Cinder - The LavaShark

Cinder - The LavaShark

Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:00 pm

These species of Lava Sharks are not like the sharks we know of that are in the sea. They live far away in their volcanic homes, swimming through the magma easily. Their scales on their bodies can withstand so much heat that they can perfectly live in the hot lava. Not often do they come out of their inhabitantial area, but one of them, Cinder has come out, ready to defeat the sentinal! Can the side of the good withstand burning jaws, flamy currents, a simple birth defect that will tolerate the performance of his damage and scorching volacanoes?

Cinder - The LavaShark
Primary: STR
STR: 22 + 2.5 | AGI: 17 + 1.5 | INT: 16 + 1.5
HP: 418| Regen: 0.91
MP: 208| Regen: 0.69
Damage: 44 - 57 | Attack speed: 1.35
Movement Speed: 290 | Armor: 3

SKILLS

Burning Bite (B)

Cinder bites the target and causing some burns until the enemy target perishes, lasting 5 seconds.

Level 1 - 80 damage, 5 dps and 20% movement speed reduction.
Level 2 - 100 damage, 10 dps and 30% movement speed reduction.
Level 3 - 120 damage, 15 dps and 40% movement speed
reduction.
Level 4 - 160 damage, 20 dps and 50% movement speed reduction.

Mana Cost: 80/85/90/95
Cooldown: 35 seconds.
Active

Flaming Current (F)

(This spell is very hard to understand... so if you don't understand ... .. .. .. pie.)

When Cinder is running, his current starts to build. He then unleashes flames on a group.

Level 1 - Each 1000 AoE he runs, he gets 1 buff. Buffs will stack up to 3 times. Each buff, damages up to 50 damage in an AoE of 700.
Level 2 - Each 900 AoE he runs, he gets 1 buff. Buffs will stack up to 4 times. Each buff, damages up to 60 damage in an AoE of 750.
Level 3 - Each 800 AoE he runs, he gets 1 buff. Buffs will stack up to 5 times. Each buff, damages up to 70 damage in an AoE of 800.
Level 4 - Each 700 AoE he runs, he gets 1 buff. Buffs will stack up to 6 times. Each buff, damages up to 80 damage in an AoE of 850.

Mana Cost: 160/170/180/200
Cooldown: 50 seconds.
Passive with no buffs, but active with buffs.

Birth Defect (D)

Cinder has long been made fun of at home, because of his birth defect. Cindershark has three tails, which making him stronger, but more unique in the world.

Level 1 - 5% of the time, Cinder smacks the opponent with his three tails, dealing damage that is X3 of the original damage.
Level 2 - 10% of the time, Cinder smacks the opponent with his three tails, dealing damage that is X3.2 of the original damage.
Level 3 - 15% of the time, Cinder smacks the opponent with his three tails, dealing damage that is X3.4 of the original damage.
Level 4 - 20% of the time, Cinder smacks the opponent with his three tails, dealing damage that is X3.6 of the original damage.

Manacost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Passive


Volcanic Eruption (E)

Cinder creates a huge volcano consisting of up to 500 AoE, (cannot cast into units) erupting and spitting out fire. Lasts 5 seconds.

Level 1 - Hurls fireballs in an AoE of 700, hitting everyone, 40 dps.
Level 2 - Hurls fireballs in an AoE of 700, hitting everyone, 100 dps.
Level 3 - Hurls fireballs in an AoE of 700, hitting everyone, 175 dps.

Mana Cost: 350/450/550
Cooldown: 120 seconds.
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 5:51 pm

Buff STR gain a bit, make it 3.0-3.5
Lower the cooldown of the skills.
Anyway, its a good hero.
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 6:42 pm

i like it but somewhat IMBA as i learnt to put it from the guys around here
but its realy good anyways i think make volcano cast time or channeling eh?
and way too much crit for birth defect and also its a birth defect and it gets you more dmg?lol funny but still very very i like
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whoa...

Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:51 am

seems like making wacko animal heroes is the trend in dream heroes these days..
everyone makes their own weird hero..

now we have a lava shark, i'm not here to insult.. its just my way of speaking..

Lava Shark

1st skill is fine..

2nd skill, question, do sharks run? don't they swim? lolz.. btw, when do you exactly activate this skill? since you can't really measure AOE..

3rd skill, 3.6 x critical? on 20% chance.. you know, compare it to nessaj who has 3x critical for 11% chance.. or mortred who has 4x crit for 11% chance and that's her ultimate..
this is just too high for a normal skill.

Ultimate, although AOE in proportion to damage is massive. The long cooldown makes it balance..


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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 2:02 am

i'm with trenchtown...
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 6:23 pm

the MAIN thing im worried about it its imba crit.

for a NORMAL skill, its BETTER than mortred's ULTI.
based on statistical analysis, thats 3.6 x .2, equalling .72 (shark) and 4 x .15, equalling .6 (mortred), thus shark has a better crit/dmg ratio by 20%. just to make mortred's ulti EQUAL to his crit/dmg ratio, coup de grace would have to be from 15% to 18%, or from 4x to 4.8x

sorry for the nerdish analysis, but thats the truth. crit is INSANE
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