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Posted on Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:06 pm

It was sunrise and everything seems to be fine the scourge havent made a move the whole night. Never the less, Rooftrellen was worried about an unknown cause.
Everyone woked up when Zeus called the sentinels for a morning meeting. He came up with a strategy to break in throught the scourge's base. The invasion would start at noon and by dusk the scourge would be defeated. Zeus explained "Furion will called upon the nature forces to keep the middle entrance busy and Chen will persue some Styrs to fight on the lower entrance. After the scourge moves to protect their entrace we break in throught the upper entrance. Furion and Chen will retreave and join us. At last Rooftrenllen would overgrowth them leading us the opportunity to invade."
It was noon and the sentinels where in their places Furion and Chen began attacking the middle and lower entrance. But for their surprise the scourge were already waiting there, on the middle entrance was Dirge and his zombies army that managed to destroy the treants in no matter of seconds and on the lower entrance was Azgalor and with his pit of malice and his firestorm ready to destroy the styrs. Furion then teleported to Zeus and said "The scourge knew our plan and manage to defeat me and Chen very fast this is not normal for their intelligence..."
Zeus replied "No we just underestimated them, we must come up with another plan."
Furion and Chen then complained "We are sure that Azgalor and Dirge were really prepaired and they covered all of our moved very well."
Approching from the forest came Rooftrellen and said "It's not a coincidence that Azgalor and Dirge were their but them prepaired and ready for our attack makes me wonder... Do we have a rat in the Sentinels??"
Zeus then asked Gondar the one who was in duty at night "Did you see anyone go out last night??"
Gondar replied "no i did not."
"You sure?"
"Yes, well...You know that Slithice and Yurnero always go to the river at midnight... and Mirana goes just a little bit far from the middle entrace to praice Elune. They even asked you to do so.."
"I am aware of that, but I mean has someone gone out with no purpose outside resently??"
"Not really... why? you think there is a rat among us??"
"yes you are right"
"Well I will be more alert and do you have someone in mind??"
"Not sure yet, but inform me of anyone that goes out and in of the base."
"Sure sir"
Zeus then went over Slithice's camp, were he found her and Yurnero having some a private moment on the wild. He then interupted and said "ehemm.. would it be possible if you guys stopped for a second?? I have some questions to do."
Slithice and Yurnero then stopped and got embarrassed "Well sure sir, Zeus, but you might want to wait outside the next time you come into our camp..."
"I will keep that in mind"
"So was is it?" asked Yurnero.
"Well I think there is a rat among us and I was wondering if you guys saw anyone cross the river last night" answered Zeus.
"We saw a weird shadow, we followed it and we only saw...nothing to be exact" replied Slithice.
"Could it be Mortred?"wondered Zeus.
"The shadow wasnt Mortred, it could not be her, it looked bigger and it seems like Darchrow, but im not sure" added Yurnero
"Well that is a beginning at least. I never liked him a bit anyways, thanks you may continue with your "work"" those were Zeus last word and left Slithice's camp.
Meanwhile Darchrows conversions had heard and rushed to him to give the news. Darchrow knew he would be in trouble so he send his conversion to tell Kel'thuzad so they would start the scourge invasion. Rooftrellen then saw what happened and then overgrowth him to a cage.
The sun rose down, it was dusk and the Scourge were outside prepaired to fight, Gondar rushed to Zeus but meepo earthbind him. Then the invasion started when Kel'thuzad said "Here we are to end the world tree and to slave the Sentinels!" After he said those words Demnok called for the rain of chaos, the golem, Krobelus used exorcism, Crixalis start channeling epicenter and the others were already attacking the sentinel base. Zeus then called for all the sentinels to protect the base. Slithice sang to sleep the scourge then Raigor used echo slam, Nortrom gobal silenced, Mangix primal splitted, omniknight called for the guardian angel, and Zeus thundergod's wrathed and the scourged got weaken but it wasnt enough. Both the sentinels and the scourge were half dead and all their spell were in "cooldown."
The scourge retreated to the upper side of the battle field so if they had to run they had their gateway to home behind. But in that moment when the scourge decided to run Raigor fissured the path, Chen called for the hand of GOD and Zeus thundergod's wrathed again and the scourged died. Then Zeus shouted "Gather strenght for tonight we will defeat the King Lich!!"
Furion then teleported to the scourge entrance where the King Lich stood alone and the rest of the sentinel travel booted to Furion!!!
Finally forty-three sentinels were attacking the King Lich and the Kind Lich falled. Peace was restored to the world and the world tree was safe and everyone under the King Lich's influence was free. And so that was how the Sentinel defeated the Scourge and they lived happily ever after (lol just jokking the game ended).

