Grief

Grief

Posted on Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:21 pm

Epitah 1
As the pain worsens every second i keep fighting on ,because I was taught, to never give up. I still remember how he taught me step by step, what to do , how to do it and most important of all why do we do it. The truth is ,I never understood it, till this moment. I know what he meant and why he trained me as hard as he did.
Suddenly I feel something weird something unbelievable. My wounds started to heal themselves bit by bit, till they completely recovered. If it was not possible I would think that he still was watching over me ,but that just can not be possible. Nobody could survive that much destruction,
As my wounds heal, my speed recovers, I have not been in a civilization for quite a long time .When I started to get closer I heard a sound that I have not heard for a long time. I heard laughter– a smalls child laughter. It is weird since I have never had a sudden urge to laugh as some other my age had. Suddenly a young small girl with pigtails approached and said „ Hello funny creature .My name is Fiona . What is yours?“I coughed and said in a calm voice „I am called Krals“. Something scared the girl off. As I observed the village I found 1 building that I was interested in. I set my eyes on the tavern and I was about to enter, but a band of thugs surrounded me. „Stay back , last warning“ I said and observed, I counted 6 thugs. I knew exactly what to do in that kind of situation.
As the thugs started closing in on me, I reached to the darkness in my heart and let a wave of darkness around me. When the spell was finished , all the thugs were down. The lucky ones are unconscious , other dead. I entered the tavern and went to the bar and sat down. What a day I thought to myself.
Epitah 2
As I was enjoying some refreshing drinks ,I felt all the eyes staring at me. Well I can not blame them. Murlocks were believed to be extinct after Thrall and his troops crashed on Kalimdor.
But the lucky ones got away and went into hiding. I was still small when it happened ,but that is when my journey began. I gave the bartender a generous tip and left the tavern and decided to find some rest in the local inn. Which was quite impressive for a small village. I have not have had a soft bed for years. I slowly fell asleep.

“Run Krals, Run. “The nagas are here, quick , go hide behind that tree. As the 4 naga royal guards and the largest naga of the pack approached my uncle. I was terrified, I am not a coward, but god damn it that beast was out of this world. But my uncle seemed untouched by the royal guard and their leader. Most of the nagas and even some of the murlocks joined Illidans army or well cult in my opinion. Since that time they have been trying to expand their ranks by any means. Basically it was join or die. The large naga beast raised his mace and “What is your decision, shrimpy?”
“Let me think about it” said my uncle and then answered “NO”. Suddenly my uncle started to grow, he grew 10 times is old size and grabbed his old , used but still razor sharp pointy sword and sliced and diced the big naga, and 3 other royal guards, to the last naga he said “LEAVE US ALONE.”
And the naga sprinted out of sight. As he returned to his normal size he waved that it is safe to come out.
I woke up. I started wondering to myself “Was it a dream or a memory?”

Last edited by batmees on Thu Jan 21, 2010 10:13 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Posted on Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:00 am

I'm still wondering which hero that is
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Posted on Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:08 am

Maybe murloc? The grammar is a bit off and the story a tad vague but I didnt hate it
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Posted on Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:31 am

Definately Slark, Krals spelt backwards is Slark and his abilities are hinted: his first skill and his ulti.
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Posted on Thu Jan 21, 2010 4:16 am

^smart. But I wonder how a band of thugs wasn't mystified when they saw a murloc in a human town, or maybe krals was a human before he transform into a murloc. Keep writing more is what we want
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Posted on Thu Jan 21, 2010 4:22 am

quite a nice story...
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Posted on Sat Jan 23, 2010 3:45 pm

ok.. I don't really hate it but i don't really like it either, but just keep posting more and try to improve your punctuation and grammar.
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Posted on Sat Jan 23, 2010 3:47 pm

im imp[ressed, continue please
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Posted on Sat Jan 23, 2010 3:56 pm

What the heck is this crap? Is this a sequel t0 shrek or s0mething?
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Posted on Sat Jan 23, 2010 3:59 pm

be nice?instead of saying something crap,why not give them advices?
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