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Flameseekers story about Traitorous Mortred 10% [ 2 ]


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Bardmans story about Axe 10% [ 2 ]


Tr3nchtowns story about Nessaj 45% [ 9 ]


Burnsides Story (unamed main character) 10% [ 2 ]


Razorfanes story about Sven and Syllabear 15% [ 3 ]


Lemonteas story about Axe 10% [ 2 ]

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 12:45 pm

post as a new thread, and im sure none of us will help you write a story, cause thats CHEATING

short of a real cash bribe, im sorry but i cant help you

ok i lied im not sorry
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 3:38 am

Do you mean i tried to squeeze too much depth in so it looks all muddled up because it has 3 different connections to depth in a single paragraph so that i could fit it into a short story. And hence it felt like it was all over the place? I agree with that my story did that, that makes sense. I don't see why depth needs a slow build up though =/


Also guy that's asking for help. You're stoopid. If you're doing a free writing exercise which is the only category that these stories will make it into for a school english exercise then you're in like grade 7. You can't fail English in grade 7... Even if you can fail English, that means you'll be in grade 9 or 10 (in which case i doubt that you'd have a creative writing exercise) then the teachers will be smart enough to realise that it's plagiarized because it's obvious when some thing's plagiarized.
However if you want to give it a shot go ahead and copy my story (it's not very good anyways)
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 4:16 am

its not that i dont want to help, but if we just let him copy, then that means he will lack the story writing skills for 8-11 soo... if he copies he better learn how to write a goddamn story
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:37 am

you can copy my story bout the time-travelling elf. I wouldnt mind if u did but you teachers might ...... :S
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Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:27 pm

i am leaving for 5 days so dont expect any new stories to be read or browsed by me, until....sunday.
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 12:40 am

woo i think i just crashed kaos very rich necrolyte (that crap guide every1 is flaming) by posting about 10k smilies :P.

'oops' lol
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:21 am

LoL!
Hey don't you leave until sunday?
Anyway, when will the story comp. closed? I want to join but I still have exam until next week.
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:28 am

Oops, internal error!
War_Wrecker, you're really a crashmaker! RoFL.....
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 10:59 am

Bard Man will have to remember that for later, dude.
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 12:31 pm

Here's my 2cents here's hoping it'll get approved
EDIT:As Bard Man says, it's not Axe's original Dota Allstars story, I came up with it.

-----Hatred-----
Once,a long time before the Sentinel vs Scourge war, there was an orc. His name was Morg Hellscream. Son of the legendary orc Grom Hellscream himself, Morg was gifted with his father's ability with the blade. What he did not have was, his battle lust. Morg preferred to live in peaceful solitude should there be a war in his village.

During a Night Elf raid on Morg's village, he was ransacked clean, all his belongings stripped. The Night Elves tried to intimidate him to "behave like his father", seeing if there really is any similarities between Morg and his father. Nothing they did succeeded, until his loved one was tortured to death in front of him. His pale-green skin and black eyes burned up. His skin was turning a shade of crimson red and an axe materialised. The Night elves realised that Morg did have his father's blood, but it was a faint trace of that and more of the chaos-orc. The red-skinned, invader orcs that was summoned by the necromancer himself.

By the next morning, thousands of bodies, and whatever's left of the nightelves were slaughtered mindlessly. Morg did not have a scratch of him, the blood of the dead seemed to heal his wounds. Apparently his peaceful trait was due to the inactivity of the blood in his body, and once boiled, it was like that permanently. Slaughtering villages of humans and night elves one after another, Morg went by the alias of "Axe", taking in consideration his gigantic axe that can kill tens in a fell swoop. No one remembered his real name, no one but the Lich King,who had been watching him.

"You are bound to my service forever, remember not your hereditary,remember not your feelings,remember not your name. Now you are Mogul Khan,the Axe, and you are mine."

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Moral(Edited)-Dont piss off descendants of chaos orcs ^^
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:54 am

nice one. I am sure it will be aprroved. A strong contender for the competetion.
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 1:13 pm

tyty. Any other comments? If not then here's wishing all budding writers in this forum of ours to write here and express thyself ^^
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 11:20 am

It doesn't go in line with Moghul Khan's true back story, but it's still pretty good. Nice job.
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 2:01 am

its all right, and its on the list. like the whole darkside crap. 'anger leads to hate, hate leads to suffering' blah blah blah crap.

i see a better moral.

dont underestimate your opponents. or, if you play with fire, expect to get burnt.
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 2:27 pm

HAHAHAHAHHAHA! Nice moral.HAHAHA
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