mistake on Visage description..

mistake on Visage description..

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:15 am

terrifying spirit created by uniting a thousand of souls of the warriors fell in the War of the Magi; Visage roams this world with never-ending thirst for souls. This restless ghost consumes the essence of the enemies he slays, and the death moan of his victims is what he enjoys the most. The weakening power of his wrath puts even the greatest warriors in misery, and the sight of sky filled with Visage and his undead minions is unimaginable. He is a nightmare in its worst, most sickening form, a true living horror, the Necro'lic.

'uniting a thousand of souls of the warriors'
This is grammatically wrong because it should be 'uniting a thousand souls of the warriors' lol!

I just kinda picked up on that and thought it was pretty funny

Any more mistakes you guys randomly found?

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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:26 am

The point?
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:51 am

HAH! JUST MORE A "OF"^^
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 12:56 am

Oh well... good grammar is always good... i guess...
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:04 am

there are a few errors for cool downs and some don't even have numbers
Mirana only has 1 set of numbers, missing 3
Illusionary orb doesn't have a mana cost
Magina's and Akasha's blinks don't have a cool down
Visage needs to have his abilities updated to 6.51
Invoke doesn't have cooldowns

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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 2:31 am

I no find other mistake

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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 2:36 am



+1
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 2:50 am

I dont know any grammatical errors and dont want to look for any but.....
the effects and cooldown of some items are not updated
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Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:42 pm

Its correct. Thousands of sth or sth ... is not wrong.
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Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:50 am

Check Mangix in hero section here.. IMO, its not "Battlemaster", its "Brewmaster", am i right? ^_^V,


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Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:15 am

its actually missing the word "that" and loose the word "the"
"created by uniting a thousand souls of warriors that fell in the War of the Magi"

but it could be

"created by uniting the thousand souls of the warriors felled in the War of the Magi"

or

"created by uniting a thousand souls of the felled warriors from the War of the Magi"

take it as you please, in the end it is irrelevant, we don't play DotA for its plot.
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Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:34 pm

>>take it as you please, in the end it is irrelevant, we don't play DotA for its plot.

well put
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 2:36 am

I do.
I read the story of every hero before I play
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 2:39 am

Oh btw Ghost
you play on Bored Aussie?
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 2:43 am

TELL ICEFROG!
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