The Great Heist

The Great Heist

Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:28 pm

The Great Heist
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Magina entered the dark room, only a candle on the table to light up the darkness. Soon later, the gang came rushing in, knowing that they were late. Ezalor, Yurnero, Nortrom and Chen all sat down, waiting for the news.

"Gentlemen, as the leader of the Sentinal Guild, I am planning a heist. Since we have been losing vital goods and we are losing the war, we must steal. It's our only hope." Magina said.
"No one in this room is willing steal, the ancients will betray us and plus... we might get killed." Chen confirmed.
"Nevermind you, I think Magina's idea is great, I am going to help whoever goes out to "do" the heist" Nortrom butted in.
"Great then, but who's going to do it?"
"Riki...maru.."
"Rikimaru... That imbecile, of all he knows is lies, mis-use of his talent and that other satyr stuff.. He'll never be good for the job." Ezalor replied.
"No, we have no time to consider anyone else, call Rikimaru in."

The next evening, the stealth assasin and the silencer ran up quietly to the great fort of the scourge. They're only problem to enter was... Pudge. Yes, he was there standing up there as a bodyguard, waiting for anything to come.
"We have to fight"
"I know" Came whispers in the bushes.
Pudge sensed something, but didn't really care because he was so focused on eating his bunny.

They charged swiftly at Pudge. Nortrom silenced the monster, allowing both of them to attack. After a short while, Pudge was conscious again, he started swinging mighty blows to Rikimaru, severely damaging his health. After a while, Rikimaru went running back towards the forest, but a meat hook pulled him back all the way to Pudge. He was dying. He left a smokescreen before he left the world. Pudge was covered in the mist and could not see.

"Chaaarge!!!" A surprising voice from Magina came as the whole gang ran into the building. Pudge was attacking the air softly.
"How cute" said Yurnero.

While the gang was in the building, Nortrom, still outside bearing Rikimaru's last words.

"I ... want... you to..."
"What! Tell me!!!"
"Uggh..."
"Rikimaru!!"

Nortrom came rushing in, as the gang was sticking their heads out the corner of a wall, listening closely to the Scourge.

"Rikimaru is dead"
"Shhh!" Ezalor said.
"Pour soul, we should have never dragged him into this."

In a far distance, they could hear the words of Darkterror, Lesharc, Kel'Thuzad and Medusa.

"After stealing those goods from those filthy sentinal people, we're rich!" Medusa slithered.
"Lesharc, pass me that book you were reading" Darkterror asked. The tormented soul gave him a sort of a tome.
"All we need to do now, is to defeat the world tree"

Behind the wall, the gang had gasped and they rumbled into a gallant fight. Ezalor was against Lesharc, Silencer was against Medusa and Magina was against Darkterror. The battle was epic.

"Hahaha, and you leave me no one to fight? You think i'm weak? I will show you!" The lich king said.
He started going 2 on 1, unfairly winning the battle.

After a while, something came from the sky, disrupting the battle. It was Rikimaru.

"You might be wondering, but I have revived. I don't know how though, but don't ask me. Now i'm ready to fight" Rikimaru declared.
"Ohh jeez.."

He came from the sky, backstabbing the lich king, smokescreening and doing everything he could to kill him. Chen used hand of god, allowing everyone to take more risks. Rikimaru finally killed him with a slash of his blade.
It was unbeleiveable. Soon after, when the gang had won their fight, Pudge came running in. The effect of smokescreen wasn't there anymore, and oh yes he was mad.
The gang assaulted the butcher, but Rikimaru stopped them.

"Stop, it's my fight now, I have proven my eligability and I am honored to fight Pudge. It was me and Nortrom, that's it."

Rikimaru never acted like this before, he used to be a wild immature satyr. He now was acting like a leader.

Before you knew it, he was dead again.

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Wait for Chap 2 .. lol
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Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:44 pm

Good story lol...

Rikimaru died again lmao!

Good luck on your next chapter.
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 12:18 pm

lol
not too descriptive. And a bit iiotic. But the lastr line is funny. Before u know it Rikimaru was dead again!
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 1:04 pm

ahahhaha!

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