STORY COMPETITION
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Total Votes: 20
Vote for your favourite, and I mean YOUR favourite.
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Lemonteas story about Axe 10% [ 2 ]
Bardmans story about Axe 10% [ 2 ]
Razorfanes story about Sven and Syllabear 15% [ 3 ]
Flameseekers story about Traitorous Mortred 10% [ 2 ]
Burnsides Story (unamed main character) 10% [ 2 ]
Tr3nchtowns story about Nessaj 45% [ 9 ]
Lithiumpicnics story about Fuzzy 0% [ 0 ]
Let me try:
One hot night, Pudge were practicing his hooking ability. He kills every ghoul in his sight from a distance. The Ghouls wonder and at the same time frightened while they numbers decrease every minute. Until no Ghouls are left.
Then suddenly a beautiful Mage comes out. It was Rylai.
Pudge followed her and forgot that he's still rotting to digest his last prey. Pudge had more than enough that night.
Pudge Rot to Death.
The End.
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My story for his competetion(The real one, mind you):
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The undead armies, immortal as they were, advanced till the very doorsteps of the World Tree. Only a group of desperate Sentinel warriors stood between the Lich King and the World Tree. Their forces were reduced to men and elves wearing the rags of once fine clothes but they fought on, never losing hope.
A small group of rangers comprising of Leiya, her sister: Shendelzare and the finest archers in all of the sylvan forests. They were out on a mission to try and take a weak but important section of the undead down: the catapults. Their only hope was to delay, and somehow find time to rezevendous with the dwarves. They would have gone for the Lich King if only he wasn’t back in Lordaeron, the undead capital, surrounded by turrets and the elite Demon Lords.
Their task done, they were returning when they were met by a patrol force. It was dusk and the main army was asleep, nay, resting for the undead never sleep. But somehow, this little patrol group had found them and to their horror, they discovered it was led by Atropos himself! The rangers fought hard and long but they fell one by one. Finally, only Shendelzare and Leiya were remaining. Fortunately, most of the undead were also down. They would of course, be revived but for now, they had a chance of escape and they ran as fast as the wind, as fast as their legs would allow. Atropos signaled his troops to pursue, while he stood, contemplating.
The siblings were surprised but no matter, their task was done but at a heavy price. The next day, after another day of hard fighting, the siblings set out for a walk in the woods. There were quite deep into the woods when Atropos confronted them once again. Shendelzare’s face had surprise written all over but Leiya showed no emotion. Her mouth was a straight, grim line.
Shendelzare abandoned all caution and charged at Atropos but even before her knife could strike, a poison-tipped dagger hit her in the back. Her bloodstream absorbed the poison like a sponge. Shendelzare fell to the ground and felt someone pluck out the dagger. She could see Leiya standing over her. She was horrified.
Atropos spoke,” Mortred, tell her.”
Mortred obeyed,” My dear sister, you must have realized that the Sentinels have no hope so I thought it better to join the Scourge, the winners. You were a price I had to pay if I wanted to win the war. The Lich King promised me presents. And I believe he will deliver them.”
Shendelzare sank into a deep sleep, a sleep from which the chances of her waking were slim, very slim. In her sleep she dreamt of Elune and of herself. Of a conversation:
“Elune, I beg of you, give me a new form and the power to vanquish the evil inhabiting the forests we Night Elves are sworn to protect.”
“So be it. Rise, my dear Shendelzare Silkwood and fulfill your mission before you can join the beloved rangers you lost yesterday.”
“I shall fulfill what you wish of me.” And with that, she rose from the dead. Atropos and Mortred were positively awed and yet afraid. Shendelzare was a pure spirit of energy, jet black.
Testing, her new powers, she fired a blot of pure energy at Leiya. It knocked Leiya back and stunned her. Silkwood charged at Leiya and every punch, every hit sent resounding energy into the surroundings. The Sentinels found the energy refreshing but for the undead, all they could do was flee. Flee from the battlefield. Mortred was knocked unconscious and very soon Atropos joined her. Not wishing to kill them in cold blood, she disappeared from that place to the Sentinel encampments. Elune spoke to her as she went: Keep your powers for you shall need them to annihilate the Scourge once and for all. That is your mission Lead the Sentinels wisely!
MORAL:DO NOT BITE THE UNDERLINGS FOR WHEN THEY RISE, THERE WILL BE HELL TO PAY.
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P.S:i will make the awrds thing.
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After the era of Thrall and Grom, Grom's son Axe was Durotar's Warchief and greatest warrior. One day he came across a pauper's son named Yurnero and they became friends.
Yurnero would watch Axe train and ask questions, until Axe took Yurnero in and trained him in the ways of the Counter Helix.
Yurnero grew strong but was more agile than Axe, and Axe was threatened by this new blood, as he was growing older and more paranoid, as kings do.
