Chen's Story,

Chen's Story,

Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 12:36 pm

Damn Constatine owns this section so dont expect anything as good.

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CHAPTER 1- The Awakening

Running fast , gasping for his own life as he was getting chased by a Spectre, Riding his loyal wolf running slower and slower as the presence of the Spectre gets closer, Chen saw a dark dagger thrown with great force chasing him ,he knew it he knew he was gonna die, he prayed faithfully and closed in to a garden filled with light he saw Hextar his God and kneeled in great awe, Chen asked and talked with Hextar and for a moment paused and realized he still was gonna die, he then finally asked his God "My Lord, what is my purpose in this war," Hextar answered "My Child, you have a great purpose in this war, serve your friends and allies and you shall be granted great power. Chen's Eyes flashed back to reality looking around seeing himself in his quarters. Going out slowly everyone waiting and seeing him alive rejoiced for a hero was saved. In the feast Chen wonders how he was saved and how he got their, after a brief moment Rexaar approached Chen his greatest comrade and said "Brother, you miracously lived, " Chen then asked "Miracously? What happened?" Rexaar replied " Brother, dont you know what happened? we saw you greatly wounded and a dagger stabbed behind you and you were about to get slain by a Spectre", Chen remembered what happened and reflected on how lucky he was. After the feast chen saw his Wolf beside his quarters and approched him slowly, Then a deep silent voice suddenly appeared " Why Chen * Hik* what ar you doin' here late this *Hik* night" Chen was surprised that he saw the Battle Master, Chten answered "I was going to sleep, when i saw my friend" Pandaren Replied "Friend? *hik* oh yes your Pet Dog" Chen was gonna reply but Pandaren suddenly collapsed of dizziness, Chen brought him to his quarters then finally slept.

Chapter 2 - The Discovery

Chen woke up hearing the clucks of chickens then thought that he was going to be one of the commanders of the 1st troop to charge, Preparing for the expedition he saw Pandaren getting ready for the expedition then approached " Why, Battle master what kind of sorts could have brought you here? " Pandaren replied " Im on this expedition to my friend" As he packs a dozens of Wine in his pack then the war drums started the ground trembled as Pandaren and Chen rushed to the war. As they where clearing the ghouls pandaren pulled a bottle of beer from his pack then smashed it to the necromancer, Chen then said " so thats the use of your beer" then Pandaren replied "Not really" then gulps a bottle of beer in a split second. Chen and Pandaren were exhausted and were about to camp as Pandaren passed a bottle of beer to Chen " i'll pass" Pandaren then said "what a waste of good beer" then drinks the bottle of wine he passed to Chen, they were about to rest but Chen heard something rustling in the bushes near them, Chen approached carefully then saw two timber wolves about to attack as chen was about to throw his hammer he felt something inside him stopping him from attacking, then he stopped and glared at the timber wolves deeply and calmly, after a few seconds the wolves calmed down and acquired more power, as Chen felt what happened he knew that he had acquired a new ability to persuade some enemies to good.

Chapter 3 - The War

Chen and Pandaren charged into the ghouls but stopped as they felt fear , Pandaren felt a Ring of Blades tearing apart his flesh then panicked drawing the bottle of beer from his bag and waving it everywhere until it crashed into a shadow then Pandaren calmed down and slammed the shadow quickly, as Chen saw it he couldn't move he wanted to help but fear striked his heart he finally got the motivation to move as he remembered his talk with Hextar, then Chen charged into the shadow but passed through clearly then his newly acquired companions charged into the shadow and hit him, Chen discovered how to finally defeat the Shadow, he shouted "Pandaren!! Its the Specter the mid part of his body!" Pandaren gained much confidence but still couldn't beat it, Pandaren was greatly injured but again trembled in fear as he remembered what happened to himself then he raised his arm as he channels energy and a great healing force gave pandaren strength, he channeled another spell waving his arm and the Specter slew down and Pandaren smashed bottles of beer and hit quickly faster and faster with every hit accompanied by the help of Chen's wolves, the Specter finally disappeared and greatly exhausted they finally went back to the base camp to report the incident.

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The end , cant think of something to continue it, pretty bad aint it?

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Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 11:41 pm

quite a concice story but for the effort i give you 8/10.
yeah you're right constantine owns this section. he's good in making stories.

yours is actually good so dont pull yourself down bro.. hehehe.
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 12:44 pm

that was a freakishly long first sentence... ^_^ good story though...
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 2:08 am

Good story...... I didn't read it all though..... What happened to the spectre when he was gonna kill chen???? I'm curious.... But it won't kill me...
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 3:35 pm

ummm. Well Chen is miraculously saved. Then some wierdo(plz do not mind me) cames(name is hextar) and tells Chen blahblah. and etc.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 3:36 pm

ummm. Well Chen is miraculously saved. Then some wierdo(plz do not mind me) cames(name is hextar) and tells Chen blahblah. and etc.
Actually pretty good. But constantine rules fan-fic like you said. I hope to equal him one day.
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