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Jocafer™

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a simple tribute to our literary legends: ch15 added!

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 1:04 pm

i know its been a while now after halloween. this is just an idea i made. implications stated here are entirely fictional. anyway this is just just to give you guys an idea though this is not supposed to be continued, unless i had the time.

This is entirely new so please no rash comments. Very Happy

-CHAPTER 1-

"Who the hell are you?!", asks a man to a stranger right beside him. He was a bit surprised by the sudden commotion. He was a bit tall, blonde and slightly thin. He had the usual urban setting.

"You should've asked where we are...", replied the stranger. He stared blankly at the brown plainfield in front of them. He was mysterious, with hair flowing down his left eye as dark as the night's sky. He had such deep eyes and his eyebags vividly shown through his hair. He was short but serious.

"And who may you guys be? huh??", the tall blonde man asked the two other guys staring to the same direction to the plainfield as the mysterious man beside him. One was a bit short, slightly formal and casual with an expression gratifying ridicule. He enjoyingly darted around. The other one was tall, buffed and fit. He was darker than the rest of the three but had the lightest eyes, he seemed to be awed in the glorious spectacle of wide land. Miles away, all but pure plains.

"Willy. Nice to meet ya.", said the casual man as he introduced himself to the blonde, formally shaking a hand with a smile. He darted around more, walking away from the three men. He seemed awfully curious.

"Wow...". It was all the dark, buffed man could say for now. He kept staring at the plains. The mysterious man near the blonde kept his silence too.

"We should be worrying why we are here! This is just like one of those twilight zone episodes you see on t.v., only scarier! There's nobody in sight!! We're in deep sh*t man...", said the blonde in a hurried panic.

"No, actually not", the dark, buffed man couldn't contain himself. "Wow, this looks like one of the places in my stories.Cool.". He attracted the myterious guy's attention.

"I'm Joe, by the way...", added the dark buffed man.

"I'm Dan. What do you mean, stories ?", the mysterious man introduced himself also. He seemed intrigued by this.

"Nah it's not really much. Just a about a game. It's called DoTA. Got hooked on the website, Dotastrategy. Anyway, you guys wouldn't understand. It's just a story I wrote there.", Joe said.

"Gunslinger...", A thought escaped Dan's mind.

"HOW THE H*LL?!--", Joe had to blurt out. "How the h*ll do you know my account name?"

"Razorfane is pleased to meet you...", said Dan, still silent and mysterious in his presence. He looked far away. On the other hand Joe was shocked. A bit excited, but shocked. He was sitting next to his idol.

"F*CK!!!", the blonde man shouted aloud.

"What??", Razorfane and Gunslinger both asked the blonde.

"...Flameseeker...", he said, eyes wide open.

-CHAPTER 2-

"Cool. Just utterly cool!", said Willy as he got back to the three writers. After he knew, he could not help but introduce himself. Now the four guys could not help but talk to each other. Being stuck in an empty plainfield, there was nothing to do anyway.

"Its me, AMCDotaAddict!", Willy introduced himself.

"Haha, as ridiculous as your hilarious stories were! Hahaha", quoted Gunslinger. "Seriously dude, your hits are classic material, but what's with the coat and clean cut??"

"Great...just great. People who just know each other in the net trapped in this barren wasteland. Now I'm stuck in this f*cking reunion.", Flameseeker was a bit sarcastic. All of this didn't feel well, not at all. He sat down away from the three.

"This is so cool!", AMC said to Gunslinger and the rest. "This place is like DoTA scenario. Maybe we'll meet guys like Sandking here eh? Meet babes like Luna?? Hahaha", he joked.

"Yeah!", added Gunslinger. The two laughed.

"This is not funny, nor cool...", said Razorfane.

Everyone went silent.

"Think. We do not know where we are, maybe except Gunslinger. And we are stuck here together. Do you know what that means?", asked Razorfane. Serious, as always. Flameseeker had to hear this, he went closer.

"What?", asked Gunslinger.

"Think. What do we all have in common?..."

"We wrote stories.", Razorfane finally said. "Gunslinger, if you told me you remember this in one of your stories. Maybe we are in your story. But, why the rest of us?"

-CHAPTER 3-

The plainfield turned dark. Afternoon developed. The clouds cleared. The four men lay in a circle, talking about the dilemma. AMC turned serious. Something is really up.

"Wait, I remember this place too. I must have posted a story about it", said Flameseeker, looking at Razorfane's eye.

"Yes, I remember one of mine too...", said Razorfane, a bit flabergasted by what he said earlier.

"WAIT! then that means...", Gunslinger turns silent. Razorfane and Flameseeker turned their eyes to AMC. Gunslinger stared at him too.

"What??? Sooo maybe I've made one too. But I didn't post it. I went for comedy, duh.", AMC replied.

"Then we must be stuck in either a story from one of us...", Razorfane said.

"Cool!", AMC exclaimed.

"No, not cool", said Flameseeker.

"Exactly", added Razorfane. "AMC, we don't know what we are up against. People die in most of our stories. Heroes kill each other. Better if yours wasn't as gruesome as ours."

"If we die in here..."

"...we die."

WHAT DO YOU GUYS THINK ABOUT THIS STORY?
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Last edited by Jocafer™ on Sun Nov 23, 2008 10:33 pm; edited 5 times in total

a simple tribute to our literary legends: ch15 added!

a simple tribute to our literary legends: ch15 added!

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