Coltraise - Blood Phantom

Coltraise - Blood Phantom

Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:16 am

Coltraise The Blood Assailant

Coltraise was once an excellent assailant from the sentinel but he was accused of murder of Shandelzare Silkwood he was sentenced to death , The Lich King gained interest in Coltraise's abilities and He revived him as a Assailant for the scourge, seeking revenge to the sentinel, using his powers to use blood as his main weapon he has sworn to destroy the sentinel and kill whoever gets in the way.

Hero type-Hero Killer
Allegience- Scourge

Stats
Starting Hit Points (including str)- 511
Starting Mana Points (including int)- 182
Starting Armor- 4

Attack Range- Melee
Attack Speed- 1.42 (+26% IAS from starting agi)
Movespeed- 290

Attributes-
Primary Attribute- Agility

Strength- 19 (+2.0 per lvl)
Agility- 20 (+2.9 per lvl)
Mana- 14 (+ 1.6 per lvl)

Skills

Blood Saber- Coltraise cuts a part of his skin and uses it to empower his Saber. The target hit by the saber will have a bloodmark and will be slowed for the next 5 seconds.When coltraise attacks the marked unit he will gain bonus damage dealt.Only one target can be blood marked at a time
Cooldown: 25/20/15
Manacost:60/80/100/120
Duration: 10 seconds

Level 1- +5% of previous damage dealt in bonus damage (by physical attacks only), target unit will be slowed by 5%
deals 50 damage to self

Level 2- +10% of previous damage dealt in bonus damage(by physical attacks only), target unit will be slowed by 10%
deals 75 damage to self

Level 3- +15% of previous damage dealt in bonus damage (by physical attacks only), target unit will be slowed by 20%
deals 120 damage to self

Level 4- +20% of previous damage dealt in bonus damage (by physical attacks only), target unit will be slowed by 30%
deals 175 damage to self

Swift senses- anytime a unit gets a bloodmark Coltraise gains sight of the unit and gets quicker and more agile.
Cooldown:40/30/20
[Passive]

Level 1- Coltraise gains +10% attackspeed and 5% movespeed for 1 seconds , recieves +10% damage from attacks and spells

Level 2- Coltraise gains +20% attackspeed and 10% movespeed for 2 seconds , recieves +20% damage from attacks and spells

Level 3- Coltraise gains +30% attackspeed and 15% movespeed for 3 seconds , recieves +30% damage from attacks and spells

Level 4- Coltraise gains +40% attackspeed and +20% movespeed for 4 seconds , recieves +40% damage from attacks and spells

Blood Slash- Coltraise gains the ability to slash a unit blood marked dealinag 35 chaos damage in bouns

Level 1- 5% chance to deal 5 bonus chaos damage
Level 2- 10% chance to deal 15 bonus chaos damage
Level 3- 15% chance to deal 25 bonus chaos damage
Level 4- 20% chance to deal 35 bonus chaos damage

Blood Stream- Coltraise releases a stream of blood from his own veigns then shoots it to a target blood marked. Any damage dealt to Coltraise will be dealt to the unit Streamed. If the unit streamed dies during blood stream Coltraises life will be cut to 100.
Manacost:100/200/300
Cooldown:70/60/50

Level 1- Streams for 4 seconds.

Level 2- Streams for 5 seconds.

Level 3- Streams for 6 seconds.

My second hero today rate pls![/img]

I put another option to the second skill that coltraise recieves more damage from opponents if the skill activates.

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Skill build
1-Blood Saber 8-Swift Sense 15-Stats
2-Swift Sense 9-Swift Sense 16-Stats
3-Blood Saber 10-Blood Scratch 17-25-stats
4-Swift Sense 11-Blood Stream
5-Blood Saber 12-Blood Scratch
6-Blood Stream 13-Blood Scratch
7-Blood Saber 14-Blood Scratch

Item Build

S&Y
Meka
Power Threads

this is the most i could think off

Last edited by donatboy on Sat Sep 23, 2006 9:16 pm; edited 7 times in total

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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:34 am

Is blood saber damage one attack only?
Cooldowin is 15/10/5/? or ?/15/10/5

It's nice. Great counter for Denshi. Hehehe.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:36 am

Extremely intresting concept! You should adjust it such that you can only blood mark one opponent at a time! also you failed to mention the duration of the bloodmark. And i think you should weaken the first and second move a bit.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:37 am

its like the first ability of blood seeker but it should be casted on an opponent forgot to put the damage dealt to self using blood saber. cooldown is 15 for lvl 1 10 for lvl 2 5 for lvl 3 and 4

nerfed 1st skills damage bonus to 5-10-15-20, reduced slow to 5-10-20-30
split second skills attack and MS from 40-40 to 40-20
just noticed second skill is to much hehe.
You think i concentrated to much on the skill relation?

Last edited by donatboy on Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:47 am; edited 1 time in total

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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:47 am

Okay. I see, I see. The manacost is too cheap.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:50 am

finished edting manacost made it high so it wont be to imba

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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:55 am

Re: Skill relation
It's ok. A good hero has highly synergized skills.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 11:25 am

should i add an item build and a skill build for him? pls comment i want to improve

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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 11:31 am

If you want to, you can.
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 12:01 pm

ive added item and skill build pls comment
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:22 pm

Now its better! Put it in the comitte thread.
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 7:16 am

nice nice
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 9:01 am

Blood Slash- Coltraise gains the ability to slash a unit blood marked dealinag 35 chaos damage in bouns

Level 1- 5% chance to deal 5 bonus chaos damage
Level 2- 10% chance to deal 15 bonus chaos damage
Level 3- 15% chance to deal 25 bonus chaos damage
Level 4- 20% chance to deal 35 bonus chaos damage

hmm, why hasn't any1 pointed out how weak this is? 4 starters replace the word 'chaos' with 'pure', chaos dmg still gets affected by armor, so no real gain is made by it being such a dmg type. Secondly i'd prefer crits ova this any day. i mean look at the skill at lvl 1...5% chance to deal 5 extra bonus dmg?!? buff it at all lvls!!
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