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Posted on Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:41 pm

Flameseeker
(being the son of Magina and TerrorBlade-they were gay)


LOL
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Posted on Fri Jan 25, 2008 1:06 am

sry 4got the moral

keep your friend close and your enemy closer - you never know then enexpected is going to happen.
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Posted on Fri Jan 25, 2008 2:42 am

w t f?

nope, fail.
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Posted on Fri Jan 25, 2008 3:06 pm

Agreed. phail.
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Posted on Fri Jan 25, 2008 4:18 pm

double agreed. PHAILED. and i dont quite get magina adn terror being gay. you mean in reference to my 1st story( bout the time traveeling elf)?
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Posted on Sat Jan 26, 2008 8:42 am

You guys are so cruel, you don't say fail to a guy that's barely known the community and spent half an hour of their life writing something. You say that it was an okay attempt but I'm not going to put it through because.....
Otherwise it ruin's someone's confidence...
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Posted on Sat Jan 26, 2008 9:07 am

aaaa. thats the catch. i didnt say fail. i said phail. i agree. that really discourages ppl. It was a fine attempt thouhg but it wont go through because it isnt exactly Tolkien level and so ppl wont vote much for it and so, those 1 or 2 who do vote for it will be reducing the chances of a real person winning.
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God Of Chaos..

Posted on Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:50 am

God of Chaos

I am Nessaj, I live to bring forth destruction; I am the God of Chaos.

I was once a human, I once had a name, a name so simple that I cursed the people who named me. For I won’t be known as a common man, and now, I can’t even be called a man anymore. There once existed a village of peace, Restoria, and that was my home. I lived a decade of peace, now knowing that such peace can’t always exist, that peace only existed in one’s mind. One day, an oracle of the village predicted havoc and destruction of the village in the near future. They wondered how could that happen when this village existed for so many decades and not once has there been chaos or destruction brought upon it. A villager spoke “How can that be, when our village is at the center of the valley where darkness can not enter. The valley gates have always withstood foes of immense heights.”
I told them we should prepare, we should make a stand, that we should’ve called for help. They just shoved me aside, and went on their merry life. I hated the villagers, they hated me for I was different, I always argued with them, and the troubles came on a daily basis. I got cursed for it, I got beaten because of it. I told them they were too weak to understand. I told them that there is nothing that could save us. Days turned to weeks, and weeks turned into months, still there was no destruction, the oracle got threatened because what he told was lies. I was made fun of, that I was stupid, I was insane. Months of torture, hours of torment, my mind couldn’t bear any longer, I realized there’s only one way to prove them wrong.
I armed myself with a torch soaked in inflammable liquid, and a mace. I covered my face with a mask, to avoid revealing the smile on my face. My ears plugged to avoid the noise, the screams. That night of nights, I rode a steed, and burnt the village. With my mace, I spilled blood all over the earth, no life survived. No one had the strength to challenge, for I was destined to bring forth havoc. I was no longer a man; I’m a devil in disguise. That night I found peace, no one will ever argue with me again. No one will even dare go against me. My eyes became fire itself and swallowed Restoria. The oracle wasn't lying, its just he failed to predict that I was the culprit, i was the threat, i am chaos itself.
I left the burning land to flee in the mountains, and killed anyone who dares to even get a glimpse of me. Now I belong to no one, I came from nowhere. I exists as chaos spreads.

