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bad 66% [ 2 ]


just right 33% [ 1 ]

this is my dream hero

Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 5:00 pm

te'bisrah - the crypt lord

the apprentice of anub'arak whose train with him for almost all of his life he dedicated to anub'arak and follow his footsteps and now his training is finish he battle with the scourge to the war of the scourge and the sentinel through his own self



te'bisrah - the crypt lord
Range: 140 | Move Speed: 280
Primary: AGI
Str: 19 + 5 | Agi: 25 + .25 | Int: 18 + 2
Damage: 50 - 52 | HP: 511 | Mana: 234
HP Regen: 0.82 | Mana Regen: 0.73
Attack Speed: 1.50 | Armor: 5

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impale (e)
Slams the ground with massive claws, shooting spiked tendrils out in a straight line, dealing damage and hurling enemy ground units into the air in their wake.
Level 1 - Level 1 - 80 damage, .75 second stun.
Level 2 - Level 2 - 160 damage, 1.25 second stun.
Level 3 - Level 3 - 230 damage, 1.75 second stun.
Level 4 - Level 4 - 300 damage, 2.25 second stun.
Mana Cost: 95/ 115/ 135/ 155
Cooldown: 8
Framework: just like anub arak's impale
Notes: good for align hero and for some reasons good for farming to


Spiked Carapace (D)
The crypt lord forms barbed layers of chitinous armor that increases its defense and returns damage to enemy melee attackers.
Level 1 - Level 1 - 10% damage returned, 2 bonus armor.
Level 2 - Level 2 - 20% damage returned, 4 bonus armor.
Level 3 - Level 3 - 30% damage returned, 6 bonus armor.
Level 4 - Level 4 - 40% damage returned, 8 bonus armor.
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Framework: Spiked Carpace on the crypt lord
Notes: Stacks with blade mail


locust swarm (R)
The crypt lord calls forth his swarms to attack his enemies. Each swarm has 20-38 normal damage each locust has a life steal effect and when returns to you the damage they inflicted to the enemies that will heal to you. Lasts 30 seconds.
Level 1 - Summon 7 swarms
Level 2 - Summon 12 swarms
Level 3 - Summon 17 swarms
Level 4 - Summon 22 swarms
nice for farming
Mana Cost: 200 Mana
Cooldown: 35 seconds
Framework: a bat swarm like but it is tinier than the bat swarm
Notes: the locust randomly attacks enemies and has a violet trail on it


poison sting3 (t)
Because for some reasons the crypt lord using the poison released by the corpses and because of that he uses it as his advantage on his enemies and after killing the enemy with poison sting a zombie will arise and you can control it and if a hero kills by poison sting a bunch of ghouls will a rise Lasts 5 seconds.The units will last for 30 seconds and it is unarmored.
Level 1 - Deals 10 damage per second and slows movement speed by 30%.and 1 zombie will arise and if hero is killed by it 3 ghouls will arise
Level 2 - Deals 15 damage per second and slows movement speed by 40%.and 2 zombie will arise and if hero is killed by it 4 ghouls will arise
Level 3 - Deals 20 damage per second and slows movement speed by 50%.and 3 zombie will arise and if hero is killed by it 5 ghouls will arise
Level 4 - Deals 25 damage per second and slows movement speed by 55%.and 4 zombie will arise and if hero is killed by it 6 ghouls will arise

good for chasing
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Framework: just like for naix poison sting but doesn't stack with eye of skadi
Notes: a good combo for his locust swarm and good for farming

hope you'll like it
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 6:14 pm

Some tips:
1. Creativity/Originality:
You just grabbed 2 of anub'arak's skills, you know. Best to try creating a skill which you can call your own. Just rememmber to check your original skills power with skills that do similar things, and balance it.
2. stats:
I advise from refraining to use to big a number, like 5. and also, average total for stat gains is 6.2, give or take depending on hero.
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 3:33 am

oh gets ko na
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 4:35 am

Yeah creativity..
Well but i think it's not IMBA...
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 9:49 am

so uhm how would he look like? some skills must be changed to make it original...
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:00 am

Get more creativity. Locust Swarm is quite overpowered, 22 swarms are too many.

Agi hero with a .25 agi gain? Not good. He isn't a strength hero, and he has 5 str gain.

Rating: 5/10

Needs lots of tune-ups. Lots of it.
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 1:11 pm

ahh ok but were i can get some images and how to put some images
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 12:26 am

uhhhh... originality more plz 6/10
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 5:29 am

how to put..

[img]put URL here[/img]

Where?

dunno??
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 12:56 pm

ty
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:19 pm

you can use your avatar as its icon:

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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 5:25 pm

nyeheheheh!!

i heard of this hero b4.. just cant remember where..,
or maybe i jst hit my head again...
cant.. remember...




hehehe!!
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