The Rise of The Invoker

The Rise of The Invoker

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:29 am

The Rise of The Invoker
It was a lovely morning. The trees were full of life, the sky perfect blue. The Elite of Sentinel were just about to wake up. They were quite happy after they slayed Mogul Khan,the axe. The Elite had Rhasta,Juggernaut,Purist Thunderwrath,The Goblin Techies and their leader was Zeus, The Lord of Olympia.

They were having their breakfast, speaking merrily, talking about how they slayed the Axe. But their faces turned pale when Zeus read a letter he had just received from an unknown creature. The letter said : "Prepare yourself Sentinel, for the Undead are going to strike a lethal blow. By killing Mogul Khan you have underestimated our power. Prepare for Kael is back...
The Lich King ."

The name of the Invoker was enough to send a shock through their spines. They couldn't even murmur for a moment. All their hopes were now starting to fade away. They knew him very well. How he killed when he allied with Sand King? How brutally he killed Puck?

Immediately, Zeus roared,"We cannot waste any more time. We need a good strategy. Who knows what we think may be true?".
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Back at Scourge The Lich King was talking to Balanar, his Chief Commander, about Kael. They both agreed to send Crixalis with Kael. They knew how deadly the combination was.
They knew Kael's presence was enough to drive the Elite back to their Fountain.
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:43 am

very nice (:
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:45 am

o.0 i found that zeus is quite common in fanfic, but no big deal
good story! keep up the good work
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thanks shise!

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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:02 pm

good, just that, i think it would be better to say Squee and Spleen then the goblin technies.
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The Rise of the Invoker #2

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:16 pm

The Rise of the Invoker #2

The Elite was ready. It was time to confront the Scourge. After the much needed training they were confident about facing Kael. To them his most powerful attack was his Ice Wall, with which he trapped the heroes with the Mighty Roshan and killed them all, although it was not known that if Kael had the Aegis.

The Elite was now on its way to Scourge. They came to the dark forests where they heard an eerie noise. No one was to be seen but still they felt a presence. They were right. It was Mortred, the Phantom Assassin, with her blur.

Mortred had come to keep a watch on The Elite and ran back to the Lich King and informed him of the happenings. Lich was ready. He ordered Dirge and his own dragon, Viper to fight them.

On their way, The Elite killed many creeps. They were extremely tired.
Suddenly Juggernaut felt an immense poison shot in his back and then his soul seemed to be ripped. He was paralyzed. His healing ward fell to the ground. Viper was too fast for them. His poison paralyzed them all, until Viper was struck with Zeus' lightning. Viper tried to run away Rhasta's serpents came up and burned him to death. Dirge was now nowhere to be seen.

Exhausted and poisoned, The Elite couldn't fight another creep wave. They ran and hid in the forest.

Meanwhile Dirge came back to the Scourge. Lich was furious over Dirge's leaving Viper in the midst of attack. His eyes showed his wrath. He roared,"There's no place for those who cannot fight for their allies in the battle. I demand your death, Dirge."
Dirge begged for mercy, but the Lich was not merciful. He ordered Balanar and told him to kill Dirge. Dirge escaped and entered the forest. But it was night and no one escapes the Hunter In the Night(Balanar). Balanar found him and slit his throat.
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 7:36 pm

a pretty simple one, well atleast im happy tht newbies are comin to try makin fan fics, this forum is gettin active
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 7:37 pm

Nice story, but descriptions and all are a bit too short.
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 7:55 pm

like the above said, the descriptions are a bit short, but this story is quite nice

simple and pretty straight forward, keep writing more!
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Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 12:49 pm

oh this story sounds weird...

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Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 1:12 pm

nice! continue dat!
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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:03 am

nice story keep it up :P
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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:08 am

.............i like this story caus eof invoker

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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:09 am

i read the opening then stopped, you just trow out info ease the reader into the situation with more detail.
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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:16 am

i'm sleepy..harhar. i will read it later..
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:06 am

totally awesome

continue it

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