I am Nessaj, I live to bring forth destruction; I am the God of Chaos. "I am a sinner but there's no other God to judge me but me."


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Posted on Sat Jan 26, 2008 12:29 pm

MORAL?

Still AWSM STORY! The thing is, in the third last line, it should be 'exist', not 'exists'. Still. Mighty good story. And if this isnt in the comp, war wrecker wont live to see nother day.


The moral can be: Do not hate anybody, for if they begin to hate you, you had it.

Or it can be: Do not let presumable mad men near fire and maces and sticks.
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Posted on Sat Jan 26, 2008 2:30 pm

moral : there is a thin line between oblivion and bliss.

FYI i wasnt trying to be mean, if i was mean i would have been swearing and flaming. (look for stories of similar quality posted by people who werent new, they got flamed....)
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Posted on Tue Jan 29, 2008 7:59 am

Bloody hell, that's a good story. If bard Man can't vote for himself, he'll be voting for that!
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Posted on Tue Jan 29, 2008 10:10 am

Even if i could vote for myself, i would vote for that story. It wins hands down.
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Posted on Tue Jan 29, 2008 11:30 am

The Transformation

'They aren't here'-Aiushtha said.'What?'- whispered Trellen in disbelief. He could not believe It. His parents- they were gone, maybe forever. He heard a scream that echoed through his mind. 'There!-The woods!'- he yelled. Aiushtha followed Trellen as they gone deeply in the woods. They had a strange feeling,
like something evil was there- very evil and It was looking at them. Thousands of eyes. Thousands of little eyes in the darkness, following their each step, waiting for every little mistake. And it happened. The rock was here, still small but formidable. Trellen fell over it. Thousands of spears were hurled from the darkness. They were surounded. Then a small satyr came from the darkness. You could see he was older than the others, but not bigger than a satyr kid. 'Greetings'- He said. 'That is Rikimaru'- Aiushtha whispered her eyes wide opened in fear. 'Yes Aiushtha. It is me'- rikimaru said and in an blink of an eye, he was on her back, backstabbing her. Aiushtha cried for help. She didn't have power. Not here, without light, she couldn't heal herself. 'NOOOO'- Trellen yelled and fell unconscious. Next time he woke up, a beutiful fairy covered in branches and leaves was floating in the air. 'Welcome my friend'- She whispered. Her voice had bright melody, and she was almost singing. 'Do You want to save your parents, mortal?'- She asked Trellen. 'Yes, just grant me some power to save them, and i will get you whatever you wish'- Trellen said in despair. 'All right then. I want You. If i grant you power, you won't be able to talk, and
we will change your name, and you will have to stay in forest'- the fairy said and winked. 'Whatever, just give me power'- Trellen begged and fell asleep immediately. As he woke up, he was different. He was covered in branches, wines and flowers. His size was tremendous, and he felt power.
He went to Rikimaru's lair. He saw there Aiushtha and his parents laying on the floor. Rikimaru came out in front of his eyes and said:'Go away. Who are you? Don't make me kill you'. 'I am Trellen. ROOFTRELLEN!'- Rooftrellen yelled and overgrowthed rikimaru. He had Radiance in his right hand, and Hyperstone in his left hand. Three hits were enough. rikimaru felt down, bleeding, and the roots pulled him inside the ground and he dissapeared. Rooftrellen freed Aiushtha and his parents. They started crying as they saw what their son grew into. 'Run'- Rooftrellen said, and granted them all with some sort of wooden armor. I cannot hold them all now. 'But You? Trellen we were supposed to get married'- said Aiushtha with tear in her eye. 'I am sorry. I have to do what my destiny says. You will find a better husband'- Rooftrellen said, his eyes glowing. Rooftrellen gone into forest, quickly dissapearing in the woods. The nature was his home now.

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I hope u liked it

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Posted on Tue Jan 29, 2008 11:46 am

errrrrrrp...

its kinda good but i personally didnt like it, waiting on opinion of others.

because i think its unfair to reject it purely because i dont like it.
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