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A Tale of Terror
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 1:01 pmROYAL DEATH
It was he who killed the Human King. It was the terrorizing man who had not known anything that happened in the night the royal member died. Everyone knew it was him. Gevon has the face that is remembered throughout the country, lands and kingdoms. Unfortunately, he did not remember anything, even if he was at presence at the royal party. People wanted explanations, as they were furious to hear that their leader was to be found dead. Many people started creating myths about the issue, creating rumours that he was a criminal, an assassin, or even a rapist! Everyone hated him, they did not care about any of the emotions Gevon was feeling. The people voted to remove his face from his body. It was terrifying, but the royal court could not allow it, since they have actual proof and real evidence. Although Gevon did not remember anything, he could not even understand why he was blamed.
Other than the hatred in the previous King’s city was happening about, Gevon was a good member of the community in the outskirts of the country. He was living in a little hay shack with his lawful family. He was loved by a beautiful woman named Phoenix. After the outbreak and news of King’s death, people started to evaluate the murderer and at the same time, vote for a new king. Because of the voting, messengers were sent across the land to inform all villages about the outbreak and to give out polls to each person in the village. On the very day, as Gevon was working hard in the farm, Phoenix stood up and slapped him across the face. It was time that the messenger had told the village. Soon everyone knew, and Gevon started to see the same angry faces he saw in the city. He was forced to leave and live on his own.
MAGICAL SUMMONINGS
Back at the city, the chatter in the general areas was more intense as before. It was getting noisy and loud as the voting came to an end. It was either going to be Purist Thunderwrath, or Belamoon. Soon, there was silence, as the chieftain of the city shouted.
“All please bow, to our future king, Belamoon!” About seventy-five percent of the crowd cheered. About two seconds have passed and you could see people running and screaming for their lives. The lively human became an undead, hovering and icy Lich.
“Fools! All hail to your new King, Kel’Thuzad!” He had horrid and evil laughter. He started burning and used shadow damage to destroy the foundations of the building. Soon, the voters had realised they had done a very serious mistake, so they all joined the party for Purist. During the revel of the crowd, Purist revealed his mighty and enchanted hammer. He started swinging, but as soon as you knew it, The Lich was summoning something dark. Ultimately, Purist knew what was coming. As the shadow bolt was coming quickly at him, he used Guardian Angel at the instant as the wave of energy hit him. In a second, he was fling and crushed with his back to the wall, defeated.
“Well, now that that’s done, I can start summoning the ancestors of war, the mighty battleground of gore, the defence of the ancients!” He left the city and went to the shore that was nearby. He looked at it as if it seemed as a big enough place to summon the area. He started saying mystical incantations as he was summoning the battlefield.
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Keep going sounds interesting. U made urself space for movement later on. Next chapter pls.
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A New, Friendly, Race.
Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 9:18 amA New, Friendly, Race.
He seeked for help, as he moved on walking side by the river. Gevon looked to his left, noticing that the murlocs had started their establishment near the bank. Their yellow and orange houses were hanging out in the open air, seemingly to be left dropped down into the water. In a split second, a swift murloc came running in at lightning speed. The murloc screamed his usual growl and started swinging his small cutlass at him. Gevon fought back, unarmed, getting all these painful wounds. He gave the viscous murloc a big punch to the face, as it screamed in agony and ran back to the water.
It was dark and Gevon had been lying there for the whole day in a smelly aroma. The blood evaporated right beside him. He was laying down looking at the twilight sky. He could hear the fearsome growls of the wolves in the forest. Soon, as expected, some of the Mangy Wolves came rushing in, about to tear up his body in a more disgusting way than vultures did to dead bodies. Suddenly, an intelligent orc came rushing by with his mighty wolf. It was the Holy knight, also known as Chen. Quickly, as noticing blood spilling from Gevon's body, he raised his hand which was purified with light, and healed Gevon. Gevon had a slight fealing of betterness inside his body. The holy knight mind-controlled the Mangy wolves and sent them to suicide at the heart of the murloc's town.
Soon after, Unfortunately Gevon wasunconscious, so there was only one thing to do. He had to walk as his wolf carried his back all the way to his mystical town, otherwise known as Ormlust.
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Orc Encampment & Mograine
Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 2:34 pmORC ENCAMPMENT
He woke up with a faint smile on his face. The person next to him, sleeping the chair was drowzing. Soon, he woke up and had a surprised look on his face.
"You have a rough week son, you'll have to rest here in our encampment... Don't worry, we're not really the horde. I can tell you later, sleep now, you need lot's of it." The orc stood up and walked out of the tent. As he opened the canvas door, he walked through as the light hit Gevon's face. It struck him as he went back in the blinds in fear. As soon as the door closed, silence and darkness was in effect. He was asleep.
