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dotachampion21


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The start of Rexxars journey......

Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 7:27 am

Introduction- Misha, i miss you!

"Ah, what sadness" muttered Rexxar, sitting on a rock overlooking a vast river."Giving Misha to Syllabear was a tough decision...it's all for the best, those two have alot in common, they deserve each other".

Just as Rexxar was about to doze off, he heard and felt a breeze of unusual strength in the bushes to his right. "SHOW YOURSELF!" shouted Rexxar as he threw his twin axes with brute force in a boomerang fashion. The axes twirled and cut the bushes in half, spinning as fast as the eye can see.
"Don't be too hasty orc, it us just us." said two voices from behind him. "Rhasta, Treant, what are you guys doing here?" questioned Rexxar as he caught his axes that spun back quietly.
Rhasta, always crouched, stood up and said"We are in great need of your help" "Yes, we need some help in the northern side of this land" said the large oaken like tree. "A battalion of scourge scoundrels are terrorizing the tiny little goblins in their quiet village". "Why do you need me?" asked Rexxar with a big question mark in his mind.
"We need to create a band of willing trustworthy warriors to help us defend the outskirts of this land".
Rhasta continued"The Scourge have already been recruiting their warriors from other part of this world. They want to get to the world tree again and try to destroy it, given they have the right powers to do it!"
"THEY HAVE THE POWERS OF THE LICH KING" shouted a figure that appeared right before their eyes.It was Gondar, a famous bounty hunter known for his eyes in tracking. "I have been scouting that Lycanthropy for days, finally finding what secrets those scourge dogs hold.
It is the lich king, he is back in the form of a pile of armour stuck in a throne of ice!". "A pile of armour??" asked Rexxar "what can a pile of frozen armour do to us?". "It is not the armour that gives them power" shouting Gondar as he slaps Rexxar in the face
"LISTEN!!, it is not the armour that gives them their power, it's Ner'zhul. It is his soul within the throne that gives them strength. He is back, THE LICH KING IS BACK!!"






Well, my first ever fanfic, don't know if its good or anything, coming up with chapter two in a while Bleh!
Since this is the introduction, it is quite short, but i will make chapter 1, 2 ,3 etc longer......Is my intro ok?
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edward_63426


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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:18 am

continue please>>>
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:38 am

this chapter is very short. Make it longer, then start another chapter
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:49 am

yes, please continue, very interesting
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shazzam66


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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 12:02 pm

its not bad

but Constanine owns

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dotachampion21


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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 12:07 pm

shazzam66 wrote:
its not bad

but Constanine owns

=]
haha guyz, this just introduction
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shazzam66


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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 12:15 pm

okay

lets see more

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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:03 pm

Chapter one- Templar's special secret

Journeying through the land, the three warriors were in search of heroes to help them fight Ner'zhul. Bounty Hunter was back on his trail to find more clues about what other secrets the relentless scourge hold.
They stopped by an inn, to ask for direction, when they heard a conversation about some special kinds of assassins thats protects the people of their village.
" Templars!" said the inn keeper "were a group of assassins trained in a way of meditation" "Melding.." said a voice behind the door
"is a way of meditation, staying in one spot, unable to move, constantly being invisible to the naked eye. Upon breaking the invisibility, the power from inside the Templar's mind would burst and create excruciating pain to the target so it would pierce through their armour until it reaches into the very inside of their limbs"
" That voice, I have a feeling I've heard that voice before" whispered Rexxar to his two companions. " It's, its..... Raigor!". The big tauren dropped his totem and ran to greet his old friend. " Lok'tar Ogar Rexxar! How have you been?". "I have been fine brother, you left the Horde for what reason?". Raigor replied " there have lots of mysterious events
throughout the land, Im told, so i decided to try and find it's source."
" Ah!, you are welcome to join us! But who is this Templar you speak of, Raigor?" asked Rexxar. " Lanaya, the most sacred of them all, has been trying to protect the outskirts of our land, but has not returned in a few months, and if we are to beat the lich, she will serve as a great ally."
" A great ally? why? what does she posses that we don't?". Raigor sat down and grabbed an ale and spoke in a formal manner. " She has this ability to place this magical wards which slows people's minds and makes them vulnerable to attacks, she also has the ability to become invunerable to anyone's strikes an blows for a certain number of hits. And most of all, he possesses a mystical blade only destined for her use." "And what would that be, my friend?". "The Lothar's edge" muttered Raigor. " The Loathar's Edge? but that has only one ability which SHE ALREADY POSSESSES. what could she possibly do with a second invisibility??" shouted Rexxar. "CALM DOWN!". Raigor continued "this blade had been used by the ancients warriors of the scourge. The Shadow Fiend and Witch Doctor were the last two warriors to use it to its fullest potential, but Lanaya had a certainty that she was the person to perfect its usage. She explained to us weeks ago that if she had the power of her meld, mixed with the power of the blades invisibility, it calmed her mind and she was able to meld while being able to move freely. That would have helped her hunt down the two beings wanting that blade back! The Shadow fiend and Witch Doctor!"
"Well, lets go, we have to find her! Can you get anyone her in the village to help us in our expedition?" Raigor replied " Yes, the goblin techies ,Tinker and Rattletrap has moved here after their village's destruction. Let us get rest an be up by Sunrise tomorrow!"

The next day.........................
"REXXAR, WAKE UP, ONE OF THE HOUSES WHERE RANSACKED BY GHOULS!"
(In the house) " I believe these are the creations of that evil Shadow Fiend". Raigor said,( holding up a skull of an ugly ghoul). I believe this is gonna get worse Mon', we better get moving before these guys strike again" Jutted Rhasta. " We are ready, we plated about two thousand mines around the village, be careful, dont step on our creation. We cant use the big boys since they last for only a short while before exploding under our command" Said two little creatures carrying a sack of bombs, mines and other explosive related stuff. "We have to move now, or ill be really angry" said another little goblin, this time carrying a robotic backback that has the power to shoot lasers, electric pulses and rockets" " Lets go! " Shouted Rattletrap, restlessly rolling into the outskirts of the viallage. Rexxar, walking with a new formed group, staggered and said
" If our might does not help us win this war, we will die knowing we tried........"

Well, chapter one. Doing chapter two in a few days. busy with my baseball and school. comment how you like it and i'll get back to you. any questions, any characters you want to request to add, feel free to PM me whenever. Gud Night!
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:06 pm

sorry guys if chapter 1 is really short, am pressured with time. this weekend i will be able to make chapter two thrice as long, since after my baseball practice i am free to do as i please. ill dota then continue this.....
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:28 pm

shazzam66 wrote:
its not bad

but Constanine owns

=]


he copy pasted his stories if you havent know =/

he never wrote his own stories
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 2:01 pm

Nice, since you put the time and effort for the people on this site to read and enjoy. nice story.

BTW, rexxar better own xD

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