I might become a writer (for a living) not related to dota

Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:44 pm

ty ty atm i am writing smaller stories and am going to send them to mags n stuff!

bigger stuff once im better at writing!
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Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 12:45 am

what's your target audience? I can only see 5th graders reading this... The characters are too flat and two-dimenisional/cliche. The pacing is fast but the devil lies in the details. To make it worth while, you got to emerge the reader in the story. Anyway you need to develope the setting and characters more. But I'm not going to deny it's an interesting read.

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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:58 pm

yeah i think it will be for the 5 6 7 grade readers.

but i do need to work on the depth of it more. ty.
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:51 am

I might advice to you as a poet and a ink ranger... Focus your fields of interest... then write about it...
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:44 pm

I like the story idea, but the style of writing seems to me to be a bit, almost juvenile? This would do well as a "short" story, or a stand alone book for ages 10-14 IMO. If you've ever read LotR, or the Wheel of Time series (Robert Jordan); then you may have noticed how they have multiple plot lines at the same time, and bounce you back and forth between them. This not only increases suspense, but it also allows you to spin a better, longer tale, and gives multiple perspectives on the world, instead of tunneling in one one or two characters and their journey.

Other than that, good writing!
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