Yurnero was banished and with his heart broken by his mentor, he devised a new technique based on what Axe taught him, called Omnislash. It turned into a devastating style over time, and when the time was right, Yurnero returned to Durotar and challenged his former teacher.
Their battle was intense and it raged for days.
They found their styles cancelled each other out and the battle seemed to be going nowhere, so they decided that their ways would part as equals, and to this day they meet on the DotA battlefield, with respect for each other, but with the inherent Orcish desire for victory always at the fore of their minds.
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@ killmore.
obviously came up with within minutes, but still pretty good. im assuming the moral is something like...
'Fleshy Pleasures shall be the Death of you' which just so happens to be a verse from the bible XD.
but your story is TOO short.
@ Flameseeker.
Awesome story, and i like how you made it kinda, how WC3 would be if it had DotA heros.
@ Mortal Tree.
Too short, too bland and no moral.
oh yes, this isnt a requirement, just a recommendation; conversation makes stories that much better.
congrats to flameseeker and razorfane, your stories are accepted into the Poll. (which shall be up in...24 days)
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thanks. I am a natural.
I mean it. Often, i dont have to think for stories, they come in a flash of inspiration. For this competetion, =did u read the first story i wrote? That isnt for the competetion though. I thought for a long time and got many stories for this competetion and then, in an instant, in school, i got the idea for the story i posted._________________
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@ flameseeker
LOL...Leiya XD... how come she became Shendelzare's sister? i still prefer it to be known as mortred's previous name
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whoa can u email me one i could use it in school projects
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i WOULD write a story...but im too bored and the whole purpose of this comp is so i have new reading material!
that and so we can see the best authors on DS
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I could write a story if I had any time or inspiration. I think playing copious amounts of DotA is more important usually hehehe. flameseeker's story owns.
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@ AlbatrossX: I believe all the Night Elves are related. They refer to each other as sister. Duh. I just made the bond a little stronger for a dramatic effect.
And thanks guys for praising my story. Its good to get complimented.
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Part 1
"I got no Plan B, I never had."
Those are the words from the Lich King. Words of confidence and arrogance. He's always sure of his plans, he never doubt himself. For him, even a small doubt on his plans would consider him weak. Before any battle starts, he's sure of the ending. Victory!
For him a war is just some sort of a stage play. He got actors and he's the Director. He doesn't care even taking up his Allies life. He can psych up every creature to believe in him. To believe on his cause. He makes everyone realizes that each death is part of the Victory.
“Victory is painful but the fruits of it is sweeter than anything.”
"I don't fear defeat because I know I'll never experience one."
Flashback, a war from 30 years ago.
"This land is Yours! Why do you have to sweat for them?", the Lich King.
"They give us what we need, they make justice, they make us live the Life that we want, why should we complain?", one farmer said.
"But you don't get what's right for you, you should have more than of this, You can be the Lord of your own Land!", the Lich King.
"Use your mind, you can only have that if you follow me, I'm your friend, I'll help you.", the Lich King with fake tears in his eyes.
"What about the tears in your eyes?", one of the farmer.
"The only reason why I lived died in their own hands, I could never forgive them, if i can put justice on her death, I could die the moment it happens!", the Lich King.
"Me too, my Wife, they have taken her, they make me believe that sacrificing her would make the Plague stop, but she ends up being a Toy of the High ones.", from an accomplice which the Lich King uses his power to possess his mind.
"Is that so?", the Elders now talk.
"They make us believe that they want us good, they just want everything we have.", Elder.
"Enough of this, now I can say that we have reasons to take what should we have. Give justice to every injustice that they've done, I'm your friend and together we can make this possible!", the Lich King.
"We believe in you!"
They gathered all man from their Tribe. All those who has capability to raise a sword. Some of them doesn't even have held a sword before. They believe in all the Devil's world. The same thing happens in all other Tribes.
What all these Tribesmen don't know. They're talking to the Lich King himself. They're betrayed by the one they call Friend. Everyone of them was killed at the War. A war that they believed would make their life in justice. The Lich King once again succeeded.
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Sorry for the Wrong Grammars, if there is.
Please tell me what you think of this, if I got nice feedbacks, I'll continue this.
If you find it good enough, please suggest me a Title.
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its supposed to be a short story.not a long story with continuations.
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Then, that's it.
I will no longer add anything.
So, is it good enough?
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name, The Arrogance of the Lich King
and the moral; If its too good to be true...
and i find this particularly bit ironic;
Sorry for the Wrong Grammars, if there is.
aside from those details, great story.
and judging from the leap of quality between your 1st and 2nd stories, im sure you could make an excellent story (if you could be stuffed).
The Arrogance of the Lich King (if you will call it that) is accepted into the polls until further notice, (e.g. you submit a better story or i am swarmed by brilliant stories [neither of which is likely])
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i can awarm u with excellent stories...if u want to be.
. I got a whole lot of excellent story ideas in here(reference to my brain). So , thequestion is:
YOU WANNA GET SWARMED??????
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