The next morning, or days he had expected; well he really didn't know how many because he was in his sleep, he woke up. He stood up and yawned, he seemed to have recovered. He suddenly found the pain, the area he was itching, was covered in a bloody bandage. Gevon stood up and stepped outside and beared the light he feared a few days ago. He was in a very similar environment that the Night Elves were living in, except there was different wildlife and plantation. It was inhabited by intelligent orcs, all living the lives of the ways of the human. He was walking down the hill, following the pathway, already noticing people strangely looking at him. Of course, he was the only human in the whole community.
"Ahh, master Fette, come here" An orc with white clothing, blessed with a priest's fortitude, came up to Gevon. At first, he wasn't paying attention, for out his name wasn't Master Fette anyway. Although the thought came to him as the orc politely asked him.
"Master Fette, right this way" He pointed to a direction, clearly marking the tavern. It looked like an important place.
Gevon entered the glorious tavern, realising that this was about 40 feet deep, having a round staircase all the way down to the bottom. Eventually, he ended up sliding down the handles of the staircase with his butt, having alot of fun. As usual, the ride came to an end, and he approached the Holy Knight.
"Hello, I will introduce myself by telling you my story. I am an orc, but do not fear, as we feel no harm to humans. Our group were against the decisions of the filthy orcs. We started turning against the hordes of orcs, soon, brawls started to break out in taverns. Inside Orgrimmar, we planned out a crusade, to find a new place to settle and establish homes to our alliance. Our group all became intelligent as the crusade went on. During the long journey, a wise human gathered us. He taught us the ways of the intelligent humans. Then, I eventually turned into a Holy Knight. After this, we established in our home, Ormlust. You are probably wondering why you are wounded, why you were blamed and why you were disbanded from your human continent. Let me explain everything."
"How did you know about this?" Gevon asked in confusion.
"Well, it seems that our priests here have analyzed your wounds, body and mind. They say it is not at peace, so that must be solved. Your injury from your leg came from a poisonous murloc, that sliced some of the bone" He looked at his leg and realised again why he was limping down the hill, on his way to the tavern.
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Great! brilliant continue this
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yuernoownage wrote:
Great! brilliant continue this
Great! brilliant continue this
/of topic finish your story with yurnero
/on topic This story has potential. Pls do continue it...
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After Chen's brief historical introduction, Gevon asked,
"But still, what did I do wrong, why does everyone hate me?"
"Ahh, yes, I was hoping that question would come. Someone made you look like you killed the king..."
Gevon's face suddenly swelled with anger.
"How dare anyone do this to me? I shall kill him! Who the hell is this man?"
"I'm not sure, but someone who can make replicas"
Gevon looked down, sad. The holy knight was feeling his sadness, there was a brief pause.
"What should I do now? I have nothing left."
"Go around the village, find something interesting there".
After walking those tiring steps upstairs, he encountered a man wearing white robes with golden linings.
"Excuse me sir, do you know what I could do here?"
"Oh there's tons of things, you can take math tests, mental challenges, gamble, mind games, study--"
"I'm sorry, but I'm not that type of guy..." Gevon interrupted.
"Ah, the physical type? Humans these days... Well it's your lucky day, Saturday, the beach day. Just head down this road and follow where the ocean goes."
Gevon nodded and went to find the beach. He noticed that it was a very hot day, as his sweat poured everywhere. He found the ocean easily as he settled down in the sand. It was softer than he had thought, and it was the right tempreture. He could see little kid orcs running around, swimming and riding the incoming waves. Suddenly, a horn was blown with mighty power. It came from up, where the lifeguard was. Something was stirring up. Soon, Chen appeared.
"Sir! The prophecy is coming together!" The lifegaurd with his heart beat very high.
"And how do you know of this?"
"The Orcas, fishes, waves are all coming, at the same time as that human came. He is the prophecy!"
Gevon was listening closely. The Holy Knight looked out at sea as well as others. The lifeguard was right, the tide was rising, dolphins, fishes and orcas where swarming in.
Chen looked at Gevon, worried.
"Oh no, this can't be it"
"Hahaha... The plan is all coming together..." The Lich bursted with laughter. All his servants followed. He was on a cliff, right off the sea. Behind him, was Dark Seer, Terrorblade, Magnus and Spectre.
"Lord, there is incoming information. Our dark telescopes have found Gevon with a few orcs on a beach not far. Shall I go deal with him?" Ish'Kafel stated.
