar to tidehunters skill than traxex.

Quicksilver)
much like flesh heap with an IAS instead of spell resistance

Scy Eye)
like a weaker version of blood seekers skill

Silver Veil)
its big but not every the top as when it comes down to it
300 knockback with the bleed is only 300 damage
4x crit every 60 seconds is able to be handled
and then there is a 300 damage to all units nearby.
so really this is just a weakish finisher.
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Shimrra_3


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Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 1:42 pm

Everything is really unbalanced. Just look at these.
For example, the Frost Shot is long ranged, high damage, has a slow and armor loss, and has bogus cooldown.
Then theres passive Frenzy without the damage increased (yes I know its 40%) add Agi Flesh Heap.
Then theres micro Stygwyr's Thrist plus a bogus Critical Strike.
The ultimate is a really big Spectal Dagger that might be balanced because of its mana cost and casting time.
And 650 range and 320 movespeed, whoa...

Ideas good, values noo.
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Ghost


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Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:00 pm

" 2 for each hero kill.Adds 1 damage for each 4 agility. "
2 what? damage or agility?
i would suggest making it damage.
agility would add the same amount of damage but then synergise within itself.


Scy Eye is better now because it will only really be effective with the optional skadi attachment.

nerfing on the ultimate....

- Fires a shot at an enemy (2500 casting range) that his life is below 50%.The enemy takes 4x your normal attack damage is knockbacked for 300 AoE and takes a further 300 damage. 1.5 second casting time. Anyone in the way is impaled by the arrow reducing their armor by 3 and take 300 damage, they are carried by the arrow to the target. When casted the target enemy is paralyzed with fear rooting it to the spot until it is hit by the arrow.

this takes out alot of the "wow this noob just combined 5 ultimates"
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XHellspawNX


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Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:10 pm

LOL i didnt say all these things Ghost and ill make the changes but dont be so harsh....im new at making heros and i need some xp.
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Ghost


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Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:15 pm

harsh is just how i am.
thats just what people will think if they see (especially with the notes)
"Bara's knockback,Rexxar's effect,Motred's damage,Bloodseeker's bleed."
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Shimrra_3


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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 2:31 am

Totally balanced ultimate via cooldown, the Frost Shot still isn't particularly balanced even with 16 sec cooldown vs 10, Scy Eye remains unchanged and is as imba and annoying as before, still need to lower the range to 600 (the typical maximum) or lower still, possibly lower the movespeed.
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XHellspawNX


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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 11:59 am

OK now?
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XHellspawNX


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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 12:02 pm

OK now?
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Ghost


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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 12:17 am

ignore shimrra_3

Level 4 - Gains true sight of enemies around him in 1000 AoE that their life is below 50%.Has 20% chance to do 2.5 of normal damage.

truesight of low hp enemies...
2.5 critical strike

blood seeker get +44% to MOVESPEED (or something similar, i don't really want to look it up), that is tight.
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cougarofhellfq


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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 8:33 am

gets heaps of mana regen then spam frost shot from the trees hehehehhe

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XHellspawNX


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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 12:23 pm

eeeeeee.......frost shot can not be fired through trees just the ulty oh and i think that i will change him.
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XHellspawNX


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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 1:33 pm

And here it is.Im back in action after a long vaccation hope u like'im now
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Ghost


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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 12:15 am

i still think that instead of knocking units out of the way, the ultimate should pick them up and take them for the ride.

(original idea courtesy of Ghost, I retain all rights to using a similar effect at a later date ^_^)

on the other hand feel free to use it
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Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 11:00 am

nice idea.....i will remake his whole ulty
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