"No, you fool. Don't you understand. If you kill him, the humans will be happy. If you don't, the dark side and the humans will be against him. It's either two on one or nothing." The Lich protested.
"But my lord, why him, he's just an ordinary guy doing work in and out the cities..."
"Very true, but although he seems worthless, he is not useless. I need him for something, it is a weapon I will create." He started to grin again.
The two hurried into the library.
"What's happening!?"
Chen was flipping through multiple books.
"It's the prophecy, it's actually happening." Chen explained.
He found the book of the prophecy, turned the pages really fast until he stopped to a particular one.
"Once framed, now came, to where the water is pushed out and the summonings are in the way." Chen said.
"Wha--?"
"You, are the prophet."
A burst of confusion, joy, surprise outraged in Gevon.
"And what does the story tell?!"
"It says that you will need to train hard into a strong warrior, protect the one you love as that person will be used as a strong weapon against you. If you do not do this, the defense of the ancients will be summoned! All hell will break lose. Someone evil is summoning all this land in the middle of the ocean! Causing everything to swarm out."
There was a pause. Chen was surprised he was dealing with a much higher rank than him. Although he did seem like an ordinary person, it is he who will save azeroth.
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whoa DotaMorph, you're still active?
anyways, nice story! keep going!
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Not really, I just felt like coming back to dota
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nice

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Good Work,
Enjoyed reading this one, . .
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Keep it up!
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The Lich's frosty being was chanting this ancient language. His servants were all waiting there, looking at the site.
"Graah. Me bored.." Magnus grunted.
Kel'Thuzad didn't really care, only when he saw something emerge from the waters. His face changed completely, from boredom to happiness.
"Look, the top branch of the World Tree!" Everyone cheered.
Soon after 10 minutes of waiting, everything went silent and boring again.
"I have a request for all of you"
They all looked up at the Lich.
"Why don't you guys all use your power to pause the summoning."
"But why?" The seer asked.
"I'm going to take the next step"
"Which is..."
"Finding Gevon and to use him"
"Gevon! Tell me, is there anyone you are close to?" Chen asked quickly.
"Well, since I have been banished from the cities and the outskirts, I don't think there is anyone closer than you."
"No, no no. Before you have been abandoned"
"Hmm, my family, friends and my boss that I worked for in the city." Gevon replied.
"Are you sure there's anyone that is very close with a mark on their body!?"
"No"
"Okay, well lets pack up and leave, whoever is summoning this all might come soon"
The Holy Knight nodded as Gevon nodded back as they ran out of the Library. Chen told everyone to evacuate. The two took horses are villagers scurried out. After 3 miles of travel, Gevon stopped his horse.
"What?" Chen asked.
"Oh shit, Phoenix, my girlfriend has a mark of a red bird on her shoulder."
"It's too late to turn back now! Our only choice is to save her! She will be destroyed and she will be reborn into a red phoenix! That's the weapon! The weapon you must defeat"
The Lich was silently roaming around, finding his target, Phoenix. He was in the dark woods alone. Suddenly, a voice was heard from behind.
"You traitor! You aggravated my voters, I should of became the King! I could of stopped your summoning"
"Ahh, Purist..." The icy lich hissed.
"It's about time, let's settle this."
The Paladin came charging in, pounding his foe with his mighty hammer. Kel'Thuzad raised his bony finger and called lightning upon him. The Paladin was violently thrown backwards, skidding the ground. He got back up and healed the blood off of his stomach. He then tried a hammer upper cut to the crotch, severly disabling the Lich.
"Haha, it seems all males have one!" the Paladin laughed.
He bursted ice into the paladin. The Ice block from the sky came from the ground and rolled like a boulder.
He was down on the ground with blood smeared all over. His blonde hair was covered in dirt. The trees turned into stumps, smothered with snow.
"That was easy" The Lich walked away with an aching groin.
"I.. Am.. The GUARDING ANGEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Purist raged in a godlike frenzy. He has blue shining eyes and a blue glowing hammer. The Lich turned back but did not see anything. The Paladin jumped so high and finished the Lich off with an enormous blow down to the ground.
The Paladin lay there on the ground, over-used his energy and died. So did the Lich, under the paladin... was finally defeated.
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I re-edited this chapter... Stay tuned, There's more to come... You're all probably thinking wtf? The main evil character dies!?
SPOIIIIIIIIIIIILER!!!!
He does die but gets revived
SPOIIIIIIIIIIIILER!!!!
Sorry guys I had to put that in or else people would get cut off and not read the story anymore. Still more to come...
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nooo What are you doing....there is no room for funny in this one. Continue it with a more serious aproach
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